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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aks13

Super duper update dr.


Rathod disturb their sweet
moments. Wht a timing!!!!!


HE HE HE HE lolll sam is always sam

Awww Riya blushed n not able to met his gaze.


Loved Rathod's concern for Riya.


Riya's dialogue about Arjun's mood swings was hilarious Lolll sahi to kaha ..ye arjun bhi naaa.


I really loved the moments when she explored his room n her
MV about Arjun n Roshini.


Arjun's Comment to
Riya about his shirt n her reaction on tht was lovely...!!!!!!


Their ahem… ahem… which made both of thm uncomfortable was
so cute...!!!!!


Ahum ahum..mujhe bhi kuch nahi kehana loll

Loved Choree convo n their fun moments.


Awww Choree n Rathod complemented her for her looks wheresa
Arjun was completely lost in her n staring her without blinking his eyes. Thts
so sweet...!!!!!


Loved their cute eye lock n Riya's dress. It's Vry beautiful
dr.


Loved Rathod's concern for Riya.


Doc's advise to Arjun in the end n his reaction on tht was
really hilarious 🤣.


Precap looks interesting.


Cant wait to read more as its going great.


Continue soon dr.




thanks anku for the sweet n lvly comment ...
wait tokerna padega loll
mere sedul pe depend kerta hai ...
time milega to likhongiii

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: umamah70

wow...

awesome...
loved it to bits...
loved ariyaromance...
uff aiktouariyako koina koidisturb kardeta hai...pehlayshreenay knock krdiyaabphone bajpara...
so finally shirt ki mystrysolve ho gai..
ariyaslept together ...so cute...
update soon...
thanks dr for the sweet comments n lolll ab kya karen charo taraf pyaar ke dushman...


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Originally posted by: Christeee

Riya ke privat clothes,so funny[DIV]Ariya's eyelock was so cute

doc ne kya bola,poor arjun🤣
continue soon


thanks dr for the comments...wil try
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Originally posted by: ..Sneha..

Lovely update! 😳

Awww.. Rathod disturbed our Ariya's romantic moment 😉
Haha.. Loved that mere 'private kapde' part 😆 And doc's advice to Arjun too! 😉 😆 Thanks dr for the lvly comments ...loll us part per koe baat ne kerne..kuch jayada hi private haiWaiting for the next update.





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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: krinal5chhayal

First of all congrats for the new threadThanks dr..
[DIV]Awesome updates😃

Love Arjun, Rathore and Choree's concern for Riya and
Ariya's baby

Rathore's absolutely right, Arjun can never change


Ariya's kiss got disturbed by the phone call

Poor Arjun's arm was aching as Riya slept on it the whole
night

Why did Arjun almost shout at Riya?

It's Riya who's pregnant but it's Arjun who has mood
swings

So finally Riya knows about the tattoo on Arjun's hand
with Roshni's name on it

So does Arjun still think that he's betraying Roshni or
that he still loves her?

OMG Arjun made coffee for everyone

The clothes that Arjun gave to Riya were really beautiful

Aww Arjun was lost in Riya when he saw Riya in the dress
that he gave her and Riya was also lost in him

When the doctor said 'dekhiya ehse waqt main... Mr Arjun
u hace to do full carefully... I mean don't put lot of pressure' was hilariousTHank u chahal for the lvly comments..
yes arjun rawte ke badane ke chance naaa...
yes all etf team care ariya n ariya baby..

will try to update soon


[DIV]Can't wait to read more

Update soon😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rashikhandelwal

Frst f al thanx fr pm ..,riya's dress was so beautiful luved the update bechara arjun ka hath ma dard ho gaya but its so cute update cnt soon eagerly watng fr nxt update ad ayesha's entry.


Uff dont warry dr ayesha ke entery bhi hogiii..per alag ways se...n thanks for the comments
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Originally posted by: Deepikz

nice updates<div></div>


thank u for the comments
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hunny1993

When will u update p ????? 😕


Just wait hunny..
not now...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dmegha

Awesome and brilliant update buddy!

Thanks for the PM.


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Originally posted by: tejaswini.253

amazing update dear

thanx fr d pm


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Originally posted by: Aamrit

Nice update,,,,,plz con't soon


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Originally posted by: Payal_156

Awesum di
u r an amazing writer
by reading ur stories
ariya remain in our hearts
u rock di
lovely..!!

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Originally posted by: pihu_angad

awesome..

continue soon..



