'Passe Oublie'- A SS & KR OS:PART 2 PG 17 5/8/13

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

amazing...

loved it...

waiting for next part n thnx for pm..

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

awesome update.. loved both d versions n felt different feel for both versions.. loved d way u showed rain spoiling k/s meeting n she trying to get d hotel but not able to coz of no room... d way r/s recognized her voice n offered help.. d anger that he showed towards her which was in him for 10 long yrs.. a kiss was superb but he s he left d palce thinking he forced her into it.. now k/s s determined to get him back again in her life.. awesome waiting for 2nd part..

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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

great job!
that kiss was so intense..phew!
Sharon's gonna woo him back..yippee

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

AWESOME

AMAZING

SUPERB

FAB

MARVELOUS

SPLENDID

LOVED IT

UPDATE SOON :)

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Twinkle_d3

@Twinkle_d3

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Great start..
Love rain..
Waiting for nxt part

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Awesome start!!!

what a coincidence!!!

that only happens to Swaron!!!

and the ending was so intense!!!!

especially that kiss!!!

Update the next part soon!!!!

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Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

It was amazing part

sharon d leading businesswoman
she lost her love 10 years back
she meet swayam after 10 years due to coincidence bt stil she has his effect on her

swaron convo which was turned into intimate scene was amazing. Swayam show 10 years of frustration, love nd longiness in d kiss.

Sharon somewhat happy abt dis nd ready to take 1st step in their relationship now

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Heena

@kamlesh32

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

It was an awesome update! You beautifully penned down all the pain, love, and longing from both sides! I really enjoyed reading this part! Please update soon and pm me...