SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Reserved,

I'll be giving combined review of all the missed chapters.

Sorry Dear, I am much consumed these days, as my counselling are f**king close and admission stuff is tiring.

Yes, the last time I mentioned that I am going to a college. =] Yes I reserved my seat in DU finally. So Because of it, i was not available for reading and commenting. Sorry!

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Varada

@damonTVDrocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Then it's Dean! Okay, I had that doubt since she was all sweet talking to her classic car... I just remembered dean while reading that n ur profile pic was too a SPN one then ( that 'carry on my wayward son' one) so I had that doubt but didn't bother to ask... I guess you too are a big fan of Dean n SPN...😳

I didn't expect Luna Lovegood though...😆

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

awesomeee update!!👏

luna lovegood s one of my favs😳as for dean i'vent watched supernatural so no idea😳

but lovingg this sharon😆

continue soon😊

waiting for d nxt part😳

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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Uh oh,its started,Sharon's falling for him😳.Dunno whether to be happy or sad about that.I like her so much and really don't want her to change😕
I love Luna Lovegood,she is one of the most brilliantly penned characters ever and you are so right,Sharon's quirks are a lot more fun in light of that.
I have liked all your Sharons but this one is a class apart.Here's why-

"I'm afraid you can explain why vegetarians should stop eating at all because the food they eat is no good."

Congratulations!

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aditi

@gupta.aditi20

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

hey
just read the last three chapters...
its superasome...
the story is very interesting... and one cant figure out which turn it would take...
i have already told you i love this sharon though i am quite unaware about supernatural and harrypotter thing... was never a harrpotter fan...
but still i would love to read the story...
good work..
keep it up
and sorry for commenting late... i was out of town

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Luna 😃 Dean 🤔
Lol kankshita is she is gonna behave like that than i am super excited for next two chapters 😆
This chapter was a feel good one, i felt positive! Sharon is givin me positive vibes 😳
But yeah it was nice to read sharon's story, she is wow, but has experienced alot, still she is headstrong.
Both of them are getting habitual of each other's presence n i like this gal, two beers 😎
And now she's falling for him too, great.

Fascinated i am 👏

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Un_reserved

Chapter-6

I like u'r observation to extract the idea of Sharon's character from u'r favorite fictional characters..i dont know about both of them..But i just loved the brilliant characterisation of Sharon..most amusing character for me and truly i enjoyed..Moving on with update..

I loved the way u described sharon POV here in this update..That was curious for me to know about sharon love life..And then i am surprised,she dreamed about swayam that night..!!! Just awesome..

Loved the covo of SwaRon regarding whole dinner part..That was too funny and enjoyable..So now i hope and i am sure, sharon falling for swayam..After all she dreamed about him..I am just waiting for next part..And i am very excited for that..

Hats off for u'r regular updating speed..Great..

And pls unreserve my previous comments on Page No.16,17

Thanx for PM

Prateek

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

This story is amazing.. i loved the concept.. the way u have potrayed the characters is beautiful.. I like the easy going Sharon here..!!

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Myra.

@Myra.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#159

And uff! Sharon's dad's entry! Their converse is simply muah! Sharon's reputation and her personality description was simple and up to point! (I really like you man!)

Sorry Kanks I am a night late for chapters and I think I will be busy but don't worry.. I will surely comment when ever I have time!

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Sammy

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Neel

@neeliyer

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#160

I haven't commented for a while, sorry fr that .. n abt the story its very vague to see were its heading or whats gonna happen next .. in other words it has the mystery of the real life n im loving it ..

Update soon..

PS: till last chapter i was able to relate sharon's character to luna .. bt in the last chapter sharon didn't sounded neither like luna nor like dean ..