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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
it vl b romantic story na??
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Interesting start :) poor Arnav is going through so much at such a young age :(
update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Glad you start a new FF & i love the concept
i will miss Between Two Strangers.
Eagerly waiting for your pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Deeps OMG sounds AWESOME!!!!!! Only 19 years old ... nice start ... poor thing is all alone but its nice that you have included Shashi as his father's friend :D Kind of glad that there is no anjali/ shyam coz thier drama gets kind of annoying! lol Can't wait to see how this develops :D Thanks for the PM ... I look forward to reading more :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
wow wat a start...sounds very interesting..do continue soon...i am sure you are gonna rock like ur previous FF...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Wow... That was Awesome prologue
Love it
Waiting for the updates
Please continues soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepthiya


Dee, the accident is not planned. You will see reason in upcoming chappies.

okay.. then do update sooon... plzzz 😃 😃 😃 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Emotional but very interesting start. Would love to read on.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The prologue was interesting, different, refreshing & BRILLIANT 👍🏼


The starting scene of a happy family enjoying the ride but fate playing its role but destroying this cute little family in the shape of a truck was very emotional especially Arnav's father uttering Chote will leaving his last breath

Arnav reminiscing as to how his family who meant the world to him were no more & left his life barren, he enraged at the reporter's question, he intently looking at his dead family & wondering why his happy life was snatched away all of a sudden & he pondering over the last conversation he had with his dad was well written portraying the unbearable pain that Arnav was undergoing 😭

What a horrible man Manohar 😡 😡 😡 is…………… sick of him to break the trust that Aran had over him & betray Arnav by snatching away all his property that rightfully belonged to him & that was his hard earned one thereby leaving the 19 year old boy who had lost his precious family stranded & helpless. Manohar did give Arnav only 30 mins to vacate his mansion 😡……… hope Arnav teaches a lesson in the hardest way possible in the future for his deceit & also for having messed up with his life. I was wondering if Manohar was responsible for the accident by when I read the prologue once again I read that the truck driver was drunken

I pitied Arnav for not even a single person came forward to help this teenager in need. When I read this part it immediately reminded me of the quote that I read few years back

" In prosperity our friends know us

In adversity we know our friends"

- Anonymous


Arnav rushing to see the locker, his hands shivering to open the letter; Aran's letter that gave him an insight & advise of how to face this cruel world, asking Arnav to meet Shashi in case of need, & finally telling him that he would be watching him from above was so emotional & touching 👏

Though this is a fiction but still my heart wept for the little boy. Deeps the story is awesome. The way u've penned down Arnav's emotions was marvelous 👏Eagerly waiting to read chapter 1

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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Oh my god!
Zat was freaking Awesome!!
I loved it!!
His dad had been proactive :)
Thnxx for pm!
ps:Sorry for late reply..actually i was really busy..ive just logged in..and im reading all my pms now..

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