FF: SOME HIDDEN SECRETS #3 link to thread 4 pg 142

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#231

cant wait for them to be a family!

lovely update

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Blondiexzy

@Blondiexzy

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

nice update poor Arnav regret everything bad he did to khushi and hoping for forgiveness and Khushi is being a little hard now I hope she forgive him soon where is that caring and loving khushi gone.

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sweety96

@sweety96

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

osome read it in 1 go ...

update soon...

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Sajinabi

@saj111

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

First of all PC a very big Sorrry 4 late comment becoz dis was d first time Iam seeing dis beautiful FF Clapping Hands

when u send me d PM, from dat onwards I needed to read it from 1st chapter to till 18th chapter. I must say dis was d spectaculous chapters all together becoz I could get d feel of emotions of all character when I read all 18 chapters other than reading it one after d one after weeks or months according to ur convience, which we cannot blame u as everyone as their own works to be done .Now coming to d chapters, just one word to say extremely outstanding chapters PC You're the best

. From d begining d misunderstanding and d forced marriage was just like d show. But really felt very bad 4 Khushi as everyone abanded her and made her unwanted Crying 1

including Anjali who knows every truth Grrr

. How could Anjali play such a cheap play which even made low dan Shyam kicking Dirt

, becoz of Anjali her chotte's life has become so miserable and now even more miserable dat he even could be there when Khushi needs him d most when Khushi was expecting 😭 and raising a child single handed although her brother was their with her but a father's position no one can take.

Finally Arshi's daughter itself made d attempts to make them together . Loved how she gave Aman d details about Khushi and how Arshi pre-planned to meet her father at d resturant and gave her background details as a clue 4 Arnav to findout who she is . This was my fav part and really cherished father-daughter union.

Arnav-Arshi-Abhay, d trio gang in one mission to make Khushi accept Arnav and forgive 4 his mistakes, although all three of them play's their game different but its "One Mission Different Ways" Ghetto Fab

dis title is perfect apt 4 them. Loved father's day poem which Arshi recited 4 Arnav and eagerly waiting 4 Arshi's birthday to see how Arnav and Khushi will re-unite once again 4d sake of their daughter.

Thank u sooo much 4d pm PC Thank You

and I sincerly apologise dat I haven't comment on other ff's other than "Silent Admirer" and "Married but still strangers" but will comment on it when I read them, once I get time and will give my lenghty comment detailed about d story ur writing it perfectionistly. My advance head bowing to u PC Bow Down

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fleurs

@fleurs

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Amazing update 😊

Arshi acting innocent as though she didn't know about her dad, Khushi being confused for having imagined Arnav & then she brushing of the topic on being asked by Arshi as to why she didn't go back to Arnav was a wonderful scene

Arnav & Khushi's meet at his house was enjoyable to read 😃

Thanks for the PM. Eagerly waiting for the next update

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janu

@jenji08

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

amazing update
i loved it
thanks 4 pm

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 49

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Awesome update!

Loved it! ❤️

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Oh thank god they managed to cover up their meeting
Loved Arnav teasing her first with 1st her seeing him without shirt then her imagining him where she goes
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon

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@pancakes

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#239

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Khirad

@-ILoveSaRun-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#240

Woohoo im firsst 🥳 🥳

and wo bhi first time on your work!😃

Loved the update.. and ArShi is so intelligent, Now or never! Whoa.. ASR's daughter and aww poor girl! She must hv been asked abt Arnav many times and he wasn't there for his daughter. Ah.. Well.. Finally!😃 and lol the cake thing. Love the way Arnav was teh one who brough the cake😊 Superb update but Shorrrt.. Anyways.. Waiting for the next eagerly!

Edited by -RabbaVe- - 12 years ago