Taarey os: My love for you(Rasiya song)

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sreelakshmi

@sree689

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Thank u so much dear for this story...

Just luvd reading it...It was hot, sensuous,sizzling and what not...

I m short of words as well as breathe after reading it...

And yes ur first attempt at writing in first person is also nice and commendable...

Do write more

Best wishes...

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Fatima Faiq

@-Fam_TaaReY-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

OMG it's amazing 👏👏

superb 😳😳

and hot ☺️

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Alefiya Magar

@alef_mgr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Nithi yaar m blushing furiously 😳 Ufff tumne mera phone jala dia...😳 😳

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846182

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Nithi...

Well..

I have to say...

This OS was HAWT!!!

I loved it...

Superb writing...!!!

Please continue giving us more great works!!

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Sweetypie0234

@Sweetypie0234

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Woah this is amazing! Love the way you described every detail sooo well! Love it. I know i will never be able to know how difficult n how long it took u to write this. but i really really applaud u 4 all your efforts!

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Ishani

@.StarDust.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

OMG!! Di... It was hott!! N it's ur first time... u tried different wryting style..But.. It doesn'rt seem it's ur 1sr stime!! I loved it..😳

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Alexandrite91

@Alexandrite91

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Whoa!! Awesome OS 👏 That was super hot. I really like your battle of the brain and the heart. Its was very realistic. When we're in a fight, we sometimes find it difficult to accept that we're wrong because our logical side can't ignore somethings and our heart can't forget some things. Loved your thought process. Cool work

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anju101

@anju101

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

How I wish I could have read this sooner but this stupid websites wouldn't let me in. It was seriously intense and hot; yet it had so many emotions involved. And I like that you tried something different and definitely you did justice to it completely!!

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Sandisha Drepaul

@disha93

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

This is awesome!!!!!!!! Sooo romantic!!! ❤️ Niceee...☺️

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Nithi u did a outstanding job, omg it was perfectly written...
Taarey love for each other is timeless
Taani possessiveness and jealousy was awesome lol
Ahem Taani surely learn never to hurt her hubby again lol
Aggressive Rey was a mess lol
Mind blowing OS I Love it. It sooo romantic 😳

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