Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 6)

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Mithila

@Mithikush

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Amazing part

Khushi is superbbb

Loved it

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Hawa1997

@Hawa1997

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Welcome back,hope,you had a great vacation!!😃

You were missed..glad to have you back...😊

Congrats on the new thread!!!!👏

Amazing update!!!

Oh poor Arnav got hurt, Khushi to the rescue!!

It was so hilarious how Khushi was taking care of him and he was getting annoyed😆

Arnav isn't use to this all this attention, and now he loves having khushi around. She is part of his daily life now, he is getting use to her. She has bridge his relationship with his dad and making him feel wanted now,that he is loved.. He loves that feeling,being needed... He is falling for her..but he's afraid that after he gets well and after everyone comes back will it be that same.

Well can't wait see how this unfolds...

Beautifully expressed.. Brilliantly penned down!!!

You came back with a bang😉

Thank you for the long update,really loved it..

Thanks for the pm.

Eagerly waiting ...

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smiley-shiney

@smiley-shiney

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#273

congrats on the new thread

beautiful & awesome update

Khushi's emoitonal black mail was lovely in that promogranate scene

So Arnav is getting habituated to Khushi

over all a very lovely update

Thanks for the PM

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Welcome back!! You were sorely missed, but hope you had a great and relaxing sabbatical!

Coming to the update, you have kept your wonderful grip and understanding of your key characters' thought processes. Its wonderful how you deal so empathetically and compassionately with their emotional insecurities.

The entire update was great, but these lines stood out for me ""But the truth was that his wilted heart was coming to life under Khushi's nurturing care. How would things go back to 'normal' when she had unknowingly planted tender feelings for herself on the path leading to his heart?""

Lovely play of words here!

Look forward eagerly to the next update.

Cheers..

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#275

loved the update...its just wonderful...Khushi is always extreme,right...poor Arnav...his accident may not give him such pain,that Khushi's taking care is giving...But Khushi is really really cute...so awesome update...
thanks for the pm...And congrats for the new thread...