tr os ~lat lag gai~ {dare complete}

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Heya my kung fu pandas...here i m...our dare completes ...first dare of our team is complete...yipee...

Dare given by shanya


Swayam's health is perfect now...All are in the RH including taarey...rey was happy that taani is standing up for herself...he is happy that his plan is working.

Otherside taani is so much hurt but she was pretending to be happy and strong...

"why i msad...i know i m hurt but that doesnt mean ki me smile na karu...apni life enjoy na karu...taani u have the right to be happy...rey tumhari life me rahe ya na rahe...so move on taani...move on in your life...show attitude to rey... Dont listen his crap...do whatever you want..." thought taani and gave an last angry look to rey...and then decide to show her attitude to rey..

All are sitting and chitchatting. Rey was stealing glancing at taani and taani she was not looking at rey...

Gang (not swaron...they are lost in their world) are talking about taarey...

Vi:yar ye taani aur rey ki war kab khatam hogi??

Ne:neha thinking same...bechari taani...

Nil:what bechari...rey dekho uski vajah se sad hai...

Aashi:wrong types ho tum...taani rey ki wajah se sad hai...

Sim:ya...aashi is right...

Ni:no we r right...

Ri:we are right...

Bharat:abe zyada kich kich mat karo...hum sahi hai..

Aashi:mene bol diya na hum sahi types hai...

Am:hum...

Si:hum...

Vi:hum...

Ne:hum..

Boys:bola na hum..

Grls:we r...

Boys:hum..

Girls:hum...

Taarey and swaron look at them...

Reyam:guys...but no responce...

Reyam:suno guys...but no responce ...they kept on fighting...

"guyyuuusss..."they heard a loud scream...

"ye aawaz to sharon ki nahi hai..."thought all...

Quickly they realize that its taani who scream so loud...

All look at her...

"what the hell is this guys???dont u have sense??u r fighting like five years old kids???have u lost your mind??" said taani angrily...

All are shocked hearing this...

Rey:dekho taani tum...

Ta:i m not talking with u...

Rey:taani tum...

Ta:just shut your mouth up...cant u understand??

Vi:taani tum ese...

Ta:me yaha kuch plan kar rahi hu aur aap log fight kar rahe ho...

Gang:plan??

Shareyam:plan??

Ta:yes plan...but leave it...aap log fight karte raho...me ja rahi hu...

Neha run to her and said:are taani bura maning u to...hum to mazak me lad rahe the...

Nil:ha taani...batao na kya plan hai???

Ta:ok...so guys we r going to club today...

All:what???club???

Ta:ha club...kyu nahi aana aap sabko??

Gang:are aana hai na...we love clubing...

Ta:ok...so today at 7 pm...------club.and remember...couple entry...

Gang:couple entry...interesting...

Ne:me and babu

Nil:me and simmi

Ri:me and amar

Bh:me and aashi..

Sw:me and sharon...

Now only left our taarey...rey look at taani but taani didnt look at him...

Gang look at her...

Ta:ese kyu dekh rahe ho???

Vi:ummm...taani tum kiske sath aaogi???

Taani turn and start walking...

Nil:are taani tum kiske sath aaogi??

"ab me hi reh gaya to of course taani mere sath hogi na!!!"thought rey...

"i already have a partner..."said taani and left the rh...

All are in utter shock...she already has a partner...

"taani ne new partner dhundh liya???"thought rey ...

All left ...shareyam were still there...

"dude your plan is working but taani is going far away from u..."said swayam...

"ya rey...taani tumse dur ja rahi hai..."said sharon...

"ho sake to taani ko dur mat jane dena rey...varna tum khush nahi reh paoge..."said swaron and left RH.

"kya me jo kar raha hu vo galat hai???taani apne liye stand kar rahi hai...nahi rey...tum sahi ho...jab taani ko pata chalega to vo khud maan jayegi..."thought rey and left RH.

At 7 pm :

Outside the ------- club.

All are there but not taayam...

Vi:yar ye swayam kaha reh gaya???

Just then a car arrive there...and swayam came out of it...

"ye swayam passanger seat pe se bahar kyu aaya???car kon drive kar raha tha???" said nil..

As nil complete the sentence...taani came out from the front seat...and looking at her all of them's mouth are half opened...



"looking " said vicky...

"extremly gorgeous.." said amar bharat nil ...

Their girls glare at him and they shut their mouth...

