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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: hima_crazyD3fan
Congratulations Di..!!

i am so happy for the 2nd thread of dark taarey ff tera hone laga hoon..!!

its one of my fav ff..
aur aap to meri fav ho hi..!!!

ab jaldi se update plz..!!

Thanks Behena🤗
Your wish is my command😳
I will update so soon😃

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Soumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Congo di
Super duper happy for u
This is one of my fav stories
Sry for late comment
Update soon n PM me

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Debu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: soumiluvztaarey
Congo di
Super duper happy for u
This is one of my fav stories
Sry for late comment
Update soon n PM me

Thanks Behena🤗
Love you loads for it😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: PrOjeCtA
Ohhh teriii!!! I missed one of "The Most Important part" of ma shonu dii's stry!!!!!
n am vry vry sry fr dat!!!
peesh dii oops!!shonu dii...maaf kar do..(i noe aap muge 4giv karogi par thodi butterin toh aarambh me chahiye hi chahiye na!! 😉 😆 )

N nw abt ur stry!!kya kahu???(+ve way! 😆 )
Ummm...super,awesome,nice,blockbuster n ol...bohot hi shrt hai!!duhh!!

So...according to me-- "26 LETTERS ARE VRY LESS AND DIS POST HAS TOO LESS SPACE TO EXPRESS HOW *WONDERFUL* YOUR STORY IS!"

And hw can i frget ur rasgullas!!ummm..dekhne me kitni tasty hai!!lolzz..
Par me A VERY BIG LATE LATIF!!so..muge ek bhi ni mila..i think it was vry yummy ki sab log khaa gaye!! 😆
Par koi nahiii as mera tummy aapke pyaare pyaare n meethe meethe baaton se hi bhar gaya!!!

abb sweetheart tu nah..kya nautanki karti hai re😉😆😆

tere liye I will send alag se one box of rasogulla..chalega???😉

This message is wonderful..actually I love ya everything...u r my sweetheart nah🤗

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Debu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: taani.priya1997
congratulation for 2nd thread i really like ir this story too much ' kichu bachai kara bhalo storyr madha amar kache tomar ae story ta , next update ar janna wait korchi. sorry like korte parlam na karan like button kaj korche na error asche

Thanks Priya..eta khub bhalo ekta comment..amar eto valo lagche na eta dekhe..trust me🤗
ami ei story ta khub consolidated way te likhe taratari ses korte try korbo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: rakhiankita
Debo dear congo yaar on ur second thread😳😳😳..its all the result of ur hard work and i would say that itz not possible for me to read the first thread becoz there are 120 chap which i cant read but yeah i read the story so far and got a idea thanks yaar it really helped me😊😊😊..i would love to read further yaar😳and must say i loved the story concept very much❤️and for u😃

First of all, thanks Anki for your ever first comment and this beautiful wish🤗
No no, there are not 120chapters, there are only 19 chapters😛 and yea for person like you who have missed my story since beginning, I have give that synopsis part at the very beginning😳😃

So, can I assume that you want all PM updates from now on??😕😳

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Debu

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#67

Originally posted by: NIMRATKAUR
Congratulations!!!! For d second thread im in love wid dis FF and plzzz!!!!! PM me whenever you update and also pm me sum of your nice work as I m new to india forum 😳

yea I know and perhaps this is your first post😃

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Debu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

This beautiful banner is exclusively made by my sweetu friend radhu, I love you loads dear 🤗..this is amazing creation😊

Chapter 17- She is Most Special

It is a fine morning for many people and strange morning for few people. Taani moves her steps towards the dinning table where she hears interesting gossip about her. Though she knows that it is not right for a cultured human being to hear others conversation without their permission, still she can't resist herself from doing it.

