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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: cuppypie121

Mindblowing story ๐Ÿ‘
Aur jaldi reveal karo na yeh Romeo kon hai..!!


thank u
nxt chapter mein surly reveal karungi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: --taareylove---

awesome update loved it so much qt


than u so much dii
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: taarey1fan

awesome update...

ab jaldi se romeo ko reveal kardo...
thnk u 4 d pm...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š


thanx
paka nxt update me reaveal karungii
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
superb stry .. ๐Ÿ‘

read it 2day .. n itz awesum .. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

update soon ..
n pm me plz .. ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Hey dear I just read your whole story it is amazing ..! Please accept my buddy req n pm me when yu update waiting for knowing "Romeo" update soon n do pm me please ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
hey!!!
m new to ur story
it's awesome yaar๐Ÿ‘
fikar mat kro chota comment nahi dungi๐Ÿ˜†
so here i go
in chapter 1
i'm also happy that the team won the ndc๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
yipppiiie, party tym๐Ÿฅณ
OMG!!!!!
rey ki kya kismat hai
class mai late aane par bhi treat๐Ÿ˜ณ
seat bhi taani ke saath milli๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
and then
who is Mr. Romeo??????๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ฒ
jealoused rey ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
luv it
very bad itni jaldi nahi btaogi romeo ke baare mai๐Ÿ˜ก
in chapter2
kya romeo ki intro. to deti jao๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
wow paaarrrtttyyy
kise nahi pasand parties
but chapter bhut chota tha
so comment bhi chota hi milega๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
in chapter3
kya๐Ÿ˜ฒ tumne mere taarey se college clean krwaya๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ญ
ummm i luv llhh's๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
but humara typical possessive bhai swayam๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
taani ki leg ko dustbin mai phenkne nahi lga tha rey๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
jo itna accha romance bighar diya๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ญ
but luv reyam's care 4 taani๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
hmmm D3 team ki outing vo bhi jodhpur
seems interesting๐Ÿ˜Š
but where is romeo???๐Ÿ˜•
next update mai pka reveal krogi na...
so pls
update sooon๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
and pm me tooo๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by wow-taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Chapter ' 4

EDITED...

So guys main naa aaj hamare "darling romeo ko reveal karungi" and also a big shock bhi milega aap logo ko.so jaldi se padho

The d3 gangs were waiting for taayam outside house. Now taayam came out of the house.

Rey and boys (except swayam)got a shock of 440watt.rey mouth was open in shock..

she was wearing this dress:


Sharon noticed it and said "rey aapna muh band karo"

Rey could hardly do that but he closed his mouth forcefully and now Taani reach near the car and now taarey were having a LLHH scene which was interrupted by simmi

Simmi "Taani tum bohot achi lag rahi hoo.."Taani smiled and said "thank you" and she looked at rey. He was also smiling now.she also slightly smiled seeing him smile and she was totally lost in him.but as soon as she recover she faced the window and started staring to look at the scene.

After sometime they reach Jodhpur.(swayam was driving the car)

Swayam stopped the car in front of a big palace like building. It was really huge. It was like heaven.

Then Vicky said"Are Swayam yeh palace hum badme dekhenge. Please abhi Taani ke ghar chal naa. Plz hum log bohot thak gaye hai"

Then swayam said"are toh yehi toh hai Taani ka ghar"

All"what"

Taani"haa guys yehi hai mera ghar chalo."

This was the house

(now plz don't ask me k yeh Jodhpur mein kaha hai!!!)

As soon as she said this she ran inside the house started to shout loudly "dad...dad'"

The gang entered the gate.and taani's dad came running hearing his princess voice.

As soon as Taani saw her dad she hugged him as tight as she could her dad also did the same.

Then they broke the hug and Taani said with wetty eyes "I missed you dad"

Her dad also said" missed you too princess"

Then td (taani's dad)noticed swayam and the gang.

Td- are beta andar awo naa.

All came inside and swayam goes near td and bends to touch his feet but td stopped swayam and hug him. And turned to Taani and said "toh aap hume aapne dosto se nahi milwayenge???"

T ' oh sorry dad ha toh yeh Sharon hai''.(she introduce her dad to all now was a turn of a special person)and yeh hai rey.they had a eyelock for 10 secend but it was disturbed by the group which said

All says ' hellow uncle

Td smiles and says "hellow beta and plz ise aapna hi ghar samajna aur tum log bahot thak gaye hoge toh rest karo thik hai" he called the servants and tell them to take the luggage to their respective rooms. All (except swayam) were super shocked to know about Taani.

They could even not think in their dream that Taani belongs to such a rich family.

They all slept in their room.

Next day'

Td was reading newspaper. All D3 gang (except taani) came down and td wished them "good morning"

They also replied "good morning"to td.

Now a beautiful girl came from stairs. Rey was staring her.

She was looking just like a princess she came and hugged her dad from behind and said

like this...


Taani-good morning dad'

Td smiled and replied ' good morning princess

Then a man came in the house and said to td

Man ' good morning sir, who actually meeting k sab arrangement hogye hai and meeting wil start after sometime'toh hame chalna chahiye'...

Td ' thik hai chalte hai.. tum jao mai aata hun

Man ' thik hai sir..

Taani in a angry tone said ' dad aap aaj vi office jaa rahe hoo..

