ArHi FF:|Falling In Love #2|Link To New Thread Pg1 - Page 11

Originally posted by: segad

i feel for the poor guy. he has been thru a lot. certainly did not deserve her spineless behaviour.

pyaar karna hai to nibhaanaa bhi padega. rishta joda hai to use bhi nibhaanaa padega.

she was supposedly in love with shyam, but could not find it in her to tell him about her upcoming wedding.

she was not honest about her feelings with Buaji as well.

and most certainly, when you take a vow in a sanctified setting about being with someone, it is meant to be upheld and not when it suits you. she entered into a relationship with arnav knowing what it meant. no one forced her into the marriage. she felt an obligation and decided to marry. well deciding and following thru are two different animals. did she ever pause to consider the implications of her decision on the lives of the people around her? did she ever consider what it might mean to arnav?

pardon me but she comes across as incredibly immature, self absorbed and a coward who can't stand by their decisions nor do they communicate them to the people who are affected. strong words i know but sometimes they are needed to get thru to people who are wallowing in their own sorrow and can't see beyond their own little puddle

arnav is drowning in his sorrow too but he does consider her health and the fact that he is aware of his own shortcomings and how he might react to her. he is already planning to set her free. rushed decision for sure but ultimately it is for her happiness as he perceives it. he is thinking beyond himself unlike his wife

Originally posted by: aayt

if he belong to fashion industry how he can be simple

no dressing sense like as he portrayed in earlier updates

first u judge a person from his appearance n second his profession demands fashion sense

n like u mention shyam looks like this n that in her reception what about arnav

u didn't even described how arnav looks like in this story I felt like

shyam is charmer Greek God types in arnav an ordinary man with no good looks

n sorry but being arnav's fan can't digest the fact shyam is more handsome to arnav😳

plz work on that part

feeling really bad for arnav how he came to know the truth

khushi lost her love but shyam n she herself to blame here

shyam simply refused to marriage n khushi didn't try with shyam n her bua too

so as well she was not loyal with arnav too she'd talk to him about her past

but she didn't find the need of it

he was so heart broken n y not he been cheated by his own wife

n still he is ready to sacrifice

it is lovely story

I know I said lot it was about all 9 chaps cause I read all together

liked it

continue soon

pm me plz

Originally posted by: madhusquare

Hi manjari

I found this FF on the forum and read all the nine parts in one go


Its awesome

the concept is new and is quite interesting


I loved the way you portrayed the pain felt by arnav


would love to read more


I will send a buddy request to you
Please pm for future updates