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Enigmatic_Charm

@Enigmatic_Charm

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#491

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Unres😃

First a big hug for u for updating it🤗

OMG!!!!!!!! The Anniversary kiss ☺️

Seriously i was blushing like anything 😆

Poor Jeevika missing her dad😔

I luv the way Zaaine consoled his mom...he's a cutiepie like me😉

Hope Jeevika gets better soon n have a happy day😊

And i forgot to tell that I'm not a Meanie it's u 😆

coz u r making us wait for a long time for the update 😉 😆

Edited by AmmuKryan - 12 years ago

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Shaza (Atma My LifeHeart)

@Saba_Pari

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#492

Amazing updates awww zainee was soo cute and caring love how he care for his parents especially for jeevi and virika little romance was lovely aww jeevi missing her dad and the way viren pecify her and makes her feel better was cute and sweet over all perfect updates thanx sissy for amazing updates

Edited by Sabapari - 12 years ago

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krystufan

@krystufan

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#493

Ohhh Wow super duper adorable update 😊

yeeah finally u update after so long time thanks alot !!!
this one was awesome...

the anniversary kiss was dashing 😳

awww poor jeevi missing her father...

oh my little zaaine to caring like his father...
awww so sweet he worried about her sweet mumma 😊

the way they both her boys consoled her wer awesome...unique bonding...

hope jeevi get better soon n enjoy thr day fully 😊

plxxx continue soon...!!!

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Mehak

@MehakGera

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#494

wow...
superb update...
it was really cute...
hope jeevs gets fine soon...
update asap

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Latika Gurung

@-Latty-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#495

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Unres 😃

yuhooo another update too

hayeee what can i say about this update kary simplyyy AWESOME it was 👏😳

i've already told u many times that i love i just love the way u describe everything in ur updates ❤️
and its pleasure reading ur work 😳

awww viren wished her actually kissed her ☺️ when the clock struck 12 😊 sooo cuteee 😳

ohhh jeevika was thinking about her dad on this special day 😔
really felt for her 😭

and my cutiee zaaine awww he was adorable 😳 the way he wiped his mom's tears that was sweet 😊

hope jeevika feels good soon !!
BRILLIANT UPDATE 👍🏼

thanku for the pm😊

Edited by -Latty- - 12 years ago

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HayatM

@HayatM

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#496

Thank u for the update!:)have been waiting for it.

So adorable how Viren waited and couldn't wait for the time to struck 12 to wish jeevika:)
The kiss and them sleeping in each other arm<3 so romantic
And jeevika wanting to spend the day with Viren aww

So happy zaaine is back with his parents. Zaaine telling jeevika that his daa is sorry and his kiss on his mother cheek after that. Love it!

It's sad that jeevika is feeling that way on this special day. Love how u describe the whole scenario from zoya entry to jeevika telling Viren what she is feeling and wanting to be alone:) really hope jeevika will get back in mood and be with her two loves.

Thanks for the update. Continue soon:)

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Fairuz Maliha

@virikamaliha

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#497

Awww loved the way viren wished jeevika...
Plz update soon...and hope jeevika will join her family to celebrate their anniversary...

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#498

Superb..!!! Lovely Thnks for the PM..!

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Aaliya

@-Aaliya.KryAn-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#499

Superb update!

Loved it.

Sorry for the short comment..Busy! <3

Continue soon and thanks for the PM!

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#500

awww...poor jeevikaa...crying on her spl day... awesomee updatee..i loved the caring and understanding nature of viren...how sweett...

keep continuinggg... eager to read the next update :D