ARHI FF: Strings of Illusion:T5|LINK 2 T6 - PG 1**

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sincereme

@sincereme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#611

hi...its the first tym m commentng on this story...really love this ff... u r a fabulous writer...i also read your other stories but didn't comment there bcz i dont know if u would read them now...but i really love your writing style... 👍🏼waiting to read more... update soon... 😊

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ILoveFF

@ILoveFF

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Posted: 12 years ago

#612

That was awesome... it was so beautiful ... wow

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#613

Part 2

Awesome Update

Sizzling Hot

Seriously your writing is fantastic, regardless of what genre/scene you are writing

Finally they are one..seriously your descriptions are so natural and both Arnav and Khushi now have feelings that run deeper than physical attraction..both have accepted the fact and conveyed it with their eyes!!!

Amazing Chapter

Worth the wait😳

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#614

The two parts were just wonderful...

Especially the second part with Arnav treating to an ultra-romantic evening first with Moulin Rouge & then a dinner on the Seine was just a perfect evening... Loved their sizzling hot love-making, although, I have to be honest & say that I wish Khushi hadn't been in a physical relationship before & Arnav was her first, somehow, that kind of took away from me the magic of the night... Yeah, yeah I know I am a sexist but that's the way old school romantic love stories are unfortunately :(

But the loved the fact that they both realize that they are in love & wanted to be with the other for the rest of their lives... Lovely chapter!

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Disha

@dishashah4176

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#615

oh my tht was such a passionate update n definately compensating for the long wait

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laksh65

@laksh65

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#616

awesome double dates finally the passion and love brought them one

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blablabla_mo7

@blablabla_mo7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#617

That was hot and intense... Nice!!!

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pravallika

@pravallika

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#618

Thanx arati for a very romantic and hot update.
I'm very happy that they both realised about their feelings 😃
Second part was too hot but i was slightly disappointed as it was not kushi's first.
But the update was too good dear...

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keyboard123

@keyboard123

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#619

absolutely amazing update!! loved it!

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Amina Mahmood

@Amina87

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#620

Mindblowing...
Simply mindblowing both the parts...
So finally they are together in true sense...
They became one in every way...
And they are in love, only confession is pending now...
Their moments were really hot to handle and their passion was tooo much...
Plz update next part really really soon...