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sida

@sida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

that was such a sweet update😊

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Arlaav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Please send me the blog link

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div25

@div25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

awesome and very different story 😊😊😊 waiting for future updates 😉😉😉 send me ur blog link plsss . this is my mail id divyathipu@gmail.com

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

awsum update... congrats on the new thread!

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Annie12

@Annie12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

As usual a very nice update.

About comments am not very sure.l I have mixed feelings. I wish khushi can be out of the contract ASAP. It's weird. No matter what happens and the carefree things happening in life it's a cloud over their head. Basically in the first 19 chapters it feels that only the characters and the relationships have been described. The characters have progresses.. Not much but some. The story however has been sadly at a stand still since chapter 4.

I only hope a progression in story during internship. There is only so much character and relationship exploration you can do and still keep it interesting.. The plot needs to be there and the story needs to build up. I feel that's what is missing. Your writing and your expressions are great. Emotions explored very well. The basic plot is well conceived but the sub plot lines are Non existant.

That said I love ur writing and look forward to ur next update.

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daljeet

@daljeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

U have done a wonderful job. I loved the update. it had a very different flavour of cheekiness altogether...I loved it.

Well, I would like to see how you frame the internship. I want to see how YOU frame it. I'm blank, bz I know you will come up with something unique!

And sorry for asking this here, but when will you update 'A Promise'. I love that story and has been waiting to read it. Last time too we didn't get an update of it.

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Monasha

@monasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

First of all Congrats on a new thread...

Its nice to see changes in Khushi's behavior...

Khushi all flirty during the interview and the way Arnav was trying control himself was superb...

Please make Khushi little happy by Arnav...

What about Khushi's family???

Is her father Okay now???

Are they searching for her???

Waiting to see Arnav's possessiveness towards Khushi...
and you have used the concept of Breaking the Bed really good...

Khushi must be feeling really happy seeing Arnav laugh--- A carefree Laugh...

All slept peacefully thinking of present and the future...

Update soon dear

Edited by monasha - 12 years ago

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kklgirl

@kklgirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

wow superb update, eager to know how r they going to behave in the workplace..

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Loved the chapter.

This is an exceptional story and I voted for it.

Not that I don't like the others but this on is my favourite.

All three went to sleep with smiles on their faces.

I hope this remains the case always.

I still feel that Aman might be a rival to Arnav for Khushi's affections.

I would love to see how the three main characters in the story behave when they are all in the same office. Do they keep zloof from each other or will they spill the beans.