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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

I'm glad you do not procrastinate
Quite frankly I do not see how Swayam is gonna fall for Sharon.Its clear that he is moving on but it feels like he's settling into a comfortable limbo and I can't quite picture him making that leap again.
I'm happy that Sharon is not going to mope around about it though,attagirl😃
Simmi is the most delightful and unexplored character on the show so I'm thankful to you.Needless to say I love this chick.
Poor Swayam is really getting punched relentlessly for his car😆
Really excited to see how you take this story forward.
Update thrice a week is cool.

Edited by austen4ever - 12 years ago

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disha

@disha15

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

edited reserve on first page

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Myra.

@Myra.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

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Kankks! The depiction and your thinking is mindblowing and as you might know putting what you think on a paper (Soft or hard) is a tough job! It is not a very common gift of such outstanding vocabulary and imagination.

First of all the best part was Sharon's personality depiction at the party. Showing her that she is an alcoholic typical tomboy like me (😉) and writing in words -- Mate you are A M A Z I N G!

Converses were greatly shown and Sharon's accent is so freaking cool man! The only this is you could actually make it in a little simpler words.. Next please!!

~PS - Sorry Im late. We had a school camping trip of 5 days so.. yeah!

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Sammy

Edited by EmaraldRockstar - 12 years ago

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sky_fighter

@sky_fighter

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

the best part that i have read so far. i just wish i was this free spirited as Sharon is but i guess only fictional characters have that quality.

i would like to give a special mention to the details u give about the cars, as me being a car person really enjoy that bit. i did not think of ford taurus to be a gay car but now i am also starting to think of it that way.

p.s, what is the scene in your display pic gif.

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

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Chapter-7

Awesome update..Simmi character was unexpected but i liked her as a integradient between SwaRon..Loved the bond of simmi and sharon..Their convo was good..Sharon was staring him..That was nice description of emotion of sharon after grave visit..Food talking was nice..They enjoyed a good time and loved the understanding of sharon..The update was beautifully written in sharon POV..So now,i am really interested for next chapter..Keep going..

Thanx for PM

Prateek

Edited by prateekdave7 - 12 years ago

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

kanks, i liked how sharon is starting to fall in love---and still she knows rhea's place in both of their lives.

and again---rhea is still watching over him----

simmi was delightful.

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

like it superb

nyc chpter

plz frnds jjoin cc n book mark

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/junoon-aisi-nafrat-toh-kaisa-ishq/3654878/i-dont-know-wt-to-do-cc-11

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

AWsummm... story... thnxx fr pm

sorry Im late... <3

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komal samdariya

@dazedworld

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

wow !!

awesome... super awesome...

loved it !!

awe poor swayam and his gay car !! lol

great update again... ty so much for the pm !

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#180

Ah, i loved this one! Well obviously because sharon's point of view is so 😳
And its turning ☺️ update by update 😆
Swayam poor soul, his car will run away one day on its own. Sharon was busy staring at him in the car too! Woosh.
Simmi n Sharon's bond! 😃 I adore them very much.
Then the food talking, sharon is loosing her heart but at the same time she is understanding swayam's state too. Then the hug it was comforting, short but impactful.

And Here I am again, too excited for the next one! 🤓
Keep it going 👍🏼
Well, i really loved the update!