Thanks all for the comments will try



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: umamah70

wow...

awesome update...
loved it to bits..
update soon...


thanks dr will try
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Originally posted by: Chocolate_barun

awesome again
riya was looking superb
doc told arjun not to put lot of pressure 🤣
waiting for next part
update soon
thanks for pm


thanks dr for the sweets comments..will try

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

Oh wow..
Loved the shirt romance..
Thanks god din mai padha ye.. Warna aapne toh kasam kha ke hi rakha hai ki mere nind haram karne ka..huh..
Bach gayi main..
Uff ye phone call , call nahi kaal hainn.romance mai ghanti..
Hmm sare team members wahi hai. Wah and riya arjun ke room main..lol
tabhi toh kamra new new lag raha hai..
Bt ye arjun ke mood swing ka kuch pata nahi chala..oo thts bcoz of rosh.
Loved tht part wen riya was observing the pics.
And the arjun came and then..rofling.
Ye ladki kab kya bolti hai kuch bharosa nahi..
And then chori. He he
coffee mai phir se drugs.
Wow she was in indian dress and rathod ke nazar se kuch nahi chuta..wah rathod..
Then hosp mai..
Kya doc, arjun ke izaat pe ..lol
pressure..he he he

precap interesting..wow


Thanks vampu for the comments..
he he he ..din mein pado ya raat mein its ur choise lolll
will try dr
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Posted: 12 years ago


PART=35

"Ye kaise nayee khaeshen..."


SCENCE-ARIYA HOUSE--
Ar-Riya ye achanaK tumhen kya ho gaya,
tumhen to bhook lagi the na,
.
Ri-ab nahi lagi hai,

Ar-Riya tumhari tabiyaat to thik hai or tumne doc se ehsa kyun kaha next time hum dhayan rakenge ,

Ri-(in angery mood,yelled on arjun)
to kya kehati mein,doc ko sab sach bata deti..
mere or aap ke bich ehsa kuch nahi hai.jaisa vo sonch rahi hai,
.
hum pati patani to hain ,per hamare bich pati,patani vala koe rishta nahi hai,
.
Ar-Riya ho kya gaya hai tumhen..tum janti ho ke mein roshani se pyaar kerta hoon or...
(or tum mere jine ke vajaha ho but not said)

.
Ri-haan mujhe achhe se pata hai,ke aap mujhe se pyaar nahi kerten..
hamara rishata sirf ek samjhota hain,
or aap jaise chahen aapni life jee sakten hai..
.
Before arjun could says..
She rushed inside her room n closed the door..
.
Talk to herself..
I know hamara rishta sirf ek samjhota hai,
or mujhe ye bhi pata hai,aapke dil mein mere liye koe jagah nahi hain,
Per phir bhi mujhe etana bura kyun lag raha hai..

.
or upper se vo ladki kaise chipak rahi he unse..
man to ker raha tha..ke...
ager vo dobara galti se mere samne aa gaye to...
to to...
she fustrated sit her bed..
try to controled her anger..
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Few time before---
In doc cabbin-
Arjun start coughing...n riya looks other side, she feel embraced n shyness
The ways doc asked sudenly..both didnt expect that Question from doc..
.
Riya looks angery to doc..
In mind-kya jarorat the arjun sir se ye sab kehane ke..
ager phir se gussa ho gaye ya naraj ho gaye to..to mein kya karongi..
.
befor arjun could ans riya said..
Ri-ji doc hum aage se dhayan rakhenge..
Arjun looked toward riya but didnt say anything..
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Ar-chalen





Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

She just nodded her head,
Both walk scilently without talking or even not looking to each other..
.
Stil blush on riya's face..
She was thinking what doc had just said..
.
Arjun opened the door for riya...
she comes inside n sit..
Arjun goes other side..n took his sit..
.
Riya riyaaa..Tum thik to ho na..Arjun asked..
.
She comes out her trance ..
aap kuch keh rahe they,
.
Ar-haan vo tumne seat belt nahi lagaye..
.
Haan vo mein..abhi lagati hoon,she try to lock her seat belt..
ArJun-wait i will do..
.
arjun move near to her,
n litle bent down...
Riya closed her eyes when she felt his closer presence,
his deo makes her crazzy..
.
Arjun move litle more down,
now by mistake arjun's hand rubbing her breast..
A strong current passed in riya body..
She try to controled her heart beat..which is moving faster bez the closeness of him.
.
After Locked seat belt,arjun just lift his graze up n saw..
.
Her eyes r closed n ...
He just looking her...
her lips r shiverying,thats makes him crazzy..
.
Arjun moves near to her..
n inhaled her deo,thats makes him more crzzy,
.
But som how controled his desire n come back to his seat..
.
arjun start SUV..
Riya's heart is still racing..
Pata nahi ..jab bhi arjun sir mere pass hote hain,
.
mein sab kuch bhul jaati hoon,she scold herself on her mind..
.
The drive was silently no one says anythink..
.
AFTER FEW MINUTE
Riya shouted..Stoped stoped..!!!
.
Arjun stoped the SUV..
Riya kya huya sab thik to hai na..
Sir chines resturent..or mujhe bhuk lagi hai,
vo test bina khaye kervane they..or ab mujhe bahoot bhuk lag rahi hai,
.
Ar-ok..
Both goes inside the resturant..
Both sit at the corner of table..
.
Arjun order chaines for both..
(Both wait for order)
Ri-Sir u know..i lv chaines..
Yummiii..she closed her eyes n remembered the test..
.







Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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