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Arshix144

@Arshix144

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Posted: 12 years ago

#301

I have one word for this whole chapter and that is INTENSE! Arnav and Khushi's conversations were so darn intense and electric that I don't even think I can describe in words. The way you have penned down their emotions and feelings made me feel like a spectator somewhere in the background witnessing the whole scene. What a strong finish to the chapter, Khushi said BAS and the impact of that Bas was so strong that it left me gasping. I love your Khushi, she can actually speak up for herself properly and that is such a breath of fresh air. For now there is an air of mystery what lies in the past and what is the reason for this strong hatred. I can't wait till Wednesday! Love your work!

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#302

Wow an awesome and a super intense update.

Hmmm so its all about politics in the show but was the prologue flashback or the present??????? 😕

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saavan_lover

@saavan_lover

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#303

Brilliant update Juhi! Loved it so much <3 I love the mystery thats there in this SS :) Keeps us all on the edge of our seats :) I cannot wait to find out what exactly happened 10 years ago.

Waiting for Wednesday to come!! :D

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arshi21

@arshi21

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#304

Love, Politics and Dhoka?

Ah! I love this.

Now now. This is impressive. Khushi ji is an IAS topper? She must be smart then. If not smarter than Arnav ji...then at least as smart as him. Let's see how that will shape up. Not that Khushi ever lacked spunk..but this is going to be fun!

So they have a history together? Of what? Why do they hate each other so much? And Why did Arnav back her into the wall like that? And why did she blasted him off and told him to never touch her again?

I am very curious to know what's going on..

By what the prologue suggested...maybe he would give their relationship a chance? And that's how she was feeling hopeful in the prologue?

Oh well..I am just guessing.

Cannot wait for this story to unfold! Waiting eagerly to read the next update Juhi!

Loved this one! :)

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733619

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#305

Wow wow. So intense. Really want to know what happened 10 years ago.

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sanjubanju

@sanjubanju

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#306

Awesome !!!! Simply loved it. 👏

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#307

I have to hand it out Perfection is the word for you..i could feel the simmering tension while reading chap 1...have to say cant wait until Wed..

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#308

That was an amazinggg update!!!

Two furious ppl together bounded with hatred n dark past
It can't get any Better

Amazinggg update!!!

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#309

Whoa! That was some update!

I cannot join the dots just as yet be it to the past or the future(int terms of the chap 1)

Its all a lill vague ... but will wait for the forthcoming chapters to give away bits till the events that occur in the prologue!

Its quite a beguiling start! and has no stone unturned to draw our complete attention ... i am really looking fwd to the next!! :)

Thanks Juhi! wonderful start!

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chits21

@chits21

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#310

Such an interesting story.enjoying it

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