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mutermuter

@mutermuter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

amazing dear👏

the emotions potrayed by you were fab👏

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pree2605

@pree2605

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

amazinggg...
sooo emotionall...poor arshi..bt arnav deserves it...bt still i cn never see thr pain...
thnxx fr pm...
update soon

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hiddenpearl

@hiddenpearl

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

oh that was sad

nice story buddy

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dhakdhak22

@dhakdhak22

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

nice dear

arnav is crying

khushi is also sad

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

wow.
I loved the way you portrayed their emotions.
Can't wait for the next part 😊

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Love.life2

@Love.life2

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Very nice.. read both parts together. Arnav ws frustrated coz she loved someone else bt wsnt he the one who told her she means nothng to him on diwali night he ws so sure she had feelings for him bt hurt her n then again he tried to hurt by showing her place remindin her of her status n class all the time so she"d break n admit him marryin someone else matters to her.

Yet when he saw her on the terrace he forgot all tht was there bet them the last few dys tho don't blame him he had a lot to deal with n All this clouded his judgement spl tht snake lyin bt he did marry khushi less for his sis bt more to keep her away frm tht snake n for himself.

However he's ASR he cud have got to the boTtom of it spl after marriage n he actually thot marryin her wud stop either her or snake tht too in d same house all the time.

So khushi is right why shud she stay ??

This is nice arnav repenting n asking for a chance n khushi is so far unrelenting.

Edited by renee.bee - 12 years ago

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IPK..Jenny

@IPK.Jenny

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Aawww so heartbreaking...poor guys...continue soon

Jenny x

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lovely_sweet

@lovely_sweet

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Great update. I can understas arnav but khushi is Right too. They should have something like this in the serial too, after all those things arnav Did he deserves some punishment. But Amazing update:) Loved it:) thanx for the pm:)!