"Mama, what's the matter? ye Bhai, he was not ready to marry someone till few days before though we have told him infinite times. He was not even ready to go into any types of commitment, he is now a married persona, Is he the same person? strange!!! and wo bhi, we don't know that girl...kya naam hai..ummm..Taani, that middle class name. I think, she must have done some black magic on him" the soft female voice says

"Simmi, I even can't understand. You know Babuya nah, I can't even ask him anything directly. Hopefully, his life will also not turn into disaster like his father. But that girl seems so clever and cunning. We must have to be very careful while dealing with her, otherwise you know these greedy people like her" is replied back by the another heavy female voice

Now, Taani can see her face properly. She is the lady whom she met yesterday with a face pack on her wrinkled face, Khan chacha introduced her as Mr Singhania's chachi ji or chhoti malkeen of this family. The other girl sitting at breakfast table with holding an apple in her hand, looks beautiful in her western dress. She is nearly eighteen - nineteen years old and seems as her daughter Simmi.

"But mama, bade papa ka case was different nah? here.." she stops it as soon as her lenses catch Taani standing on the edge of the room. She gives her a strange look to Taani's toe to head, "I will catch you later Mama, I am running late for my college" and leaves the room.

Taani tries to understand her reaction as her face was merely emotion less. Taani knows that the girl is supposed to be her sister-in-law, still she is less interested about her new bhabi. And moreover, what disaster they were talking about? and what about her bade papa, is it Rey's father? Why can't she able to find any single picture of Rey's parent in this big mansion? Though she has not covered the whole building yet, still it seems very odd that every one is talking very mysteriously here.

Her chain of thoughts get interrupted by a command," You have your breakfast here. I know you have not taken your dinner yesterday, we are not your servant, so we can't appeal you so many times" orders Chachi ji in a rude tone. Taani nods her head in agreement, she feels surprised as she doesn't know how she has done a crime by not taking dinner.

"Khan, I am going to a friend's house. I will come late today, you take care of family. Please give medicines to Mammi jee and Rinni on time" she instructs Khan who is standing there with keeping his head down and keeps replying her "jee maalkeen".."haanji zaroor".."thik hai"...

Place is different, people are different with their peculiarities, in fact culture and habits are also far different than her prior place. In her family, they always eat together, smile together, even cry together - they are equally part of every ups and down of life. But here, it seems that all these emotions are measured, restricted. Everybody, including the servants too does only his or her part of action. They are little arificial. This is reality, just like you can't find all fingers of your hand equal, every human being is bound to be different by nature, habits or culture etc.

She doesn't notice when clock strikes at one o'clock at the noon. But suddenly she hears a loud huge hue and cry coming from one of the room. She goes there by following the sound web and finds that everyone is busy with one person sitting on a wheel chair. She peeps in to find out the person and sees a girl, aged around thirty - thirty five panicking and screaming in pain. She is beautiful with her fair complexion and long tied hair, but little tired due to some illness. Many attendants surrounding her just stares at her without knowing what to do exactly.

For a fraction of moment, Taani feels puzzled as she really doesn't know how to handle this scenario. She goes near to her and starts rubbing her palms constantly. "Can somebody please call the doctor immediately...please..now?" she asks the mob

"we have tried to contact our house physician who is currently doing Rini Bibi's treatment, but he is out of town. Now, we can't understand whom to call" Khan Chacha informs her

But Taani's intelligence of mind helps her to find a black diary in the room and gets an alternative contact number of a doctor. She finally catch the doctor over telephone line. After some times, she finally gives the patient a medicine pill keeping for emergency purpose as per the doctor's instruction. The doctor has told her to do so unless he reaches to attend her.

"Bahut Sukriya Bahu Raani, she is our elder daughter of the family, Rinni Bibi, Reyaansh's own elder sister. Her left side is paralyzed, she can't move any body parts of that side."

Khan exhales a breath and continues, " She was so beautiful, so jovial in nature during her childhood days, but suddenly one day, she felt down from upstairs and got injured at the right portion of her head. Since then her left side of the body can't operate though she understands everything."

Strange!!! Strange!!Strange!!

