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robinhood008

@robinhood008

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

That wad an amazinggg update!!!

Bessttt ever
The intensity of each word felt by every character especially arnav and the ones unsaid, each word left me in awee

The aggression and helplessness arnav went through,two extremely opposite emotion,felt with extreme intensity makes hard for a person to think straight,bit when arnav found his khushi,his red,in a pool of red his inner turmoil and sadness was juss too much and I can not express what I felt with my limited vocabulary!!

All I can say is that i've truly enjoyed readin this story
Though I relli hope to get an epilogue for this amazinggg work

Arnav and rohan beat tge crap out of shyam n karan n I was lije wooaaahhh!!!

Jus hope that khushi becomez alright in no time

And the dialogue that got me straight away was when arnav told lavanya thar khushi is his world and she jus messed woth it, arrgghhh how can lavanya do this???

Love reading it to bitss

Amazinggg update!!!

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deeptha93

@deeptha93

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

speechless once again! no next one is gonna be the last chap? :(

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Need I say, I loved the precap!

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melonie

@melonie

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Hi,

That was a mind blowing chapter. I didn't even move in my seat and with bated breath read each line of the update. Even I was wondering my Arnav didn't go in search of Khushi and why he was staying put in her room but I understand why now. Maybe staying in her room...he felt her presence and that gave him solace to his heart and other part is he has become so vulnerable when it comes to Khushi =)

I loved it how Arnav and Rohan gave it good to the villains. I didn't get enough of bashing them and that ACP called! That sight of Khushi lying there so lifeless must have really shaken both Arnav and Rohan.

I hope she is ok. Ofcourse she is going to be ok. I know Farah you don't have nay plans on killing our cute, sweet heroine ;)

Pls cont soon...and please just don't say that this beautiful story is coming to an end =( They just started only yaar and you are already ending their luv story. Ok what about a season 2 of SAY...on how they cope with marriage and everything. Please SAY YES...please..please..please.

P.S. No comments on La. She has some guts man!

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

I am at the edge of my seat...so much suspense

I love how shashi a nd Rohan are praying for Khushi because it is the only thing left to do and also all three men noticed that all bad thing Khushi had to experience at 21

...Arnav started to pray after seeing Khushi in that state which was similar to his mom...I really felt for Arnav

And am so excited for the next update

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rajvta

@rajvta

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Oh god, you up the emotions ante with each update.

And Yayyy!! My entire wish list from last update's comments was incorporated in this update.

Thank you.

res for detailed feedback on the update after a second read😊

unres

A very satisfying update - all the villains got a lashing - physical or verbal. Isnt it great that both Rohan and Arnav had a villain a piece to thrash to pulp. wow the way you have described the fight, this is how I wanted Arnav to deal with Shyam in the show but all we got was the two slaps:-(.

Seriously though this update was more like a script written for a movie. The action was described so well I could almost visualize it happening. And the scene of Khushi lying her white dress lying in a pool of her own blood, no words to explain its poignancy.

Emotional Highpoints for me :

1. Arnav picking up a lifeless Khushi and her hand just floating away.

2. Arnav sitting in Khushi's room waiting for any information about her.

3. Shashi begging the cops to let Anjali come along so that she could manage Rohan.

4. Rohan explaining to Arnav why he was praying for Khushi

5. Khushi's words stopping Arnav to beat Shyam to oblivion.

6. Finally ,Arnav remembering Khushi's words in the end - the dialogue from the show so beautifully incorporated in the narrative here.

Will wait to comment on Lavanya's 'dhulai' after reading the entire sequence in next update.

Great update. As the story is inching towards its end, each new update is all the more precious.

Edited by rajvta - 12 years ago

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Bang on

!!

Reading 3 chptrs in a day..

Wow..!!

So dey found Khushi..n she's lifeless ..
he prayed..
evn Afta aying so much abt dm to rohan..

Precap
well ..if la Wud hv not clld him..may b he Wud have lost his red..

may b dey Wud have been a lil late to reach khushi..
day way may b risking her life ..

Oh well

I Wud cmmnt tomorrow ..again..in my way..
Cudnt resist ..Afta reading d chptr ..so Juz a lil cmmnt.
Wud cmmnt tomorrow ..:)

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koisk

@koisk

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

That was sooo intense, thank god they got there on time, good that Arnav will face lavanya in the next update and give her solid.

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ARSHI_FAN11

@ARSHI_FAN11

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#209

Thank god for the precap !!! That made my tears stop or else I have no idea how long I would have been crying and feeling depressed over Khushi's condition and Arnav's pain - it was so so amazing that I could actually see it running in front of my eyes like a movie, hats off !!!! 👏👏👏👏

Time to deal with Lavanya 😡 I seriously was so touched the moment Arnav stopped hitting Shyam when he remembered Khushi's words 😊at the peak of your anger its next to impossible to think anything sane but at point beyond which is nothing, only thing that could overpower him were just Khushi and her words such is the depth of his love for her - that was just super lovely