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oh deetha each n every chapter was amazing loved each part n thanku 4 d links ! loved it ❤️ mindblowing amazing ! pls updatesoon !
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" Sharon, Come out now!! " He shouted from outside totally pissed off.

"Swayam ye kya kar rahe ho , girls washroom hai " she tried to act annoyed.


"Oh please sharon!! Thank your stars ki I didn't break the doors and pull you out. I know it, tum door par hi khadi thi " he mocked angrily.

"Swayam , wo actually aaj mujhe "

"Sharon!! Shut up and bring your handbag right now, warna bolo I am all ready to carry you all the way to the site. "


She sighed. " Swayam kisi aur ko sign karwao na !! " Sharon tried her luck once again. They are making the album of that song. She and Swayam both discussed a lot about how it should be shot, at what kind of area, and in what kind of clothes everything. Both are so satisfied with the plan. And when the final step was to be taken i.e., to just finalize one of the selected locations Swayam declared she will be playing the role opposite to him in the album.


"Sharon!! Hum donon ka milke pehla gaana hai ! Kya tum mere saath shoot nahi karna chahti?? " he asked making a sad face.


" Arey waisa nahi hai swayam!! Par mai camera ke saamne, I can't swayam. It's new too me. I can't do it."


" Sharon everything has a first time !! Now come on Sharon!! " he made puppy face. How can she resist his that face?? She nodded meekly.


" Hey!! Kyun tension leti ho! " He placed a hand on her shoulder.


"Mai hun na !! "and suddenly he opened his arms in a filmy way.

Sharon rolled her eyes and walked into her cabin to pick her stuff.


"Sharon!! " he whispered .She looked at him making a face.

"Kya hua?? " she asked casually. They are heading towards the location. And she couldn't understand why he is whispering .


"Mai soch raha tha ki "he stopped thinking about something.

"Kya? "

" Mai ye soch raha tha ki we can change the script?? Into something romantic? " he said leaning towards her when she pushed him back.


"Shut up Swayam !! " She looked front and sighed as she saw the driver busy in the traffic.


" Arey mai toh bas "


"I said shut up!! " and he with no choice shut his mouth.





She smiled still sleeping and slowly came into senses but never opening her eyes. She loved this. This place is more special for her for the same reason. It's far away from the city and thus they get the chance to hear those beautiful voices of birds early in the morning which bid bye to their families to go out in search of food and promising to be back before the dark. She grinned hearing those voices. Being a painter she is so much into nature as she loves to paint the nature more than anything. She opened her eyes only to see her face so close to his and his tight grip on her waist and the sudden realization bought butterflies in her stomach.


She gaped at him shamelessly as the wind blowed his hair. It's then when her eyes fell on his lips she remembered the things happened last night and a blush crept on her cheeks immediately!! Lightly caressing his lips with her finger tips she grinned blushing. Shaking her head about what she is doing she silently slipped out of his grip and went to freshen up!


As she came out she saw him changing into his tracks . For dance routine, as usual. Fidgeting with her fingers she called him. Things changed a bit after that kiss right?? And she blushed again with that thought.


" Rey " she called slowly but on getting no response she called a bit louder.


" Rey!! "


He looked back and raised his eybrow asking her what without any emotion on his face. She felt it strange. He is not like this. He grabs every situation to make her blush and flirt with her , especially after that kiss she prepared herself for more but here he is so...normal.


" Kya?? koi kaam tha?? " he asked searching for his socks.

" Nahi!! Kya dhoondh rahe ho?? " she asked not liking how he is behaving.


romantic nahi ho sakte?? Huh!!


" Kuch nahi!! " and with that he left grabbing his socks. She frowned as he walked out.!! What's wrong?? was all that she could think.

" Kriya!! " she heard priya calling and she rushed down to help her mother-in-law in preparing the breakfast.

Lagta hai mood kharab hai !! Pohe banati hun! Khush hojayenge!!


she rushed down to complete her work !.She found it weird that even on breakfast table he acted as is she didn't exist.He plainly ignored her and somewhere it started hurting her already. What has she done that he is not even speaking.


" Rey kuch hua hai kya?? " she asked as he was about to leave the room for Academy.He glanced at her once and left.


" Maine kiya kya hai " she groaned. He chuckled hiding beside the wall and left shaking his head.


***


" baat karleta toh acha hota " he cursed himself seeing himself in the mirror. It's lunch time. And here he is still rehearsing. It's irritating to stay away from her. But he sighed again. She won't agree that easily , so emotional blackmail is a must and he sulked more.

" Khana leke toh aasakti hai " he mumbled to himself. He wantedly left the lunch box while coming. He won't talk to her but atleast he will gape at her when she will bring some food. He cursed himself in mind for not bringing the box. It's 2 already and his stomach is roaring shamelessly not even having some mercy on him . He is in his own world to notice the poor girl standing behind him fidgeting and wondering if he would talk to her atleast now.


" Rey! " his head snapped up hearing her voice. Aah she is a sweat heart right?? When ever he wants she will be by his side and with that he drowned into her dreamland seeing her from the mirror and a small smile trying to take its place on his lips with much difficulty as he is too much into his dreamworld or Kriya world??

