Swaron os:EVERY ENDING HAS A NEW BEGINNING

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Deepika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Beautifully penned down...loved it 😳😳😳😳

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Chaitra Joshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: strykeryder
I don't have words to describe this os
perfectly written
thanks for the pm

thank u😊

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Chaitra Joshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sakshibshah
Too gud !!!!
Keep it up :)

thanks😊

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Chaitra Joshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: aku30
It was great...
loved it..😊
thnx for d Pm.

thank u

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Chaitra Joshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: 8JSmileyFace8J
Great OS!!!
loved the beggining of when you described sharon with the bowl of ice cream!!
i was all like AWWW!!!
I hate those sad endings to these army OS's...
it makes me realize just how short life is..
and sometimes you miss out out on the happiest moments...
Awesome job!!

awww thank u so much😳

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Chaitra Joshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sweet_sanju
Awesome OS...😊
Just loved it
very Beautifully written👏
Sharon in beginning was described so well
Title is really every apt⭐️⭐️
thnx for d pm

thanks a lot di...am so happy u liked it😃

love u😳

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Chaitra Joshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
Beautifully penned down...loved it 😳

thank u so much😳😳

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vrushanharshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

awesome os

very well written

though i dont like sad endings of os but ur title only suggests dat every ending has a new beginning

i really liked

the way u described sharon in the beginning i just loved it

thanx for the pm

keep writing 👍🏼

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austen_TanHa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

well written
I'm glad that the ending wasn't dragged and Swayam was alive and with Sharon for most of the os.
thanks for the pm

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

that was a great os not lame at al.. beautifully penned n d way u described everything in d story from how swayam imagined sharon ll b before pressing d bell to d end how u completed with d title was beautiful...