TAAREY OS-JAAVEDAAN HAIN ISHQ..DARE

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Kinga money:hi guys…how r u all????hey I m hear…hey u all know what this kung fu pandas Prasanna(PRASSI),has given me a dare to write this os so here I m I hope u all like it…love u all…muhava n prasana dedecated to u…hope u will like it as I m very very very bad at this situation…bt tried my level best…do like n comment ur precious comments dear…

Rey:taani tumhe mujhe baar baar batane ki koi zarurath nahi hain u r nt going that's it…..

Taani:rey kyu nahi jasakti main…main jaungi…zarur jaungi…

Rey:nahi

Taani:haa

Rey:maine kaha nahi

Taani:maine bhi kehdiya na haa matlabh haa…

Rey:taani plz try to understand agar tum chali jaogi to main kaise rahunga????

Taani:rey plz hamari shaadi ko 1 saal hogaya hain n aap mujhe kabhi na mere mom dad ke ghar jane dete hote ho aur nahi aapne dosto ke saath bhaar kyu rey…?{in a very irritating tone…n rey makes a puppy face n go to taani n sit down supporting his head on her legs…}

Rey:my cutie my sweetheart yaar plz try understand aagar tum chali jaogi to…main kaise rahunga aur hamari shaadi ko abhi shirf 1 saal hi hua hain aur tum aapne dosto ke saath outing pe jana chati ho…

Taani:ha chati hu aur rey sirf 1 saal nahi pura 1 saal hogaya hain aur main jaungi…

Rey:{in anger…}nahi jaogi matlabh nahi n now no more discussions did u get it…n now jao n get me a coffee leave…{taani stamps her leg like a small child n leaves from there…n rey act as he is busy in his laappy with work n after taanileaves he smiles…}

[now I will tell u situation actually taani n rey r hailiy married coule since 1 year n rey loves taani so much that he don't allowtaani to go anywhere even not to reys sasuraall n now taani friends were going to outing she also want to accompany them b trey don't want taani to go as he cant leave taani for a second also…now lets see whatwill happen]

{taani was preparing coffee in the kitchen with anger n was muttering something lets hear what she is doing…}

Taani:samjhte kya hain aapne aap ko mujhe kahi nahi jane dete bt is baar nahi rey aap dekhiye ga ki ye mrs.taani shighaniya..kya karti hain…{then scarching her head}bt main karu kya?????ha idea…main na rey ke coffee mein mirchi ka powder mila du to..???nahi nahi unhe mirchi lagegi..to kya karu???{she gets an idea n she smiles bt till then rey comes down getting ready with his laptop bag n other files he was going for office…}

Rey:taani coffee ready hogai kya mujhe late horaha hain…

Taani:yaa..{she gets the coffee n smiles at rey n rey takes the coffee n he drinks it…n taani was still smiling at him n rey gets a doubt n he finishes his coffee n say…to taani}

Rey:taani mindu tum kahi nah jari…

Taani:{in a ver romantic mood moves towards rey n keep reys suit botton n say…}aap ko aisa kyu lagata hain main jaungi aapne mujhe mana kiya baad main kaise ja sakti hu…waise aaj raat main aapka wait karungi…{rey eyes get a light in them..n leaves his bag down n hold taani from her waist n pull her towards him n say…}

Rey: agar tum bolo to main abhi nahi jata…

Taani:nahi aap jaaiye…{a give him apeck on his cheek..rey also give her a peck n leaves after rey leaves…taani run to her room n take her bag n pack her clothes n take a paper n write something n leaves from the house with her bag…in the evening rey comes back with smilimng as he was accepting that taani would do something special for him bt to his suprize rey finds taani no where finally he calls taani so many times bt it was getting switch off rey gets angry n through the phone on the bed when he sees taani letter…rey reads it…}