" Aap apni lunch box bhool gaye !! Leke aayi hun khana khalijiye ga !! Chaliye " She smiled her best smile hoping he would open his damn mouth and speak something .


Minutes later she is staring at him without a blink as he ate quietly .


Baat karna nahi aata par dekho toos toos ke kha rahe hai . Huh!!


She cursed and abused him with all strength keeping aside the thought that " pati parmeshwar hota hai , aur usse gaaliyan nahi dete " . He felt uneasy under her gaze.


Mujhe kha jayegi kya?? aise dekh rahi hai

he gulped the food without chewing. Gosh it's too awkward to eat when she is sitting right in front of him legs folded and staring at him with that sharp gaze.


" Thanks! " he said and left making her jaw fall to ground.


" aapki problem kya hai?? " she shouted as he continued walking.

But to her shock he is still silent.

" Rey kuch hai toh boliye " she asked crisply.He paid no heed and left to his cabin. She felt too bad. She thought of talking to him but now he would be taking his 30 mins nap before the next batch reaches for training. Sighing she left for home . He looked at her through the glass and smiled. She looked too cute in that red nose. He chuckled at his thoughts and went to take his nap.


***


She is back of him from the time he returned. But he plainly ignore. It's dinner time already and he barely looked at her the whole day. Forget about talking. And that broke her heart every second. From the day she stepped in this house she had him beside her all the time teasing, laughing, flirting and what not. But now this sudden silence is too much for her to take. She is getting more annoyed with every passing by second. She wanted to shout but she felt helpless to do that too. On whom will she shout?? Him?? He is not even glancing at her what will she shout then? And her last strand of patience drained when he even refused when she was about to serve him. This made her furious and she started shouting at him then and there.

" Problem kya hai aapki?? hua kya hai ki aisa behave kar rahe ho? " everyone almost flinched at the sudden shrieking voice.


" Kya hua Kriya " preeti asked all clueless.

" Dekhiye na maa, subah se mujhse baat nahi kar rahe hai , jab bhi mai baat karti hun ignore kardete hai . Kya hua hai , maine kiya kya hai wo bhi nahi bata rahe hai . Mai din bhar peeche ghoom rahi thi par inko toh koi farak hi nahi padta. Ab khana bhi nahi hai mere haath ka . Aakhir maine kiya kya hai?? Mujhe toh koi galti yaad nahi aaraha , infact kal raat ko maine inhe " and she stopped .

He who was simply eating while she is shouting as if nothing happened froze for a moment not able to take the spoon out of his mouth but the next instant he pressed his lips hard trying to stop his laugh and played with the spoon with the food on the plate.

Kriya pagal hai kya?? kya bolne wali thi tum?? Ye bolegi sabko ki tune tune kal Rey ko kiss bhi kiya !! Tu paagal hogayi hai

She was cursing herself when swayam spoke.

" Kal kya Kriya?? " he asked totally clueless and Rey almost choked trying to control his laugh making her glare at him.


" Dekha ab bhi koi farak nahi padta " and suddenly out of no where she started crying . She is herself surprised at the fresh hot tears but she couldn't help but cry out loud like a child . Rey's eyes went as wide as they can seeing her cry that bad.

" Woah woah! " he walked to her quickly to console her but poor soul was pushed away and all the three started scolding him like no tomorrow.

" Bhai I am not gonna take anything against her okay " Swayam said loudly at last and both Preeti and Ranvijay looked at him silently. Never did Swayam raised a voice against Rey and it was quite shocking.


" Woah!! Shant mera bhai!! Teri bestie meri wife hai " he tried to explain but Swayam is not able to take the tears of his oh-so-good Bhabhi.


" Kya mai " he signaled that he wanted to stand beside her and Swayam moved aside .

" Kriya tum ro kyun rahi ho?? Arey yaar ek prank bhi nahi khel sakta mai? hadh hoti hai " he wrapped his arm around her bringing her close to him when she sniffed looking down.

" Prank? " everyone looked at him questioningly.

" Haan prank. " he said looking away from her gaze.

" Par kyun?? " she asked meekly.

" Dekho pehli baat , mai tujhse gussa toh hun hi, tumhari wajah se itni badi problem mere sar pe aayi jiska koi solution nahi hai , aur jo ek hai wo possible nahi, firse tumhari wajah se " He said honestly .

" Maine kya problem kada kiya aapkeliye?? " She stood straight asking him but still tears rolling down her cheeks.

" Pehle ye rona band karo. Har baat pe roti ho yaar tum toh!! " Rey complained.

" Kya problem hai rey? " his dad was stern.


" Problem? Kal isne aise hi Shilpa ko academy se nikaldiya bina soche samjhe . Ek mahine ke baad sabse bada event hone wala hai , ab mai bina partner ke kya duet karunga?? " he asked everyone.

" Auditions leke nayi ladki ko laayenge " Kriya hissed on hearing Shilpa's name.

