Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 6) - Page 69

I loved the jealous Khushi that showed up in this update and an equally jealous Arnav for her attention..

Loved the update.
Glad Kushi dint disappoint him

What a nice update. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. 😊

Awwwn

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That was a lovely update! Sorry I didn't read it till now, I was out of station. Anyway Khushi getting jealous of Lavanya and Arnav and Arnav's delight at the fact that Khushi still waited for him to come home, it was all so well written. Hope you update soon and thanks for the PM.

Osum updt...
looking forward to itt!!!!

Was waiting for chapter 13 wondering how the story will proceed. Must say, it was a marvelous update 👍🏼 Thanks for the PM dear. While reading the update, I got overjoyed & felt the urge to quote many dialogues & lines, but then I realized I might end up quoting nearly 3/4^th of the chapter

First it sounded like Arnav & Khushi were looking at the mela pictures & thought maybe she will get a chance to see her photos by Arnavji…..and………Khushi regretting for the first time for calling La di home was well framed

Khushi asking Arnav directly as to why he was flirting with Lavanya di & Arnav's reactions to it was awesome. Surprised at the most expected waterworks but still trying to calm her down by explaining to her what actually he meant by 'flirting' that which he didn't do with her Di, astonished at her matchmaking skills which didn't include any knowledge of 'flirting', a little sad somewhere in the corner of his heart when he came to know that all the fuss a little while ago was because he was popping up in the middle of her matchmaking process but not because he was flirting with a.n.o.t.h.e.r girl was awesomely portrayed

Arnav disappointed on not finding his welcoming angel as usual, rushing to her room to see if she was ill or …, relieved to find her happily chatting with his dad but totally heart broken in a wink of a second when the thought of becoming 'not wanted'…., 'not in her important list anymore'…… 'just an inmate'….., 'all have returned now I'm not important & won't get all that attention anymore'…….. flashed across his mind and then his heart quickly jumping in uncontrollable joy as soon as he heard her words for him "Arnavji……" was well written – wonderful 😃 The way you brought out how much Arnav was enjoying the joy he got in basking in Khushi's closeness, warm welcomes, friendly chatters, wide smiles, ………. And was all of a sudden shattered when he felt he was once again snatched of the opportunity of being loved was mind blowing 👏

Buddy first of all I got to thank u for giving this beautiful update ❤️ ❤️ ❤️………… LOVED IT. Update after update I'm loving this Arnav who was neglected of his parents love for many years & now whose finding emotional solace from the ever loving & bubbly Khushi. I guess Arnav has started to develop feelings unknowingly & knowingly for Khushi & has started to get attached to her company, chatters, attention & most importantly her care. But after reading chapter 13, I've got a little doubt? Was Khushi upset with Arnav only because he might upset her match making between her Chachu & La or was she also unknowingly upset that Arnav was flirting or liking another girl???

Eager to read more...WAITING

sorry di i think its the first time i m commenting on this ff
i kind of disappeared from the forum for last few months due to some personal and professional commitments
but this season 2 of MKM is as good as the last one if not better
of couse u are gifted with skills to present all kinds of emotions in ur writing and seeing the way hero fall in love in ur ff is a treat
thanks for the pm and will be waiting for the next update to see how far is arnav from realising his feelings

I LOVE MKM II So far I love it! Its awesome! :D