Rey:{taani letter…..}

I m sorry rey bt mujhe apne friends ke saath jana tha aur aap the ki mujhe jane nahi date isliye main aap ko chod ke agai waise main 2 din mein wapas aajungi phir bhi aaga aap mujhe miss kar rahe ho to aap meri photo se kaam chala lijiya as main to aap se milna to kya aap se do din phone pe bhi baat nahi karungi..bye n yaa I love u rey…

Rey:I love u too taani bt tum aaise kaise mujhe chod ke ja sakti ho…{rey gets sad n he sleeps directly in his bed bt taani was flashing in his mind…n he gets up n go his cupboard n takes a file out bt some thing falls down n he see down n takes the paaper n read it…it was make my trip pamlet rey gets a smile n he takes his phone n calls…}

Rey:hello make my trip…{n talks for sometime…n then cuts the call n say}abh dekho taani tum mujhe chodke chali gait hi nab t main tumhe akele kaise chod sakta hu…waise bhi tumhe aapna bada besharam rey bohut pasad hain na so here i go my dear wife taani reyansh shighaniya..{n smiles with a smirk…}

{taani was sleeping in between the open garden…in the middle night…which was decored under the sky when she opens the her eyes she was stunned to see this,,n she gets up n look at everything…}

Taani:ye kya main yaha kaise aayi main to apne room mein soyi thi apne friends ke saath aur yaha kaise aayi…?{then she heres a voice…}

Voice: Khuda Ne Jab Tujhe Banaya Hoga,
Ek Suroor Sa Uske Dil Mai Aaya Hoga,
Socha Hoga Kya Dunga Tohfe Mai Tujhe,
Tab Jake Usne Mujhe Banaya Hoga…

{taani smiles as she knows whose voice it was n turns back bt to her suprize he was nt there???she sees here n there n then again she heres a voice…}

Voice: Pani Se Pyaas Na Bujhi
Toh Maikhane Ki taraf Chal Nikla
Socha Shikayat Karun Teri Khudha Se
Par Khudha bhi Tera Ashiq Nikla…

{she again smiles n says…}

Taani:rey main janti hu aap hi ho…kaha ho aap aur yaha kaise aaye aur ye sab kya hain…?rey????{again she heres a voice of rey…}

Rey: Pyar ne ye kaisa tohfa de diya,
Mujhko gumo ne pathar bana diya.
Teri yaadon main hi kat gayi ye umar,
Kehta raha tujhe kab ka bhula diya…

Taani:acha to aap aise nahi manege na..to jaiye main yaha se jarahi hu….{as she start going she hers a sound of music…she turns n see rey…n rey romantically comes to her n give her a rose n sit on his keens..}

Rey:Ho ho ho o o wo...Wo oo wo…….{taani smiling takes the flower n he gets up n puts his hands around taanii neck n they both get lost in each other eyes…}

Rey:Karta hoon tujh mein din guzar main{his grip was getting tight n tight n he was moving close n close…}

Karta hoon tujh mein shab basar{taani shigly keeps her head down…}

Karta hoon tujh mein hi sehar main{rey lifts her head up…n kiss her on her forehead…}

Jeeta hoon tujh ko dekh kar{taani closes her eyes…n rey kiss her on her eyes..}

Dil tere bin thehra sa hai{taani opens her eyes n was going b trey hold her hand n pull her she comes crushing towards him…n he hug her fgrom back…n sing…}

Tu dhadkano ka hai safar{he dugs his face near taani neck n hold her more tightly…}

Kaanton bhara har raasta{then lift her in his arms n sings…}

Phoolon ki hai tu rehguzar{then takes her to a open gareden area where all flowers were decored on floor n a bed with curtins which was looking beautiful…rey puts taani down n taani gets haapy seeing all this…n was adoring all this n seeing bed sighly smiles n get lost in how rey proposed her when rey again gets a flower bouqet n give it to taani}

Rey:Jaavedaan hai ishq tujh se jaavedaan hai ….Jaan o dil ke darmiyaan hai, darmiyaan tu haan

