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Posted: 11 years ago
vry nce update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey vry nce update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 16

So here I back with update. I don't get my lap often so the updates are late. Sorry for that and yeah didn't proof read * as usual *rolling eyes* so adjust karlo.

Hope you like it :)

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" Hello Mom !! " he said trying not to be rude .

"Beta kaha ho ?? " the poor mother asked with concern when she got a reply dipped in sarcasm.

"Abhi jannat mei jane wala tha , par ab narak mei jaunga " he said when a sudden twist took place in Kriya's tummy exciting her as she realized what he was reffering to .

"Kya beta?? " his mom asked highly confused.

"Kuch nahi mom aap batao "

" arey bas ye poochna tha ghar kab tak aaoge?? Bohut raat hogayi na ?? " he smiled at her. She is so scared to loose him from the time Shwetha died. Nodding his head at his mom's cute concern he lovingly spoke to her.

"Mom mai ghar hi aaraha hun, bas ek do ghante mei pohunch jaunga. Actually city outskirts pe hun , kriya ke saath drive pe aaya. Usse drop karke aajaunga . Aap sojao . " She sighed in relief knowing Kriya is with him. Now she doesn't need to worry.

"acha theek hai beta !! Dhyaan se donon wapas aajana theek hai ?? "

"haan mom, bye goodnight , ab so jao aap " he said and ended the call. Lifting his head he saw the beauty in front of him looking like a tempting hot -chocolate and teasing to taste it . He chuckled at his thoughts making her look at him.

"Hume ghar jaana chahiye , naanu will be tensed " he said as she nodded a yes. And he jumped down off the car leaving her shocked. How will she get down now. He got down so quickly and she is afraid of jumping from heights. Adjusting her saree covering her legs she left her foot down but tried all ways to get down when her body stiffened even without her notice and that's when she realized his grip over her waist. No no ... "Bare waist " . He gripped a bit more and pulled her towards him when in reflex she held his shoulders and in nervousness jumped front , leading him to take few steps back balancing and immediately wrapping his one arm around her waist and his face almost dug in her waist.

As his blood rushed at high speed he brought her down slowly looking into her eyes which were now locked with his. Making her stand on his feet he quickly lifted her in arms . She was about to say and object but looked away from his intense stare. He walked around and opened the door and made her sit inside. She wondered what happened to her that he is not letting her walk. Here he just didn't want to move away from her so finding another excuse he pulled the seat belt and leaned in more into her as she stuck to the seat gasping at the closeness they shared. After clicking it he moved slightly back only to see her looking at him with eyes wide and breathing hard. Looking in her eyes fow a few seconds his gaze turned to her parted glossed lips. And he leaned in to capture then when she quickly turned her face to left and a small smile took place on his lips as she blushed. He then moved a bit back and once again tried to capture her lips this time a bit quick but still she turned her head to right blushing hard and widening his smile. This is fun. Kissing her would be fun. He said to himself mentally . He wanted to pull back but his unsatisfied harmones groaned in anticipation and thus he bent down and bit the soft flesh at the border of her bluose neck , which was a bit deep and she tried hard to suppress her moan but it escaped her mouth and a sudden shudder made him shiver. With an unknown satisfaction he walked to the driver seat leaving his mark proudly near her heart.

As they drove to her house , even though he wanted to hold her and caresses her he knew he could wait. Infact he should wait and give her the enough time to digest the suddent turn of events.

Till few hours back he was her best -friend. But now, they are not together , yet he crossed all those lines and stood in her personal space which even a friend would never enter into . What should she think about this which happened few minutes back??
Does he too have feelings for her or it's just the environment which lead to this. Whatever it is one thing she is firm about. She will not speak or ask him anything about that took place between them few minuted back. He may say it a spur of moment, or a mistake ...and her heart is not at all ready to hear such things about the first ever heavenly moment she experienced in her life. So pulling the glass down she looked out letting the wind caress her hair.

He smiled looking at her and even at him. What has he become. He was in love for the second time. But he was never this matured in his first love. Or may be he never needed to . Because his first relation was so frank and easy going. Right from wanting a kiss they used to speak their thoughts loud. So he never felt the need to observe and understand what is going on in his love's mind and heart. But with Kriya he actually can read her hidden feelings. Kriya was a highly shy girl and introvert. And he loved this feeling. Understanding your lover and acting according to it. He finally pulled the car in her verandah and she got down all lost . She mumbled a good night back to him as she heard him never looking back and was about to go when something stopped her. Her eyes widened. What the hell is he doing ? That too in front of her house.

