ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread One* Completed

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Amrita

@Amti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Good to have you back...😊... Would love to read it.. Continue soon

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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Super interesting prologue.

But don't say it as last.

He & She has to be Arnav and Khushi because nobody other than them could have Dhak-Dhak!!

Did she hatred in those eyes whom she was about to give chance for the other emotion she was seeing there for last few days?

Her dreams shattered, heer heart in much deep..

And now it'll start from the start..

Amazing start and in cliffhangers ko main kya naam soon!!

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

congrats loads for this new one:) cant wait to read the first chapter!

this prologue was so beautifully written and it was all about a girl who wanted as very other girl on this earth, to see her dreams become true but wat her eyes has witnessed must have shattered her every existence to the core! i felt like crying while reading this! its so hard when one's dreams are shattered and even worst when its done when the person breaking them was the one u thought to be the guardian of those adhoore dreams:(

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

I got your PM and was so happy that you have started a new story... But when I came here my just found happiness got SHATTERED upon seeing your initial Author's note... your "last story" in IF for a while... Nahi... Nahi... 😭😭😭😭😭😭 I do understand that real life might get demanding... But please do try to continue hanging around here in IF... you are one amazing writer and we will miss you like hell...

With just the prologue, you have raised our expectations from this story a lot... So we have Sheetal here... I was longing to get a closure for Sheetal track with something that you would write and I am glad now...

Though you have not given any names on who the two protagonists were in the prologue, I am just hooked... Hooked would be too small a word to state my mind now... I am sure you are going to take us again for one mind blowing ride with SHATTERED

Waiting for Monday now...

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@debby_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

whoever she is...in respect to that lady IT HURTS...that was painful..but brilliant prolouge ...interesting

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Hey!

This seems interesting! :)

DO continue soon!

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Oh god
That left me shattered too
Cant wait to read more on all this

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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#228

Before jumping to conclusions wud wait fo u to unfold the story. . Bt felt disgusted at wat she saw nd felt bad fo who saw tat.. In my mind tat he n she was arnav nd khushi nd hence the above feelings. .
Bt who knws wts in store. .
Thanx fo d pm