Taarey Os - || Amor ||

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Hmmm.. So guys.. This Os was a dare given by Amrita ! (AmieAtUrService)

Hope you like it Amie .. This One's for u .. :)
Author's Note - Ok guys, I know i suck at depressive writing .. So, dont kill me for writing this

"Kabhi kisiko mukkamal jahan nahi milta
Kahin zameen nahi to kahin aasman nahi milta ..."

Taarey Os - || Amor ||


Few years ago..
In some world ..

~ Music ~

A man in his early twenties walking sub - conciously on the road and ... Thud ... a Car crashes into him . People nearby took him to the hospital ..

Next morning , He wakes up and finds himself in the hospital , more pricesly on the hospital bed . 'White' was all what he could see with his blur eyes and .. and something .. something red

Ho Oo Hoo Hooo
Ho Oo Hoo Ooo
Hoo Oo o .

There came and stood a fairy in front of him . Was he in heaven ?
" Hi , I am your Doctor , Dr. Taani " She spat out sweet melodies out of her mouth . And Blank .. He fainted

Kaise Mujhe Tum Mil Gayi
Kismat Pe Aaye Na Yakeen

"What's your name ?" "Reyaansh .. Reyaansh Singhania"

"Do you intake Drugs"' he heard again his nightingale speak agin as soon I opened my eyes after a long sleep to say
"Hmmm " Was all he could murmur " Heroin ?" She asked
"Hmmm " was again the answer

Utar Aye Jheel Main Jaise
Chaand Utarata Hai Kabhi
Houle Haule Dhere Se


"Wanna join my Drug rehab ? Maybe you can lead a better life" she asked with the uttmost sincerity and innocense on her face . "Yes" If you are the reward then Yes , he added in his mind

Gunguni Dhoop Ki Tarah Se
Tarnnum Main Tum


He entered the Rehab . It had cheerful atmosphere but he seldom cared . He loved lonliness , the content to stay alone.And then he saw her . She was looking like a angel as usual . Her white churidar complimenting her Skin , those silver bangles making noise while she talked with her hands moving to her patients

Chookey Mujhe
Guzri Ho Yun

She saw and waved her hand indicating him to come in . She moved towards him and held him by shoulder introducing him to the rehab students while he just kept staring at her. That touch , He never had felt someone so soft as her

Dekhon Tumhe
Ya Mein Sunoo


She was saying something , maybe lecturing about humanity or drugs . But he was just busy admiring her .The way she spoke , Her lucious pulpy lips , her curls that bounces while she moved to and fro saying something ..

I will leave them. Yes, I will . Atleast , I 'll try .. Try it for my love . 'Otherwise who will accept a druggie 'he sighed

Tun Ho Junoon
Kyun Pehle Na Aai Tum

His room revolved a 360 around him
He wanted it . He wanted it now . " God ! Please someone give me the heck drug." He rumaged through his whole room making it a mess. Finally , Ah! Finally .. He found it .

'mmm ' he inhaled it .

Kaise Mujhe Tum Mil Gayi
Woo ooo ooo
Kismat pe aaye na yakeen

" Heck ! Why the hell did I do that. Kyun liye meine drugs dubara se. Low determination - Another side effect of intaking Heroin. Freak " He punched the Wall

Main To Ye Sochta Tha
Ke Aaj Kal
Uppar Wale Ko Fursat Nahi
Phir Bhi Tumhein Banake Woh

The whole Rehab went to Dargah today to pray for the well being of their family . While this was another trick to remove lonliness from the life of drug addicts by Taani . The wish to stay alone - Another side effect of intaking drugs.

Meri Naazar Mein Chadha Gaya
Rutbe Main Woh Aur Badh Gaya

Here , with him . He just admired Taani while she prayed to Allah ..Her eyes closed , hands joined to form a moon , to pray to lord.

Aa Aa Aaa
Aa Aa Aaa aaa

Days passed by.. There was imporevent with his consumption of Heroin but nothing was concrete. The more he tried to leave them , the more he had the desire to have them.
It was a bound that trapped him . The bound of Drugs.
As they say ' Drugs insaan ko andar se khaa jate hai ' but still his last hope was Taani . He was alive seeing her

Badley Raate Jharne Aur Nadi
Badkey Ret Tim Tim

He watched her dancing in the Rains . How badly he wanted to be in her arms

Chhedhe Zindage Dhool Koi Nahi
Badley Barkha Ki Rimjhim

Today , He would propose her , no matter what .
Roses , Check . Clothes , Check . Ring , Check .

Badkengi Rituen Adaa

It rained . Monsoon , her favourite season . Seems like God wants to help him or maybe ...

Par Main Rahoongi Sada

He waited for her in the parking lot . He knew , she will come there . Atleast , Every evening she came

Usi Tarah ,Teri Bahon Mein Badhen Daalke

There , She was coming , drenching in Monsoon 's first rain

Har Lamha Har Pa

A black mercedes came to halt just in front of her . A man in his late twenties got out from the car and hugged her from behind .

Aaa Aaa Aa Aaa Aa

She turned and hugged him too. That man twirled her while she just laughed heartily enjoying the Rains

Whereas with Rey ,
He clenched his fist tightly seeing her in some other man's arms. The Roses which he had brought to adorn her were now the source of blood to ooze out from his hand. The ring which was to be in her finger was now fallen abandoned on the groud.

Zindagi Sitar Ho Gai
Rim Jhim Malhar Ho Gai

He turned and started walking unconciously on the road

Mujhe Aata Nahi Kismat Pe Aaye Na Yakeen
Kaise Mujhko Mil Gayi Tum

He walked aimlessly on the streets , not knowing where to go.
The Rain hiding his tear striken face under its sheets but how can something hide the pain which he had in his heart ...

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"Har Ishq ka waqt hota hai , aur yeh inka waqt nahi hai "

" No one knows what happened to Rey after that..
No one knows Where was Taani now ..

This is not a story of moral
Nor a tale of sacrifice ..

All we know is that it is a tale ..
A tale of untold , unsaid , true immortal yet one sided simple LOVE ! "

Lol.. Guys , had to do a lot of research for it.. Wrote it two times.. uhf 😉
I know i sucked at this
But the rules remains the same haa?? .. Do like n comment .. 😳
Ps . Seriously , Say no to Baba ji ki booti

PPS: Monkeys rock!



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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh no it ws damn emotional 😭
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Oh gosh! That was so so so sad. An amazing work!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww it was so emotional
But nice work :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey dear i loved the update
even if it was emotional
you expressed pain of rey very beautifully!👏
nice concept!😊
thanks for the pm!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice os was so emotional
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Ouch is the word for me ... Damn It was emotional till the extent it hurt and it hurt bad ! But I really Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that ws really a sad stry...
so emotional😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was damn emotional yar...😭 u nailed it... great job & ya u r ri8 monkeys rock...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ha ha ha,fr d lst line i'm sundg nuts.Yeah cmg to d stry,moral dscribd it perfctly.Gt smtg vry peculiar to rd,i enjyd it.

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