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riti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: blueballoon
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this is my favorite chapter Rits...🤗

it came out really well 👏 n the dialogues are hard hitting n words have power in them...👏

ofcourse ... that would have pierced Shekhar's heart to hear from meera those words... 😒

A very well written chapter n i mean it... really good... really👏👏

🤗aww thats so sweet jachu...thanks 😳

@bold- I deliberately kept focus more on meera's emotions...n completely sidelined shekhar's one...for this...still i see you all sympathising with shekhar more...😆...dont wry shekhar is strong guy...

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riti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: -Farwa_Ibrahim-
Wao Riti such an awesome piece yara... I loved it from the start n told u but as the story progressed it just got better n better... Meera's state of denial was so heart touching felt so bad for her when she went comparment after compartment in search for Sammer's name. Then she was ready to go to shimla to search him. Shekhar is such an awesome frnd n lover. He was always there beside Meera even when she was being married to someone else. And even now when she is searching for Sameer like a maniac he is again there with her. When he told her abt Sameer's death n tht it was reality. Her reaction made my heart bleed. Poor Shekhar he is also suffering with Meera. His mother said the right thing. Meera did wht we expected from her but her last words were not right. Felt bad for Shekhar. Now Sameer's mum will convince Meera. It was just beautiful. I read the remaining 7 parts today in one hr I guess n couldnt stop without finishing it
P.S thanx yaar for hyperlinked index love u for this muah

🤗 thanks so much fari... you read it all in one go😲...welcome to my readers club then😃..Thanks for liking the story so far...and well you gave a little spoiler for next final one too...😆

thanks for appreciating and making this beautiful comment dear...hope the last one lives up to the story so far...😃

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riti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: vqwerty
Again an amazing one hun👏👏
Meera's feelings wer perfect in her situation,as we can't expect her to understand Shekar's feelings directly..
She never knew his love for her and thinks it is out of sympathy he is asking her
Shekhar shld make her feel his love is nt just a sympathy but a true one 😃 And waiting for that to happen and make her realise that she has nt lost him😃😃
Second last chap😲Eagerly waiting for the last one😃

Hey viji🤗

I am glad that u liked it...😃😃 ..yes dear next one is last one... lets see how she realises and what decision is taken...😃

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

hi riti,

just read the last two chap[ters at a go. i love the emotions here. especially that proposal by shekhar. quite a guy. gentle, tender, soft, caring, patient, deep, trustworthy but not a wimp.

and i liked he could make her angry. she is too steeped in a feeling. someone has to shake her out of it... and something. maybe it will be this feeling that penetrates beyond the shield of pain and loss?

thanks riti, really enjoyed.

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riti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: indi52
hi riti,

just read the last two chap[ters at a go. i love the emotions here. especially that proposal by shekhar. quite a guy. gentle, tender, soft, caring, patient, deep, trustworthy but not a wimp.

and i liked he could make her angry. she is too steeped in a feeling. someone has to shake her out of it... and something. maybe it will be this feeling that penetrates beyond the shield of pain and loss?

thanks riti, really enjoyed.

thanks indi di🤗

@bold-😊 yes he seems unreal at times...isnt it..😆but you described it well... yes meera needs to come out of it...actually this was whole story idea... how she comes out of it..is yet to be seen...but had this in mind...if one looses love ...can she /he ever move on...😊..and when in front of her...there is whole new world...full of love for her...will she try or not... or will she let this go by...

@bold- it is interesting to explore this further...hope you will like the end...😃

always happy to see you here...it encourages me more😃

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mishaj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Hmm...some times na,we readers feel the the writer z a "saddist"...who z "torturing" both d characters n d readers throughan emotional turmoil.

...such kind f a chapter z dis... !

So dere z no "unconditional" love or anythinng ...shekhar loves Meera for himself too...
And Meera z d most confused character here...wt will she do now?

Looking forward to d NEXT update...:)

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mpk2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: mishaj
Hmm...some times na,we readers feel the the writer z a "saddist"...who z "torturing" both d characters n d readers throughan emotional turmoil.

...such kind f a chapter z dis... !

So dere z no "unconditional" love or anythinng ...shekhar loves Meera for himself too...
And Meera z d most confused character here...wt will she do now?

Looking forward to d NEXT update...:)

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