Td making a puppy face said 'princess dekho agar important meeting nahi hota toh mai nahi jata par kya kare I need to go'

Taani said ' par dad'(but seeing her dad's face she could say no ' so she said) thik hai dad'

He went out the gang were had just finish having their breakfast when suddenly they heard a door bell rang' a servant came and opened the door a hand some man entered the house' he came running and hugged Taani.. Taani also hugged him back and now without breaking the hug the man was twirled her in his arm. Taani was smiling at him' and after sometime he putted her down.rey was super duper jealous of him' he was feeling to kill that person who touched his Taani'

Man 'I am so happy that u came'

Taani smiled and replied ' aab mere romeo mujhe bulae and mei naa auo.. yeh toh impossible hai naa..(yes guys it was romeo')

Swayam was also was smiling. Romeo came infront and hugged swayam. He too huged him back. Taani was smiling seeing the scene infront of him'BUT REY WAS JEALOUS'

Romeo saw all girls (except taasha) were staring him..all the boys(excluding swayam) were red in color to see their girls staring him'

Then Romeo said ' so sweetheart mujhe aapne new dosto se nahi milaoge???

Rey (in mind)- WTH' how could he touch my taani'not touched he hugged my Taani and'yeh mere Taani ko sweetheart bularaha hai'agar ayaha pe koi aur nahi hota naa toh main iss ka muh tod deta'

Taani smiled and said- yeh Sharon hai'.(Taani introduced to all and he was shaking hand with all ' now it was the turn of rey'he forward his hand to rey for a handshake seeing a hand infront rey too forwarded his hand'but he was continuous giving him a tashan look. Romeo was confused to see Rey's attitude)

Taani again said- and guys his is Rohan my Best Friend'(yup it was Rohan/Romeo was taani's BFF (mera bhi...).

Rohan whisper to Taani- tumhara aapne prince charming k saath kuch chapter huwa kya???

Taani ' shut up Rohan

Rohan- that means huwa tha naa'batao naa' mujhe batao naa

Rey saw Rohan whispering something in taani's ear..and also he saw Taani blushing 'now Room's temperature was really high'koi rey ko freeze mein daldo'

Rohan suddenly got a idea and said ' chalo naa sweetheat hum naa collage chalte hai'.

Taani- no ways mujhe nahi jaana

Rohan- plz plz chalte hai naa

Taani- tumhe pata hai naa why I don't wanna go'.toh tum mujhe force kyun kar rahe ho???

Rohan ' I know that but don't worry kuch nahi hoda'.chalo naa plz'

Taani- ok thik hai'.

Rohan ' guys chalo tum logo ko bhi hamara collage dikhata hun

All (except Rey)- ok''''

precap

Gang will get some shock in the collage''rey jealous''

And the Taani ke life ka eak secret will be opened''

Ok guys..toh I am ending it here'''so plz plz plz like and comment karo coz aap logo ka respond mere liye bohot he important hai'.and agar respond aacha aaya toh I'm gonna update soon'.toh jaldi update chahiye toh like and comment fast''
Edited by QTPie99 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
res๐Ÿ˜›
i was waiting 4 this update๐Ÿ˜ณ
but will read l8r๐Ÿ˜†
unres๐Ÿ˜Š
mai pehle hi unres kr deti but this ARPITA๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ญ
thik hai first place toh mujhe hi milli hai๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†
and nw
me first๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
yippiiieee
chlo chlo sbhi mujhe congo kro๐Ÿ˜ณ specially u my brainwash(arpita)๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
coming to the update
"darling romeo ko reveal karungi"๐Ÿ˜ฒ
but mera darling toh rey hai na...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†
Rey and boys (except swayam)got a shock of 440watt.rey mouth was open in shock..
mujhe bhi lga 440 watt ka shock
Rey could hardly do that but he closed his mouth forcefully and now Taani reach near the car and now taarey were having a LLHH scene which was interrupted by simmi
SIMMI๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

Then swayam said"are toh yehi toh hai Taani ka ghar"

All"what"

me 2 "WHAT"๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜†

awww...

luv dad-daughter convo (ab saari convo ko kese copy-paste kru๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†)

Rey (in mind)- WTH' how could he touch my taani'not touched he hugged my Taani and'yeh mere Taani ko sweetheart bularaha hai'agar ayaha pe koi aur nahi hota naa toh main iss ka muh tod deta'

bach gya romeo๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•

congo romeo!!! u r safe only 4 nw๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Taani again said- and guys his is Rohan my Best Friend'(yup it was Rohan/Romeo was taani's BFF (mera bhi...)).

mujhe toh lga tha ki rohan sirf rhythsy ka hi BFF hai๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

mujhe chodkar sab rohan ke BFF hai๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ญ

nd

rohan- taani convo ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿคฃ(ab ise bhi copy-paste kese kru๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†)

nd rey giving tashan wala look๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿคฃ

mujhe rohan ki tension ho rhi hai๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜ญ

and the precap

rohan ko chodho

vo jaaye baadh mai ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

mujhe taani ki tension ho rhi hai๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

nd nw my first and last warning

update sooon...๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

Edited by wow-taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Hash .. i hate you ๐Ÿ˜ก
Res
unres
ye hash bhi naa . First place le li
chodungi nahi main isse
Haan .. coming to the update
Zyaada excited mat ho , abhi mujhe chapter 2 aur 3 ka comment karna fir chapter 4 ka karungi ..
CHAPTER 2
Itna chota kyu tha ?
Lekin bahut awesome tha
Ohh yeah yeah party time .. balle balle
Gang bhi naa .. wild animals kahi ke
And romeo ..
mmujhe to pata hai ki wo kon hai
Chal ab main chali next chapter padne
Edited by .-Arpita-. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: .-Arpita-.

Hash .. i hate you ๐Ÿ˜ก
Res

i luv u tooo...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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