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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yesterday I watched this scene..and I know this throb at the base of skull..coz everytime I see such scenes in which Arnav taunts and takes out his anger on Khushi.I feel this thing. But you know what, Your perpective from both sides reduces that ache, that throb. Thank you so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing! You made sense out of the madness which engulfed the show.

I hate angst, but I love this. Never stop writing please! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Perfectly put...the whole scene made me pull my hair out for days altogether, and I wish it hadn't been so poorly executed.

You salvaged it though!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
You blow me away! To write these scenes coherently is a task in itself but to write it so well... Keep it up! So long! :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Enchante

You blow me away! To write these scenes coherently is a task in itself but to write it so well... Keep it up! So long! :-)



When you say "So long" as an end tag to your comments (generally), my mind automatically completes it -

"So long and thank you for the fish." :-)

Edited by RockBarbie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: RockBarbie



When you say "So long" as an end tag to your comments (generally), my mind automatically completes it -

"So long and thank you for the fish." :-)


That's exactly where it comes from. 😆 Your updates have to be the most tempting variety of fish though for I'm a vegetarian. :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
I had to comment for this one, as this is a very special scene of IPKKND for me.. This was the first ever scene I watched, accidentally while searching for a song...
And ironically the only dialogue you mentioned here ("you made my life hell anyway..") was the one which hooked me to the IPKKND world..So I always had a soft spot for this scene..Thank you for writing on it!

Coming to this anger filled vignettes series...they are just amazing..the way you express their inner turmoils in each and every scene you've picked so far, is mind blowing! You certainly have a way with words..Each and every sentence is bleeding, heart-wrenching...I don't think my limited set of vocabulary is enough to explain what I feel when I finish reading each of these...They are just painfully stunning...

Will look forward to read more!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
The choice of scene was wonderful, at this point in the story I realized one important thing it was no longer a story just random scenes put together. It was so sketchy and annoying, it bugged me like hell. Now if K wanted to stay out of his way there were better ways to do that and A could have been more realistic in his approach to a rather annoying self created situation. That is asking for too much is it not?
No loss at all, in RB's words we have a better view on the matter. I am greedy for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

"You can love someone so much...But you can never love people as much as you can miss them."

- John Green

Makes me wonder if the insanity that is Arnav and Khushi is nothing but a gateway to sanity. You have a remarkable grip on the characters, RB, and it is always a pleasure to see you write, whether for Arnav-Khushi or otherwise. Waiting for the next time :-)

Edited by V323 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: vgedin

Awesome.



Brilliant. If IPK hadn't become a joke half way through, this would be their story in two lines. Your ID should be BarbieRocks :)

I second this😃

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