Twin souls... part 17 page 82 (KR SS)

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Ramya sree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#381

dee iska update do na pleshhh😛

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#382

Hey ppl i m back wid update...so now a days i coulnt just get my hands on laptop so for the first time i m updating from mobile...so mistakes keliyye maaf kardo. and more over...this wikl come to end in some 6-7updates maximum. hopefully u will like it.

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slowly pulling back he sensed her stiffening.smiling at the effect he had on her he finally pulled back. "didn't u miss me ??" he asked normally to lighten the atmosphere.She smiled at him and silently nodded a yes.He grinned.

"acha ye batao kya laayi mereliye? tune message kiya tha na." he asked excited and as soon as hearing she forgot the awkwardness and dragged him to he room. He saw her deagging her big bag all the way to the bed. He saw her searching for something excitedly. He was surprized as she opened a box and a gorgeous watch shinned instantly making him fall for it. He has this un- dying craze for watches and keeping in mind bought this beauty for him. He was as she thought what he would like.

"Kaisa hai???" she asked excited showing it to him.

"kriya that is a beauty. thank you so much. love you yaar "he said taking the watch and examining it. "kya kaha " she asked in disbelief. "thank you bola " he said still looking at watch. || shayad Rey ne friendly manner mei bola. He doesn't even realize kriya. Stop dreaming " scolding herself she looked at him

" wear it " saying this she herself placed it around his wrist n clicked it close.She grinned seeing it on his hand as it complimented his complexion. "acha wait mai kuch chocolates bhi laayi thi,abhi leke aati hun " she chirped and ran down when he finally let the happy mask down. "Oh God! mai itna darr kyun raha hun...I love you hi toh bolna hai... Rey you can do it come on " he started jumping kicking his fist into the air but soon stopped.

"Rey I love bolna hai kick boxing nahi , stop jumping take a deep breathe and behave. " He calmed his nerves. " Nahi abhi nahi...kal dinner pe leke jaunga aur propose karunga.yes ye sahi rahega. I will make this night speecial for you Kriya. I promise " grinning he waited for her.

" Kriya tum aaj free ho ? "he asked over the phone. "haan kyun ? "she replied confused. "toh shaam ko tum mere saath dinner pe chalogi ...no arguments ". "haa theek hai par occassion kya hai ? anything special ? "

"haina ,special bhi aur important bhi " he whispered making her shiver. God it's just his voice ...she cursed herself.

"then its final...mai 6 ko tumhaea ghar pohunchta hun ? is it okay ?" he asked literally jumping in excitement. "kk... fine. " she replied with a smile.

"acha ,toh shaam ko milte gai abhi mujhe thoda kaam hai. bye. " "bye "she said slowly after the line went dead. She doesn't know why but her tummy is doing somersaults. Blushing thinking about rey n the kiss he gave on her cheek the other day she walked to grab her book and read.

Taking a deep breathe and once again looking at himself in the mirror sdjusting his haies he got down the car an adjusted his blazer. Patting the red rose in the inner pocket he looked at her room window and grinned. Smiling he walked in and as usual he met her naanu sitting the living room and watching tv.

"Naanu kriya kaha hai ? " he grinned.

"wo toh kabki hospital chaligayi beta " he said as Rey stood shocked.

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Reviews Please :)

-Deeth😃

Edited by -Blind.Dance- - 11 years ago

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David

@arshafan94

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Posted: 11 years ago

#383

Wow amazing update.

Loved it all together.

And end yaar spoiled Rey's plan.

Anyhow waiting to know what was the urgent matter that made Kria go to the hospital so early

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Meghna

@meghzzzz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#384

awesum part...
Kria brought watch for rey...
Rey said love u... But bechara kitna darr raha hai...
KR dinner date n proposal...
But end mein kria ko hospital bhej dia...
Well mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki kria k nanu mazak kr rahe hai...

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moumita

@sumimita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#385

shit hospital...!!!!!

hope koi misunderstanding na hojaye dono k beech...

well deeths the update was really superb...

loved the nervous rey..

only 6 to 7 updates are left for this story??? chalo thik hai..

if possible pls update it soon

with lots of love

moumita

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

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Posted: 11 years ago

#386

Chapter 11
I m loving that
Rey missing kriya badaly so much
Finally buddhu ko apni feeling realize hui hai
And thaks to all his mom
Video chat the most cutest and loving agar kriya samane hoti tho pakka rey mad ho jata tha
Awesome update
Gr8 work deetha

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

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Posted: 11 years ago

#387

Part 12
Beautifully
Kriya ka msg milate hi 2 din ki chuti sabki tho maze hai pray karo unki shadi ho jaye tho har din mazze hai
Rey aaya bhi aur kriya ko soti hui dekh kar advantge bhi utha liya bad manners rey
Awesome update

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Ramya sree

@ramya.reddy

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#388

awsm update loved it
ye baht chota hai next time give lambs one naaa
rey trying to propose kriya he he
par nhn kar pa rahaaa
finally he decided to take her out for dinner and propose
parr kria hospital kyun chaligayyee
update next part soon
waiting

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MysticMuse

@Mystic_Muse

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#389

Awesome update

Par ye kriya ko rey k saath jana tha na To wo hospital kyun chali gayi

Update next part soon

Thanks for pm

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

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Posted: 11 years ago

#390

Chapter 13
Ahe ahem
Kriya gone full wild
While wraping sari she imagine rey with him
And punch woh bhi sudden pain tho karega na
Hug and kiss kriya ur gone insane now

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