Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 6) - Page 101

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This is such a lovely story. Like this K. Will send email.

When will Arnav realize that kushi is something more to him ?

i guessed i missed ur email id..could u plz provide it again..so that i could send u a mail for adding me😃

update soon..

eagerly waiting 4 d nxt part

Hmmm so just like me many others also prefer stalking ? Nice.

Will send you the email soon.

Hi, i am a silent writer and i generally stalk your updates. you are too good a writer. i like, by default all your updates. keep updating

hey ,,, my frnd recommended me this FF... i read whole of it in one go,, then i came to know abt part 1 of MKM,,, n just couldnt resist myself n read all the 30 chapters last night,,, still feeling sleep deprived,,, n all thnx to u,,😆

now coming to ur work,, i hope i can give my honest views n judgement abt it,, i apologize if i offend u in any way,, 😊

i think tht MKM 2 is far far better than the part 1,, i felt tht the characters werent properly sketched out in part 1,, thing is tht i read both FFs back to back,, so i couldnt stop myself comparing them with each other,, i feel u did more justice to arnav n khushi's characterization in the latter one..
like for instance i can totally relate to arnav's hatred towards khushi,, coz as a child he was deprived of his parents's affection n care.. n then seeing tht love fizzle out to an unknown kid left him bereft with any kind of emotion,, n his mother's planning n plotting was the final nail in the coffin,,
whereas in part 1st,, i just couldnt understand tht y an orphan has to b significantly a gold digger,, i didn go well with me,,
in the 2nd version,, u hav thoroughly explained each n every dynamics of the events which r compelling arnav to incline towards khushi,, like her happy go lucky attitude despite being physically challenged,, her unintentional trial to fill each n every void in his rotten life,, her innocent n unadulterated care n concern,, which is forcing him to change his prerogative abt her,, n tht too to such an extent tht now he wants her undivided attention n is now evn jealous of his own father,,😆isnt it ironic tht this is the same khushi who he considered to b a testimony of one of the reasons of his dark childhood,, such a big development,,,albeit thru baby steps,,
n the biggest USP of this FF is the age difference between arhi,,, ur portrayal of a man falling in love with a kid 😆( lavanya chachi,, omg tht was hilarious) is commendable,,
whereas in part 1st i felt tht every thing was a bit rushed,, i couldnt understand tht when n y he fell in love with her,, n how his hatred was dissipated,, may b coz she was taking care of his babies sincerely,, but something lacked,,,
anyways,, great work nonetheless,, i am just looking forward to how will he accept his tender feelings for her,, what will make him turn possessive abt her,, will it be Rishabh or Shyam will make a re entry?
just one request ,, i want this arnav to b more fierce n passioante who could go to any lengths to not let khushi go away,, given his past she is his sunshine who would resort to any kind of dirty game anything to hold back to her,,,

Hi I love your work immensely and have bookmarked it... I keep stalking to see your updates. I personally would not like to bother any writer to send Pm's for updates. Your writing speaks for itself and it is well worth my time to stalk and wait for updates.