SS-IPKKND : Ending Thru Our Eyes #1 Link #2-Pg 152 *Completed*

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Love.life2

@Love.life2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Hi there nice idea.. SS. begins where ipk ended bt frm diwali onwards so we get the completion of d kiss.

Prologue is nice.

1st ch is also nice the same diwali moments only arnav making khushi understand his pov instead of the argument on d show.

Also loved arnav demanding his gift. bt a little confused arshi r already married n consummated their marriage so why is khushi being all uncomfortable n arnav is thinking abt the nxt step.

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sushna

@sushna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

woww...nice...

loved it...

accept me and pm me plz...😃

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avni_barun

@avni_barun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: renee.bee
Hi there nice idea.. SS. begins where ipk ended bt frm diwali onwards so we get the completion of d kiss.
Prologue is nice.
1st ch is also nice the same diwali moments only arnav making khushi understand his pov instead of the argument on d show.
Also loved arnav demanding his gift. bt a little confused arshi r already married n consummated their marriage so why is khushi being all uncomfortable n arnav is thinking abt the nxt step.

they have not consummated yet...it was not shown yet...
they will consummate here...

n thanks for liking it... 😃

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aimmy

@Aims.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

new ss...yipeee...now i can stalk😆

congo...avni and astha di!

prologue was fantastic 👏

amazing idea👍🏼

damn good...then 1st chap

beautiful😳😳

arshi romance making me crazy...ok i know i m already😆

fantastic di...rocking one!

continue soon...and ha...u dedicated me also?😲😲😲

awww...so sweet of u🤗

love u...and love this ss❤️

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@BlueBloodQueen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

I liked title name ...
Nice start dear..
Arshi ka romance dekhar mai marjawa.

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Sanjana

@-SanjanaSobti-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

very nice..so romantic..!!
Waiting for the next update..

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sunshine2408

@sunshine2408

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Great update Avni.! Lookimg forward to the next one. Thanks for the pm!

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

hmm sounds interesting...

i love it how u have made d diwali incident wit arnav making khushi understnd dat bith she nd aarav r wrng...lovely part dat was 👍🏼

i had wanted to see this scne rather than them fighting wit each other for that pretty small issue 😡

but nver mind u guys r here to fukfill it...

so bang it on wit ur new ss avni...me sure both ashtha nd u r going to rock it...

lovely starting...cant wait to knw wat will hapopen nxt in arnav nd khushi's life 😃

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Divyanshi Vineet Malaviya

@babydevil

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Hello Girls!

First of all the story is awesome.👏 Its Sexy !!! Super awesome and I am in love with it.

The way you wrote it , is Lovely .. and the prologue, Astha I must say u wrote the prologue this way that one has to take interest in this story and then fall in love with it !

One Suggestion

don't write their emotions in bracket in separate rather than write in the para with expression ! It gives a story Life and people read it with more interest.

For Example { A part from my first ever story }

Arnav ji hum aapse nafarat hai ! { Spoke Khushi in anger }

rather than this we can write it like

Khushi's temper had reached its level.

Arnav ji Hum aapse nafarat hai.

She spat out angrily.

Rest depends on ! but I loved the story and I am waiting for next part do update soon.

Love

Diva

{ chottu sa badmash 😈 }

PS : contact me whenever you need any help ! always at ur service ma'am's 😃