Arhi FF~Dilbar Dilpar~*TH #4 Chap 32 p67 2/7

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

aww that was a wonderful update and a very romantic first date. The chapter started off with a frustrated Arnav and an extremely busy Khushi, I couldn't help but feel for Arnav but you created such a beautiful setting for the lovely couple that all bad feelings vanished, you made it happen so naturally first with Khushi's phone call to make up for not having any time for her Nannav and then the date. It was just beautiful I wonder what will Khushi do once she finds out who really was responsible for the fire the killed her parents. They also have the mess with Arnav's equation with his family that will need sorting, I am sure Arnav won't mention Khushi's real identity to his family as he knows the truth about them still can't help but feel a little scared for them, they have been through enough. You have never disappointed us with your updates so I am sure all will be well! Thanks heaps for the PM and being regular with your updates! Love your work!

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

like button not working as usual !! 😡

beautiful update... that was a very cute first date...loved their small cute romance...khushi needs to let herself go and breathe easy !!

she is too self conscious !!

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pooja

@sanluvug

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

beautiful
romantic update.love their first official date...
loving this couple more...song was beautiful n touching.
so cute when arnav is angry for kushi give importance to work...
i think arnav s family is d reason for kushi s parents death.
thanks for pm

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Mahi

@Mahi1219

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Awesome update!

PS: I'm on a long vacation and can't really write long comments, but I really want you to know that even the long comments I used to give cant describe how wonderful you write! I'm trying to tell you a few words but you have no idea how difficult it is! I have so much to say!