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Shamz

@Shamz94

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#821

Just came across your story few days ago and finally read all cheps till now loved it beautifully write
Ps on when next update

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#822

This was on a lighter side ... and seemed very close to life ...

I like the way Arnav ambles his way into his in law's already... :)

Hmm that must have been quite a distraction while studying! *wink*

Aha! Akash found his Payalji here finally! :) Chuppa Rustam! eh!:)

hmm smart move with the recording ... albeit an incidental...

But what is Shyam really planning? I will not be surprised if he still thinks he has an upperhand over the situation!

Okie .. so the damad stays back this night as well? i seee...

But wasn't NK supposed to be back? or is it only the next day?

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#823

haha.. shatir Khushi huh... akash wid payal.. gud one there... :D

Shyam is soo twisted .. kiss mitti ka bana hua hai woh?? he doesnt bother wid a person roaming shirtless in his supposed to be fiance's huz n talks as if nthng has happnd.. but when Khushi explodes , his maliciousness came afront!!

Arnavz impromptu recording in his cellphone is a boon... gud dat dey have solid evidence against that creep nw!!

look at this naughty , flirty Arnav ... i simply adore dis guy!! :D

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#824

Hey...I read the last three chapters together... srry was extremely bzy wd academics... but hey hey hey...brilliantly written...u took my breath away with these three chapters...I was completely on the edge through out d chapters... the beautiful morning after...the shyam fiasco. ..and they all planning together...wow!!! Am actually waiting with bated breaths fr the nextupdate. ..the intensity the pace the angst everything was perfect... I wish I could punch shyam some more!!!!! Update sooon

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achu_arshi

@achu_arshi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#825

Hey I'm new here

And I should say this is one of the best ff I ever read..

I really liked it

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#826

You have no idea how much I was missing Akash Singh Raizada... I was dejected when he was not brought in for celebration in the coffee house... N now I am happy... After a long time got to have aman n akhash... I was to request you to bring in them if u dint have them in last update... Now you had my unasked wish full filled... Thank u chaitu...

Update was fun... breezy... beautiful... Loved it... After intense romance and then intense angst filled updates, we got a light n warm update... Was much needed before the next storm...

Initially when I started reading IMTBE, the most alluring factor to me was the friendship quotient it had and here after all these updates the quotient remains the same and I am as fascinated with it as I was then... In plain words - love IMTBE...

Ps: Monday n Friday mornings are not fun anymore... Yet to get set for the change in timings...:)

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#827

Originally posted by: preethi.saseeda
You have no idea how much I was missing Akash Singh Raizada... I was dejected when he was not brought in for celebration in the coffee house... N now I am happy... After a long time got to have aman n akhash... I was to request you to bring in them if u dint have them in last update... Now you had my unasked wish full filled... Thank u chaitu...

Update was fun... breezy... beautiful... Loved it... After intense romance and then intense angst filled updates, we got a light n warm update... Was much needed before the next storm...

Initially when I started reading IMTBE, the most alluring factor to me was the friendship quotient it had and here after all these updates the quotient remains the same and I am as fascinated with it as I was then... In plain words - love IMTBE...

Ps: Monday n Friday mornings are not fun anymore... Yet to get set for the change in timings...:)

My feelings are same :)

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paaskhanna

@paaskhanna

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#828

The friends are back together...have always admired the bonding which is there between all of them...

Akash-Payal... His excuse for meeting her was so lame😛

Guess this is the calm before the storm...still scared about the mean machinations of Shyam

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aafan

@aafan

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#829

Oh welcome back Payal!
Beautiful update.
Aman and Akash are perfect compliment.
Khushi is so focused. I can believe it.
Por Arnav ...
Feel sorry for him
He is a newly wed husband.

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Anokhee

@Anokhee

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#830

Hey...

I'm sure you don't know me as this is the first time I'm commenting on a 'Arnav-Khushi' fiction. I have been an ardent fan of Armaan and Ridhima and have been a part of this forum ever since. I did try a lame attempt on writing something on AR but as soon as I realized how lame and stupid and embarrassing my fiction is, I went underground promising myself to never show my presence felt.

But over time, I happened to watch a bit of Arnav and Khushi, turned to this particular FF and I'm so glad that I did. Honestly, I haven't read your entire story. Just picked up a random chapter in between and started reading it. But now, I await your chapters and I think it'll be injustice to you if you have silent readers and hence, I had to come up and leave you with my thoughts on your brilliant piece of art. Its realistic and to the point describing a wonderful bond between two people who love each other and want to spend their life together.

A great mixture of the conservative thoughts and the modern aspects bringing out a brilliant blend in the generation gap and somehow, you have managed to bring out Shyam's character really well.

In the little parts of the show that I have seen, I really thought of him having a psychotic issue and that's what exactly you have managed to bring out so well...

Keep up with the amazing job you're doing. Can't wait for the story to unfold itself.

Great Work!

-Anokhee!

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