" Really?? Toh gaya mera performance. Pata nahi experienced dancer milne mei kitna time lagega then usse adjust hona padega and we need to get comfortable and pata nahi usse seekhne mei kitna time lagega and minimum practise se stage pe mai kabhi nahi jaata " he looked at her explaining patiently.


" Toh aur bhi haina bhai institute mei? " Swayam simple stated.

" But they are already loaded with other stuff. Ab mei karun kya?? aur Iski wajah se problem so mai gussa nahi karsakta??? " he looked at her accusingly enjoying her expressions inward.

" Tumne bola na koi ek solution hai ? " Vijay said in deep thought. This is a problem indeed .

" Haan hai but wo hoga nahi " he said and walked back to his chair to complete his dinner.

" arey kyun nahi " Kriya said immediately.

" Tumhari wajah se " he looked at her blankly and looked back at his plate.

" Meri wajah se kyun?? maine kya kiya?? "

" Meri dance partner banogi??? " he left the spoon and turned towards her totally.

" Kya?? " she was shocked at the sudden question.

" Haan, you have it in you, thoda kaam karna padega but I can manage and I don't think mujhe apni wife se saath chemistry lane mei koi problem hogi " he said with a small smile.

" Nahi!! " she said immediately.

" dekha , I knew it tum nahi karogi!! Isiliye jab tak meri problem ki solution nahi milti lemme be like this. Bewajah tumpe chillana nahi chahta " he looked to other side and smiled .


Rey kuch jyaada hi drama nahi kar raha tu?

He chuckled at his thought.

" Bhabhi karlona , kya problem hai itna acha dance toh karti ho aap " Swayam motivated her and his parents joined too.

" Par mai toh trained nahi hun! Mai nahi kar paungi! "

" mai train karunga na , remember I am a dance instructor?? " Rey smirked at her.

" Nahi hoga fir bhi " she said tensed.

" Lo !! Meri wife ko hi meri talent pe trust nahi hai . Period. " he raised his hands offended.

" nahi nahi , mera matlab wo nahi tha " she said meeekly.


" toh haa boldo, ban jao meri dance partner " he looked directly into her eye. And the rest three started chanting " haan boldo Kriya " mantra and with no choice she nodded make Rey grin wide.

" Thanks a lot !! " he hugged her tight making her stumble but he balanced them from falling.

****


" Kya kar rahe ho?? " she asked sitting beside him on the bed.

" gaana select kar raha hun . Routine bhi toh prepare karni hai humari dance keliye " he looked at her and whispered on her fake, making her shiver. She sometimes hated this fact that in a second he can change the air around them and make her weak in knees.

" par routine toh pehle se ready haina?? Wo Shilpa ke saath wala " she made a face taking her name.

She saw him smile, and she knew that naughty smile. Even after knowing she got startled when he suddenly pulled her close to him and leaned in to her ear and whispered.

" Apni wife ke saath normal salsa thodi karunga " he said in a heavy voice. She did get what he meant. And now she wanted to draw back. He is for sure going to make it intense. And would she be able to handle that?? And just the thought sent down a deep shiver down her spine .

" Mujhe neendh aarahi hai " she tried to rub off the topic and almost turned around when she heard him .

" Kriya!! "

" Hmm" She answered without turning around.

" sorry " he said honestly.

" Mujhe tumse seedha poochna chahiye tha!! But tum maanti nahi ho " he sighed.

" It's okay " she smiled and walked away to change into night clothes , all he did is stare at her roam across the room.


*****


Super ganda tha na !!😆 Abhi mujhe samajh aaya !!😆

Adjust karlo!! Aaj mei kuch jyaada hi excited hun apni actual sense mei rehne keliye!!😆 Itne din baad aisi update!! haha!! ooppsss solly😛😆 Enjoy enjoy🤣

-Deetha😛



Edited by -Blind.Dance- - 11 years ago
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ps plz is baar jaldi upgrade de do its gonna b 2 months plz 😭
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dee itne din baad upgrade diya😭

par theek hai koi ni
coming 2 d upgrade it was nice
bechari kriya ko rula diya rey ne

yey kriyaansh partners

plz is bar jaldi upgrade karing
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Plz cntinu ur wrks they are amazng n spcly this 1
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Woapsss

Bang Onnn

Awesome

Ahmazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Marvelous

Awestruck

Mindblowing

so much was dere

don't know where to start from

Swaron were damn Adorable

Kriyam were funn

haye KR ka toh pocho mat

Surprises for rey by kria

Shilpa ki band baji on phone

Rey poor soul confused

sharon sitting in rey's lap n kria jealous haha

Swaron moment in KR's room

den before partyy moments

Kria making rey feel all special

Partyy dance

n den lat lag gayi

woaps loved rey's family

n dere reaction to dis dance

dey r Awesome man

poor reyam..just sung for funn an hehe

Krisha's attack on Shilpa

n rey supported kria coz he knew how vulnerable she looked

poor reyam..girls gussa

n den again KR it was

n finally 2-2 kisses together + 2 swaron pecks eeeps

Mind Blasting Update

Loved it to core ;)
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Dee chapter complete to karo!
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