Alone AR sci-fi (PART 1 ON PAGE 2)

hey guys for the first time posting any AR sci fi here..plz tell me how it is?


Far far away from milkiway galaxy there is another one named
ginis(imaginary) ..is glaxy mein minimum 362 planet hai but in mein se ek
planet hai..planet no. 321...dekhne mein baki sab planet se thoda alag
hai...yaha pe sabkuch earth ki tarah hai...temparature bhi bearable
hai...kuch 2nd class life form bhi hai...but sabse important baat yaha
pe insaan hai..sirf ek insaan hai uska naam hai armaan..woh aur use
palne wala robot triniti..armaan akele bada hua hai so jahir si baat hai
ke woh insaan ki tarah behave nahi kar payega..but woh fully ek manered
insaan hai thanks to trinity..woh freely jina cahta hai but trinity use
kehta hai ke use insaan ki tarah baanna hoga..unki tarah sochna
hoga...earth ke barein mein sochna hoga...armaan trinity se puchta hai
iska faida kya hoga?..trinity just answered this is important because if
he doesn't behave like men then when men comes in this planet toh use
dekhke dar na jaye...isikiye use insaan ki tarah use behave karna sikhna
hoga but armaan ko pata hai ke uski zindagi is 2 sun ke planet mein hi
khatam ho jayega...insaan yaha kabhi nahi ayenge...kabhi bhi nahi...

I am very happy... You started your sci-fi on IF also... And I'll definitely follow "ALONE" here ... A different taste in fanfactions... 😊
Awesome one!!! ❤️ 😊 😃

Interesting. ..

Bhai u post it here...wowww i'm sooo happyyy
priyu

Alone ke post ko alone mat chodo... Kam se kam alone ko or alone mat rehne do...

it seems like sum1 has forgotten about this story of his??!!
aisa hain kya??
bhai... post nxt part,na???

Part 1
Armaan was sitting in a red rock
and looking at the sky.here the
sky is bluish but not blue it some
times gives colour of clear
glass.Earth's sky is blue..deep
blue..armaan never saw earth but
he knows all..triniti told
him..triniti ne use aur bhi bohot
kuch bataya..earth ke blue sky
par charo taraf white cloud float
karte rehte hai..kabhi kabhi woh
badal ek sath ho jate hai tab
asmaan par badal garajte
hai..pura asmaan ko hilakar
barish ate hain..bohot lambe
samay tak kabhi yeh barish ho ta
hai..us barish se janam leta hai
tree..trinity ne use bataya ke
earth ke tree ka rang green ho ta
hai..deep green..all that green
tree with some really beautifull
flower is a treat to watch..trinity
ko sab pata hai..kyunki use earth
par taiar kia gaya tha uski
memory pe earth ki sab batein
recorded hai..trinity kuck kuch
batein armaan ko bata ta
hain..armaan sun na nahi cahta
but phir bhi use sun na padta
hai..armaan ek insaan hai..insaan
ke janam hua hai earth pe..isiliye
insaan ko earth ke barein mein
pata ho na cahiye..uski barein
mein sochna cahiye isiliye
armaan earth ke barein mein
sochta hai..woh sochna nahi
cahta hai but phir bhi use sochna
padta hai..trinity ne kaha hai ke
use sochna hoga..earth ke barein
mein sochna hoga..insaano ke
barein mein soch na hoga..tab hi
woh ek real insaan ban
sakega...use real insaan ban na
hoga taki jab insaan yaha aye aur
use dekhe tab use dekhke dar na
jaye..use dekhke chik na uthe...
Ek samay tha jab armaan yeh sab
par yakin karta tha woh sochta
tha ke ekdin uski insaano ke sath
mulakat hoga...woh unhe kya kya
bolenge yeh bhi woh pehle se
decide karke rakha tha..but
insaano ke sath uski mulakat ka
sapna..sapna hi reh
gaya...insaano ke sath uski
mulakat kabhi nahi hua...armaan
ko pata hai ke uski insaano ke
sath kabhi bhi mulakat nahi
hoga...glass colour ki planet ki
bluish asmaan ko dekhte dekhte
hi uski zindagi khatam ho
jayega..do suraj ke is planet pe
insaan kabhi laut ke nahi
ayenge ..kabhi bhi nahi..kabhi bhi
nahi..
Armaan turned to other side in
his lazy sleep or waking
game ...armaan's body colour is
like a shining gold...his deep
black hair which is like the colour
of night...his superbly fit body..his
body which is full of mussels..his
board chest..long body..dimpled
smile..earth ki asmaan ki tarah
blue eye..jise dekhte hi kho jane
ko man karta hai...trhnity ne use
bataya he ke he is very very
beautifull agar woh earth pe
hota toh waha ke girls use
dekhne ke liye line kaga
dete...and he is very handsome
too...armaan ko yeh sab samaz
nahi ata hai...is large space ki ek
corner ke ek galaxy ke ek planet
mein rehne wala ek lonely insaan
ke liye khubsurati ke koi
meaning nahi hai...
Armaan is lying in the bluish
sand ..trinity use mana karta hai
yaha sone ko..kyunki it's not safe
armaan uski sath behes karta
hai..lekin phir bhi woh uski baat
sunta hai..kyunki is planet mein
uske alawa baat karne ka koi
nahi hai..
Armaan dur ke blue mountains
ko dekhta hai ..woh sab
mountains me se kai mountain
volcano hai..jab woh volcano se
lava ata hai toh lagta hai ke pura
dunia tehes nes kar
dalega..trinity ne use bataya hai
ke agar yeh earth hota toh un
mountains ke upar ice hota..yeh
earth nahi hai isiliye un
mountains ke upar ice nahi
hai..this planet is not earth but
armaan ke liye yeh hi earth hai
jaha trinity ne use bada kya hai...

Originally posted by: --Orchids--

it seems like sum1 has forgotten about this story of his??!!
aisa hain kya??
bhai... post nxt part,na???

sorry 4 the delay di..check part 1 please

Originally posted by: --Orchids--

<font color="#006600" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">yieeppiieee...!!!!!

1st one to comment.. 😆😆

i'm so so sooo happy lill brother dat u r string writing here.. 👏👏
i'll definitely follow ds story here..
this is gonna be d 1st sci-fi FF i'll read..
so, looking forward for new experience lill brother..😊😊

tke care bhai..
nd update super soon..😆😆

luv,
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thanks for your comment di love you