Arshi OS: Complete! (june 20)

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Neen

@nnsunn

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Superb update.
You hav beautifuly written khushi's emotions. Enjoyed reading it. Loved how she supported him to overcome his fears. 17 teddy bears, avni s lucky to hav a father like him.
Thanks 4 pm

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mastermagician

@mastermagician

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Amazing!!!!😊

So beautifully written!⭐️

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ArshiAsya

@Alai123

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Loved the OS
It was totally awesome!!!

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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Beautiful, very emotional loved it...
Love them both they are truly made for each other i wish we could see something like this in ipk.
Thanks rotten it was outstanding.

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_G1234_

@_G1234_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Heart touching OS. I just love reading ur OS's. This Os has joined my fav stories list, after ur coming home OS.. <3
Beautifully written. I had tears in my eyes, when khushi supported him. You portrayed their emotions so well. <3
I wanted to see sumthing like this in the show, but it never happened. :(
tum ne meri dil ki khwaish poori kardi. A bear hug from my side to u. 🤗

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mbbsrocks

@mbbsrocks

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

It was sooo sooo sooo sweet OS..

totaly loved it...

very emotional...:) :)

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Sharmila

@spsharmila

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Very well written 👏 ...thanks for the pm 😃

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Sonia_J16

@Sonia_J16

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Describing Parenthood at its best!!!

Awesome

keep writing such awesome stuffs

Loved reading it

Thanks for the PM

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

now this was awesome!!!
seriously dear! it was just so beautiful...how much do i wish they ould hav shown this scene, arnav sleeping wid their baby, in the show...aww! this is it!

thanx for such a wonderful reading moment!!