Originally posted by: Arshix144
Shikha Shikha Shikha I can't believe it is the last chapter but I can't complain because you gave us everything and more in this chapter. I must now apologize for being late, I was out of town & away from net & technology. It was quite a pleasant surprise to see your email amongst my emails, I hope that your tests went well :-) I kind of missed your FICS, but at the same time I understand you have a pretty hectic AD!
Ok I better move on to the actual update now, you always startle me with the way you start the chapters. It is always unexpected and wonderful, loved the little banter Arshi shared about food then you took me off guard again with the mention of their kids all grown up. What a perfect little family too with parents being with them and for them at all times.You also brought up the fact that the kids notice things and interpret them in their own way. Parents often argue even about petty things without realizing it's impact on their kids. It was great to see the kids bring it up though and for their lovely parents to assure them then and there!Ah Shikhz you highlighted Arshi's perfect understanding and connection via their life journey through the different hurdles of life over the last 16 years of their blissfully happy marriage. You are lucky I am pressed for time or I would have rambled and rambled about every single moment and sentence that I loved about this update. So without further ado I must thank you for this beautiful journey of BIL I have loved every single chapter and the way you portrayed Arshi here. I shall now look forward to the epilogue.