Jaavedaan hai ishq tujh se jaavedaan hai….Tujh mein hi dil ud raha hai aasmaan tu haan{rey takes a basket of flowers n satring showing them on taani moving around her…}

Rey:Ho ho ho o o wo...{seeing taani smiling get lost in her n move towards her to kiss her…}

Saath tera jab se hai mujhko mila{taan ns from there n go behind bed n rey follow her chasing her singing}

Waqt ki shaakhon pe hai har pal khila{taani was till sighly running from rey…}

Zindagi se ab nahi koi gila{rey finally catches her from her back n held her tightly….n start kissing her neck…}

Jitna hai tu utna hoon main{taani was melting on him…now…}

Naa kuch zyada naa hoon kam{rey turns her n kiss her on her cheeks n eyes n forehead}

Tujhse shuru hota hoon main{rey was looking at taani with passionately….}

Hota hoon tujhpe hi khatam{taani understand reys feeling n she go close towards rey n now there was only one inch difference between there lips…}

Jaavedaan hai ishq tujh se jaavedaan hai……Jaan o dil ke darmiyaan hai, darmiyaan tu haan

Jaavedaan hai ishq tujh se jaavedaan hai…Tujh mein hi dil ud raha hai aasmaan tu haan{taani kiss rey ..n it was a soft kiss which soon opens into a passionate one…they were lost in kissing each other liking eachother…tounge..}

Maine tujhko is tarah se hai jiya{after some time they stop kissing felling shot of breath…ntaani sighly sees rey…}

Aandhiyon me jaise jalta hai diya{rey takes taani in his arms…n follow to the decorated bed}

Ishq se har faasle ko tay kiya{places her on the bed n removes her paalo which was attached to her saaree…}

Jo the juda humse khafa lamhe wo saare kat gaye {taani sighly closes her eyes n rey start kissing her frm her neck to her shoulder n from shoulder to cheek,eyes,forehead n taani moves back felling sigh…}

Tum mil gaye banke subah jo the andhere hat gaye{rey moves her hair from her blouse n remove her hooks n cover them self with blankets..}

Jaavedaan hai ishq tujh se jaavedaan hai{rey makes her move from n start kissing her n taani making him access puts her hands in his hairs…n start moving here n there…}

Jaan o dil ke darmiyaan hai, darmiyaan tu haan{rey sees taani n smiles n keep kissing her all through body…}

Jaavedaan hai ishq tujh se jaavedaan hai{they were felling complete as no one n nothing can make them apart from eachother…}

Tujh mein hi dil ud raha hai aasmaan tu haan{they eterwind there hands…n sleept in the wamth of eachother…}

Thank u guys for reading it…I tried my level best yaar bt sorry if I disappointed u Prasanna as what can I write I wrote it n it was really in a hurry as I was veryu very busy hope u n all my friends like it…

😊From ninja money lovelypriya{priyu} To kung fu panda … Prassi{Prasanna}😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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What a romantic OS
Awe Rey can't stay away from taani even after a year 😳
N she went anyways 😲 and Rey got mad at that 😡
Loved Rey's plan 😳
These shaiyaris are my favorite ❤️
And then the song and the romance ☺️
Loved it u did a fab job 👏
Edited by --Ta_Sha-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsm..i lovd it...so romantic...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awsm i luv taarey luv for each other
rey is madly in luv with taani wow awsm i luv it
thanks for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fab os luved d way rey surprised taani
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was beautiful dear
I loved it
Good job
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was awesome OS dear...
U did a gr8 job...
I loved it...
U completed ur dare very well😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gosh this was soo romantic...
i loved the lines rey said to taani when he came near her...
hayeee...kash koi mujhe bhi yeh kehta... 😆
bt really loved dat part...and the song was so amazingg...
and the antics of taani and rey were adorable too...
in short...loved the OS... <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very romantic and nice!!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update!! Yayyy go ninja monkeys!!!

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