guyz this is my first ff,do cmmnt.
đthis story happens according to the film,that is the story line here happens after saras has left for dubai.but the difference is that kumud didn't marry another person.she just went away to dubai all by herself-well not exactly alone as she had her daughter [and ofcourse of saras's too]đ.
hope u wud like my work.
SHRADDHA
Kumud sat on the steps remembering her past.even though it was her past she still liked to believe it as her present-how saras used to manipulate her,their engagement and how saras left 4 dubai to return as the barat and how he never ever returned.she would have put an end to her life then and there,but 4 the relevation that she was having a baby.
Everyone of her family except ofcourse her sisters and badi maa had told her to marry someone else but her love for saras was not that flickering.she still had faith in hm,but her parents didn't.and that's when she decided to start a new life here in mumbai with her daughter...
"maa,aap yahan kya kar rahi ho?"
kumud dried her face on hearing the voice of her 20 year old daughter shraddha.
"phir se papa ko yaad kar rahi ho?kya hain ye?jab mein unke baare mein kuch poochthi hun to mana karti ho aur ab kud beitke soch rahi ho.kyon?"
kumud just patted her.what would shraddha know of her troubles?"aisa koi baat nahi,tum jaldi se aavo,khana khane,teekh hain?"
"maa,par..."
But kumud had walked away.
Shraddha knew what was troubling her mother for years.she had been seeing this since childhod.and now she was goig to do something.
"maa, mein samajh rahi hun aapki takleef. aur yeh meri vaada hain, aapse aur khud se, ki mein aapko aur papa ko milake hi rahungi.dubai rahta hain na vo?tho mujhe wahi jane honge.aur mein zaroor javungi.jab vapas lotungi toh papa bhi saath honge mere.aur phir hum sab khushi khushi rehenge,dekh leejiyega."and that was a promise of a devoted daughter.đ
guyz this is just the first part,do inform me whether i shud venture more on this b'coz i assure u tht it will not be less than a film.đđ
Edited by vial - 12 years ago