virman ff :Do anjaane ajnaabi part14 page 32(21 december) - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Haww virman married. ...
Virat again insult manvi 😡
Plz plz update soon nd pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
wowww amazing post ... 👏👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Woah cnt believe they even got married
its gettin sooo interesting
excited to kno how virmans married life will be now
cnt wait for next part
continue soon plzzz 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
part 4

thnx for the feedbacks..

manvi move slwly slwly out of their room thnx to her heavy lahnga which mde a walk slow manvi move out but shut the door with noice at her back..tears fall from manvi's eyes...she ook up n saw va standing there with jeevika...manvi look at them..va n j look down...
m-khush to bht honge ap log...congrats ap logo ka kam ho gya ye shadi ho gai...or kya chahte h bta dijiye...
va(ears in her eyszS)manvi beta...
m-beta mt bolio...gali sound krta h ...(look other side)...mujhe koi milega..ya apni insult krwane dubara andr jao...
va close her eyes tightly n rush from there...j still standing there...
j-ao tumhe room dikha do...
manvi move behing her handling her lahnga...j took her to another room...just beside virat's room..manvi entr n scan room its simple and beautiful room..
j-tumhe kuch or chai hoto...
m-gud nyt(strn voice n xpressionless face)
j try to hold her tears ..cant see innocnet girl like this...she put her hand on her sholder-sb thk ho jaega...
m-u cn go...
j too went to her room...n sit on bed strted crying...viren come out of washrrom...n saw j crying rush to her...
vi-jeevika kya hua...
j-virenji(hugg him)manvi ko aise nhi dekh skti..
vi-ab kya hua..
j told vi evrything about hat happen n virman room-sb tk ho jaega...
on the other side..
manvi change her dress n lay on bed..n thinking about what destiny decided for her...

*flashback*
va-manvi i want u to get mariged to virat..
manvi was damn shoked look at va and then viren who is loking down...
m-anty ap kya kah ri h..mi virat sir se..noo...
va-pls beta mana mt krna...ek tum hi ho jo mere virat ko mujhe lauta skti hoo...
m-anty...apne socha b kaise mi apke sir phire bete k sath shadi krungi...never..
va-beta virat aisa nhi h jaisa tum smjh ri hoo...
m-achha abi jo dekha uske bad kuch smjhne layak h ..mere se jyada to ap apne bete apne to jante hoo..fir b...
va-manvi beta...
m-anty...ye umeed mujhse mt rkhiyga..jo ladka apne parivar ki izzat nhi krta...rat rat bhr ladkio k sth rahta h uske sath mi kbi shadi nhi krogi...(to vi) ap mujhe yaha isiliye ae the na jawab mill gya hoga..mi chlti hoo...
manvi went from there..va sit on chair..look continuusly at on spot..
vi-ma apne sun lia na...
va-ha..or mujhe ye b pta h use kaise raji krna h ...
va went to her room..n evryone else...
here manvi come to her house...n storm on her ebd n strted crying for virat's words n even va...
suddenly the door bell rings...manvi opn the door n shoked*
flashback ends*
manvi's alarm ring.*trinnnggg* manvi get up with jerk yes its all her dream but the fashback reality..she cear her swet from her forhead...lock at clok..its 7 ..vadhera's had brkfast at 8 ...she get up ..get ready wore a simple net red saree...but lyt makeup n simpled raring n mangle sutra with she dont want to wear...manvi mov to kitchn n make tea for evryone...n move out went crashh in someon n all cups fall down..she look at the person it was viraattt..😉

v-dekh k nhi chl skti...akhe kya apne low class ghr mi rkh k ai hoo..
m-vo.mi ..vo ..actuallu(scared with his loud voice)
evryone was on dinning tble n rush to them...
v-kya vo...sare kapde khrb kr diye...
vi-virat ye kya tareeka apni patni se bt krne ka...
v-bhai..apke liy ye meri biwi hogi but mere liy nhi...ek low cls ladki se jyda se jyada kuch nhi h ..manvi's tears fal from her eyes she rush to her roommm...
virat to move to his room...

guyzz sory for late ...but m very busy hardly get time ..so i updated sory for small n njoy...


precap-
virat slap manvi😭

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all shoked,,,,,😲
Edited by sakshivirmanian - 12 years ago
JESNIA thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
NICE UPDATE.
VIRAT IS SO CRUEL. I HATE HIM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Awesome yaar...
Pleasee continue soon...
Feel really sad for Manvi...
And thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
wow i didt know ur writing 3 stories...
but thks 4 the pm..
loved all the parts..u r making me addicted to all ur stories...
continue soonn
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
wow awesome update i just loved it to the core of my heart but I really felt sad for maanvi anyways it is totally superb.please do continue soon and thanks for the pm dear👏👏⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
niceee ye story main pehely bar pad rahi hu bt don,t mind manvi fall 4 viren 😒 😲🤣 ye kuch utpaata lagaaa viren n manvi ooo god kya soch rahi main aaa bishnu bishnu bishnu ... they looklike big brother n lil sister aaa bt it,s ok after all it,s ur story virman ki sadi nic bt virat hate mannu soo sad n wat that precav ... virat slap mannu no plzzz bt nic update 👍🏼 tx 4 pm me darlinggg
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
awesome update
poor maanvi
felt bad for her
virat is so rude
plz cont soon

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