As much as she comes to know about this family, she is becoming more astonished, more astound. Reyaansh Singhania has a sister also and God knows how many secrets are hidden in this huge pillars of this mansion. "But why she was behaving like this?" asks Taani to Khan Chacha. Meanwhile everybody has left the room to make the room quiet, Taani is sitting beside Rinni and talking with Khan Chacha. Rinni is now sleeping like a small kid by getting the gentle touch of Taani's hand on her forehead.

"Sometimes, Rinni bibi behaves so, it has some medical reason and name too, but sorry I can't remember it. We have got a trained nurse for her all time, but today she has not come yet without informing us. We have tried to catch Rey Baba on his cell, but it is not reachable. Hum log kare bhi toh kya, no one is there at the home currently, Bari Maa ko chhor ke and she is also sleeping" he informs Taani about his problem

"You don't worry Khan Chacha, Dr Desai will be reaching here within very few minutes, she will be fine after that. Look at her, she is sleeping like a innocent flower." Taani places a kiss on her forehead, "Can you please make this room more open? Let the Sun Rays come through the window" she goes to move the heavy curtain from the window glass and sees a doctor's car just stops at the gate of the Mansion.

Pre Cap - Rey runs to see his heart, his Angel, his most favorite person in the world after stepping in the house. He starts shouting but...they keep their first step together... keeping the second vow of the marriage

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W/N - So, end of the first chapter of the new thread. Rinni is the most special person in Rey's Life. Like and Comment please, pls leave your feedback too. Perhaps she can't do any physical activity, but her influence on Singhania family will be very much seen with the next updates. And yea, please see the pre cap - some positivity with the story now😉

Edited by crazy2012 - 12 years ago

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Prasanna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

YEY!!!!! Me 1st one...

1st chap of second thread...

its really amazing...

Hmm now the secrets are reveling...

I'm loving it dear...😊

its really mind-blowing chapter...👏👏

Hope to see more secrets further...🥱

so update soon and PM me...😊

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Sania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

finally my much-awaited update is here 😃

"She is Most Special"

i was like oh so it's a "She"...but who is "She"...i'll continue that later, don't wanna break the sequence na!

Taani is living with a bunch of weird people so uski morning to strange ho gi hi na 🤔

ah Gossip...its the birth right of women so who else can be engaged in it 😆

hmm so Singhania household has one Simmi Singhania...the arrogant and rude types girl 😡

wo kya hai na Simmi ji TaaRey are destined to be together so Rey ko to shaadi karni hi thi...aur ye to bas shuruwaat hai abhi to Rey aisa bohat kuch kare ga jo uski personality ke against hai 😉

point to focus in this update "Rey's father's life was a disaster" i assume his married life was a disaster...the troubled relationship of his parents is one of the reasons why Rey changed from a happy-go-lucky boy to an egoistic man

now it has to be seen who was responsible for that troubled relationship...Rey's father/mother or both 🤔

hmm...Taani looks clever and cunning to the chachi ji, ah age does that to you, she needs a pair of glasses asap 😆

and Rey's case is different from his father...hmm lets see how it is different!

hmm wanna see Taani in a detective avatar...daadi ji pata nahin kab batayen di...she should herself don a hat, black glasses and long black coat (James Bond avatar) and set out on a search mission in Singhania mansion to unravel all the secrets...waise bhi Mami Ji won't be back soon to mauka acha hai 😉 😆

so Rinni it is...i was right she is Rey's sister 😃

aww poor Rinni...i guess her condition is also one of the reasons behind Rey's change-in-personality

hmm the precap...i am right again, Rey cares for that person (his sister) a lot...i guess uski jaan basti hai Rinni mei 😊

TaaRey fulfilling the second vow 😃

waise i have 1 complain...jab se TR ki shaadi hui hai we have got just 1 TR scene, that's not fair 😒

good that the precap has some TR scenes...looking forward to the next update

pleaj update asap 😊

Edited by Favouriteofall - 12 years ago