Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 6) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congratulations n welcome back!Awesome update n loved the way khushi took care of Arnav n loved the helpless Arnav n thankz for such a long update n hope we get next update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome back.
Loved this long coming back update.
Loving the subtle changes in Arnav.
I just loved how Khushi took care of him hen he was ill.
I could actully imagine the scene where she cajoled him to eat or where she came to his room every five minutes to check on him.
I feel for Arnav who never had anyone ho cared or him nd ho had to manage alone hen ill.
And his nightmares. Nobody deserves a mother like his.
Thanks a lot for updating. Hope you had a nice holiday.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh! You're back! I was shocked out of my wits to see the name of this FF in the Forum 😆
Whoa- is it a coincidence or what? Just this morning there has been a minor accident in my neighborhood, and here Arnav has one too! Quite relate-able!
First of all, Khushi's reaction at seeing him was the start to what undoubtedly will be a long and loving relationship 😆
And the way she called Karan was so sweet, exaggerating about his condition...
I loved it how she suggested the Skype idea, it will bring him and his dad closer... And I loved how you described Arnav's feelings and his slight hesitancy as to deepening the friendship with Khushi...
This was one enormous update!
Well done!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good to see you back in full action. Enjoyed reaching the little changes in and around Arnav unknowingly brought by Khushi. A very nice part to read on.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i was waiting for this awesome update plz try to upd soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats on new thread... and welcome back🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome back Anonymous... It's such a good thing to see you back and well what an update!!
This was such a beautiful chapter depicting the slow, subtle yet important change in their equation. Khushi, who after being alone with Arnav had demanded verbally for his care & attention, showered hers all on him because she thinks he needs care and keeps checking on her after the accident.
It's not only the dynamics of their relation that is changing slowly but also the way Arnav has been living his life all these years. Now he has someone who would fret over his eating habits, his sleeping patterns, someone who keeps waiting for him at home. The feeling of returning home to someone who cares for you - must be an alien to him but now he has become habitual of it. He may keep giving himself a pep talk that it'll change one day but the fact is he won't be able to take it if it changes, he won't ever like it to change and he'll do everything in his power to keep it like this.
The change in the way father-son duo interacts is heart warming.
It feels so bad to find someone whose life, beliefs, everything changed, went into a dark recess because of betrayal of someone close to them. In Arnav's case it's his own mother sadly.
Two people - Arnav & Khushi - both got separated from their parents but still ended up being two completely different individuals. The reason being the people they got surrounded with. Arnav got brooding, temperamental because there was no one except a mother who fed him lies. Khushi is still sunny, lively because of the warmth, love & caring she got from Bade Papa, Buaji & Chachu.
Sometimes blood relations seriously don't matter - we become how we grow up.
A very amazing update, so brilliantly written.
Now we know that Khushi has made a place in his life & it'll be equally interesting to know if Arnav has carved an important place in her life or not.
Edited by aquagal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Finally you are back with an amazing update. Loved the way Khushi insisted on looking after Arnav, she also has started to address him as " her Arnavji" in her mind. Slowly but steadily she has started making way in Arnav's mind
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WELCOME BACK 😊

so happy to see you online n with an update...


loved d long update...

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absolutely loved it...

continue sooon plsss

ab aur wait nahi kiye jaaataa
Edited by massu91 - 12 years ago

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