Arshi OS: Complete! (june 20)

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

One of the best OS's I have read. Brought tears. We wanted to see all this in our show. Thank you for giving it to us here.

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Mish C Fernandes

@MISH1991

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Loved it ,loved the emotions ,loved the feelings..n loved the last part esp😳

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Beautiful. U have created an image of a picture perfect family where each member completes the other. Little Avni sleeping on Arnav's chest was truly a very beautiful moment. Khushi understanding Arnav's anxiety and her supporting him as always was very touching and finally the way they slept together completed the beautiful picture. Very well written. Thanks for the PM. I hope u update WMB soon. Reading about this Avni made me miss that Avni 😊

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avika_ShArMa

@avika_ShArMa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

missed your os's..
and this was one fabulous fantabulous amazing superb os...you made me cry during the arnav khushi part dammit! 😭😊

awww i know avni would be superrr cute...and damn damn damn lucky to have arnav as a father who would make world fall at her feet and such a caring loving mother!!

you should write os more often...i literally love them...ofcourse apart from your ff and ss. 😉

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

That was pretty beautiful. .. 😊

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

aww very very nice os...its very soothing and calming one:)...u have written it beautifully :)

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sooryalekshmi

@sooryalekshmi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

If the serial was still on...
I would say this will be what we will see on it...
I have read many os's where khushi gets pregnant arnav jumping in joy etc...
But i think this is it...
The vulnerable arnav, who always masked his weakness with anger...
Just awesome...

Loved how you potrayed avin sleeping on him...
And at the end khushi's PILLOW too...
And 17 teddies???
Omg...