"Rey chodiye na " she stammered tensed as she felt her pallu held by him. Rey who was drinking water looked at her confused and giggled silently and quietly got off the car and walked to the passengers door where her saree pallu was struck.

"Rey please , naanu ya naani dekhenge toh " she stammered more tensed with his actions . Here Rey leaned on the car beside her pallu was struck and giggled taking sips from the bottle in between.

"Rey please " she turned finally but as soon as the reality hit , her face was flushed and he could actually see that high and dark red color covering her face as she looked down embarrassed. He laughed out loud and freed her pally from the door.

Is he really having this much effect on her ?? He wondered. Highly embarrassed she turned back to leave when now Rey in actual held her pallu and she is very well aware that it's him as just now he freed her pallu from the car door . He slightly pulled her back when she took steps back breathing hard.

What are they doing?? Why is he coming this close to her. They are best of friends right?? Just friends?? Her mind froze as he finally wrapped his hand on her waist and her back banged into his hard front. Nuzzling deep into her curls he spoke totally turned on and his voice reflecting how much he is turned on.

" You look so beautiful today. Though I wanted to see you totally dressed up , but bina make up ki bhi you are gorgeous . Kriyaaa!! " he slightly groaned planting a wet kiss and sucking the flesh there making her weak in knees.

"Go before I do something " he left her free and she without a second thought ran in breathing hard and closed the door behind her and leaning on the door breathed high.

" You are now aware of my feeling Kriya , but still mai koi confusions ya misunderstandings nahi chahta. Kal mai tumhe apni dil ki baat batake rahunga. " he spoke looking at her window and finally sat and drove to his house. Hell , he is already embarrassed thinking about th situation of his in the morning as he was sure she will rule his dreams and his dreams had no bounds today.

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Here ends the chapter. Hope it's good .

Reviews and likes please !!

Love Ya all !!

Deetha 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
yaayyy pehle res
finally unressingg😆
yaayyy first one to cmnt let me dancee
u knw massi how much i love this stryyy
this part wass fab awsmmm
poor reyyy kiss hone wale the lekin rey ke mom ne call karke disturb kardee😆
"Abhi jannat mei jane wala tha , par ab narak mei jaunga " this lineee🤣🤣 ye line actuaally cracked mee😆😆
poor rey babyyy😆😆

and thatt haye rey kitna effecct karta hai kriya koo😳
and the pallu scene i loved itt😳
Fadu update n I loved their thoughts n emotions
Specially the maturity part about rey
and end🤢 goshhh rey kitna turned on haiii kash kiss karta kria koo☺️
and haa the way he tried to kiss her and kria har baarrr escape ki hhehe😆
and pls massi jaldi confession dedooo
update next part soon waitinggg
and this part was mindblowingg👏
Edited by ramya.reddy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ihaaattteeeyyyooouuu
Confession nahi n not even their kiss
Pout
Sirf tadpao aap
Huh
Hume bhi n unhe bhi
Gandu so
Fadu update n I loved their thoughts n emotions
Specially the maturity part about rey
Speaks a lot
And end was :o :o :o
Non veg b daal diya
:P
Please confession dedo maaa
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Posted: 11 years ago
i loved loved loved it...
their romantic encounters r so so amazing nd beautiful...
loved the pallu scene...
dee tu kafi tadpati hai...
plz NT nd second love bi update kr
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my my myyy..

this story is getting heavenly with each passing update *drools*

u actually write some amazing Romance stuffs...u know that no ? ;)

i loved that one moment when he leaned in to kiss her twice and she shifted her face both the times...

that pallu thing was ROFL...hahahahaa


and when in the end he said "go before i do somthing" ...woahhh..dhak dhak...

i loved it..!!!

beautifulll chapter babes!!! :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
Eeepss!!
I'm loving thiss!! :')
You didn't show their kiss or confession but whatever you showed I loved it!
Their small romance, the flirting Rey who is controlling his feelings real hard is great to see!

It was all beautifully written, but i loved the Ending the most! Pulling kriya towards him, nuzzles into her curls, Places a wet kiss and then says "Go before I do something" *_____* I swear I loved that bit!!

Amazing Update! :*
Edited by shelly_Arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Romantic update
i luvd it
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Yeah
Update
Love the update
The aftermath of the kiss
Love the different points of view
And rey reaction to the phone call
Update soon

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