FF: In another life - Chapter 7 (Part 2) updated

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Beautiful!! The mystery thickens, thanks for pm :)

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kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Well the mystery keeps getting murkier and murkier.

Khushi clearly has some idea about her past and about what really happened to her parents.

I wonder where the Raizada's fit into this whole complicated maze.

Akash's mom surely holds most of the answers to all our questions.

Khushi still remembers the guy with the brownest eyes and dare i say that she will soon meet him at this party. 😛

Ms. Telleroftales this is one incredible story that you have going on here and i seriously i can't wait to know how the whole thing will unfold.

If only your asli duniya permitted you in giving us quicker updates.

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Uthra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

You are great story teller. I am slowly getting the grips of the story now. Will wait until it unfolds further.

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gmsk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Omgg.. with evry update suspense seems to get building up.evn.more..

Love the executing the story..

Thanks for d update..

And for d PM..

Continue soon

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Mrs. Sidharth Malhotra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

I am a writer but not a very ardent reader of fanfiction (just because I get lazy waiting for updates) but I must say I FREAKIN LOVE THIS.

Like I don't even know how else to express my sentiments for this fanfiction. It's gripping, it keeps you going, it's well written, the characters are developed, they actually have shades and the author is true to them, there is a sense of mystery and suspense, but it's still sown together beautifully.

I'll be waiting for the next chapter! I will not say update soon because it get's pretty annoying--like why can't you just thank me for writing this chapter rather than hording me for another update? So thank you for writing this amazing chapter--no this amazing fanfiction.

-Shweta (BTW You used my name! Eeks! And you spelt it right!)

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SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Wow. I felt so bad for Khushi as she danced and dreamed of what might have been. But someone snatched it away from her. Is she now in Delhi to find out about those people, or did she actually flee from the orphanage to save her life? I really liked the interaction between Payal and Khushi, and Bua is so cute. Let's see what happens at this party.

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Amrita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Interesting concept... Would love to read more.. Please do let me know when you update next😊

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

so it was them
and it seems she never told her new parents about the whole incident in the orphanage
but why did they wanna kill her i still dont get
what would that achieve
hmm so she hasnt forgotten that night same as arnie
but will that mean anything when they come face to face
seems she shall know more in the party
well this should be good
cheers for pm
wonder if she will tell her jiji or will the said sister know about it when they get there
lets wait and watch
hmmm that was a beautiful family picture she had painted herself shame it cant happen though

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Anupama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Brilliant!
Dont know what am I feeling reading Khushi s state of mind as she thinks what her life would have been had she still been Khushi Kaul.. I guess its understandable when one day she comes to know that all this while , when she was at the orphanage, when she didnt know herself and thought that she is an abondoned one, she actually isnt one and there do exist people in connection with her parents who loved her.

So she is off for the party! M so excited as the brownest eyed man too would be there..

Oh! Akash and Payal s maybe lovestory 😃

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

get a glimpse of Khushi's story...but still a lot to unfold...this story is so gripping...I just cant get enough of it...waiting for the party...thanks for the pm...