My Dream!!! *On Hold*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is my first ff so plz help me plz tell me seriously how is it an should i continue or not.😃

My Dream



BY YASHI DI (Thanx dii and miss u a lotss...)


Love u DI
Thanxs 4 this awesome piece 😳
BY COOKIE (.-Arpita-.)
I really loved it...


Chapter -1

After the NDC, the team was very happy coz,they won NDC.

In collage

One day all were present there except Rey.

And all the place was occupied except beside Taani's and the teacher was doing some account problem in board. Then the hero of the collage moves forward saying "May I come in, sir"

The teacher nodded his head in a yes.

He comes inside and sees that the entire place is occupied except the place near Taani. Happily goes there and sit, but Taani gets irritated.

Suddenly Taani phone starts ringing. Since her phone was in table Rey too could see a name 'Romeo' flashing. He gets super jealous but some how controls himself.

The teacher gets angry with her and she hurriedly cuts the call.

But again it starts to ring, but this time she didn't cut the call she tells the teacher that it was a important call & goes out to talk. Rey was super jealous. Just after few minutes the bell rang all come out of the class. Rey sees his princess talking & lauging and thinks to himself

Rey in mind "yeh kise baat kar rahi hai???(suddenly remembers the phone flashing the name romeo. He shows hs angry look and thinks again) woh ush crap se baatkar rahi hai.i need to ask swayam abt this romeo"and he leaves from there.

In RH,

Everybody was practicing then Rey joined them. Then they rehearse 4 sometimes and now they were getting some rest their. But Rey was lost in him.it didn't go unnoticeable by swayam so he asked him

Sw- Hey Rey, tujhe kya huwa hai dude tu thik toh hai na???

Rey asked hurriedly ask ' Taani ka koi bf tha kya Jodhpur me???

Sw was confused bt he said- no

Then rey again asked "toh kya woh kisi ko Romeo bulati thi"

Sw-oh woh

Main itni jaldi nahi batane wali ho agar aapko jaana hai yeh romeo kaun hai toh naa pehele like and comment karo phir bataungi okay guys

Aur muje pata hai ke aap chapal leke bethe ho every thing is allowed

And plz mujhe na sach batana how was it'😊

INDEX

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Promo and romeo's intro

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Chapter 7

Chapter 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start...you should continue 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SupErB...šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ¼

PlZzZ do continue..nhi to 😔😔

N PLzzZ updatE soOOnn 😊

PlzzZ PM me As WeLL šŸ˜›
Edited by Akanksha297 - 12 years ago
raveena1 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc strt dear..plz continue.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Awesome updates!!!
loved to see jealous rey so continue soon want to know who is romeo so waiting egarly.
but sorry my like button is not working so pls dont forgetto pm me when u update
-Fam_TaaReY- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
superb concept ... update soon
unitatoxo. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
Nice start dear 😊
You should defenately cont. 😊
Luvd this update to the core 😳
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome yaar
YAY jealous rey!!! Loving it
U should definitely continue it
And plz PM me if possible :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept dear plz con. this , update soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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do continue soon!!!!!!!! and pm me...and Romeo haa... nice nice...i love jealous Rey!!!

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