ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 1 - COMPLETED - Page 8

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kharunya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Excellent prologue.

By reading it, i can assume it is a good story

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Deepthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Dee.
the accident wasn't planned or was it ??? 😕

btw ncie start continue soon
take care :)

Dee, the accident is not planned. You will see reason in upcoming chappies.

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Deepthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dewdrop6
Wow! vry interesting prologue , Deepthi..

It reminded me of the Birla scion whu unfortunately went thru the same fate as Arnav! Yashvardhan Birla too lost his parents n sister in a tragic accident(plane crash)
Wonderful writin dear.
Lukin frwd fr more updates :)

Oh really. I didnt know that. Well I hope Arnav raises to that level..Thanks for pointing it out :)

Deeps.

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Sarita Kaur

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Posted: 12 years ago

Seems good
Poor arnav
Update again soon

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Jignasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

Very interesting start...loved how you laid out his past ahead of time to know how he becomes ASR. Can't wait to see how Sashi and his family help him. Guessing this is how our Khushi comes into the story. Excellent job!

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divya

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Posted: 12 years ago

loved d prologue

lukng fwd

congo on d nw ff

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tabzz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Deeps this FF is super hit from first chp itself 👏

My god I am shock how beautiful and confidently you write 😲

LOL kamar kas lo aur lag jao kaam pe is super hit FF ko pura karne 😃

All the best 👍🏼

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Pooja agarwal

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanku for d pm dii

updated my cmnt on page 3

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Iqra

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Posted: 12 years ago

A painful start...

what is written in other letter?

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bewakoofLadki

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Posted: 12 years ago

omg
its intresting
do update sooon plsss
pleaseee

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