Rey saw her...she was looking so so so beautiful...her silky hairs are flying in the air and her curls are playing on her cheeks...she applied a rosy pink lipstic shade and maskara...thats it...no other make up...she is looking like an angel...her dress reach above her knees...her bare foots are so beautiful...she ia wearing designed sandle...

"hi taani...hi swayam..." said gang...

"hi guys..."said reyam...

Taani look at all...

"u guys are looking handsome..."said taani...

"thanks " said amar bharat nil vicky...

"but not than my bhai..."said taani giglling...

Their girls giggle...

Taani look at rey who was staring at her...for two sec their eyes met but quickly taani look away...taani's this action hurt rey...although he know that after what he done he has to ready for this...

"umm...taani tumhara partner nahi aaya..."ask nil...

"ha vo bas abhi..." taani was saying this and just a black bmw car came there and came out a hot and handsome guy...imagine rithvik dhanjani...

"oh...here he is...my childhood friend arjun..." said taani...

He came near them...all girls are drooling over her...except shani...

Ne:wow so handsome...

Si:ya...so hot too...

"hi taani..." he came there and pull taani in a bonecrush hug...

"i cant breath yar...'' said taani and he broke the hug...

Rey was so much jealous ...he look in other direction to avoid them ...

"i missed u"said arjun...

"i missed u too..." said taani...

"i missed you two three four...i missed u so much..."said arjun...

This dialouge ...rey remember the scene after dil ibadat..taani too...she become little sad...arjun notice this...

"hey kya hua princess...??sad kyu ho gai??" said arjun..

"princess...ab vo meri taani ko princess bulayega...go to hell mr. Arjun ..." thought rey...

"kuch nahi...mere friends se milo..."said taani...

She introduce him with all and said:"this is my best best best frien from jodhpur..."

"yes...right...i m here for a business deal...unfortunetly my gf is not here so i m here with my best friend..."said arjun and wink at taani...

Rey saw this and feel jealous...

"are guys lets go in..."said taani and drag arjun with him...

All follow them...rey ask a random girl for entry only and then they will seprate...

All came in...taani saw rey with a girl...and she feel jealous...

"why are u feeling jealous taani??he doesnt care about u...dont be weak...be strong..."thought taani...rey was looking at her all the while...he smirk...

"i will get a soft drink...u wait here..."said arjun...

"ok..."answer taani...

Gang is chitchatting as usual and swaron are lost in their world...

Rey come near taani and stand beside her...as he come near taani start to walk...

"looking like u r jealous when i m with that girl..."said rey...

Taani stopped...prepare herself to be strong and then she turn to rey...she give a smile to him...

"no i m not..."said taani...

"oh...i can see this..." said rey..

"that means u still think about me right??"said taani

"oh...not at all...why should i think about u??"said rey...

"oh ya...i forgot ...u are no more my boyfriend now..."said taani folding her hands...

"ya...but its looking like u still care about me...when i was with that girl...u r jealous..."said rey thinking that if he answer her back she will become more strong...

"no...u r wrong...i m not jealous bcoz i dont bother about u any more...do whatever u want...make new gf..i dont care...your actions didnt affect me now...i know only one thing that u doesnt have feelings...i can say one thing...after what happen...i cant trust love...love is nothing for me..."

Saying this taani left from there..

Rey was stunned after hearing this...

"did she mean she doesnt love me anymore???"thought rey ...

"no no...she is angry thats why she is behaving like this..."again rey thought...

All gather in a group and all are talking...

"hey taani...rey tumhara assistant hai na??" ask arjun...

"ha..."said taani looking at rey...and she found him staring at her...

"are to phir gs aur ags ka dance to hona hi chahiye..."said arjun...

Taarey's eyes widen...

''ummm...nahi me dance nahi karti..."said taani...

"are kya nahi...tumhe dance karna hoga taani..."said arjun...

"are chodo na arjun...vo dar gai..."said rey...

"achha...me dar gayi???me aap se nahi darti hu..."said taani

"oh...to dance ho jaye..."said rey smirking...

"ok...ho jaye..."said taani ...

Taarey stand up and went up on the stage...

"hey...whats this??"said all in the club...

Just then a flash light on...and it is on a guy...he is none other that rey...

Heyy beimaan, Dil bada beimaan
Hota nahi aasaan issey hai samjaana


Rey start dancing with some hiphop moves...

Beimaan, Dil bada beimaan
Tere liye shaitaan
Meri naa ek maana


Just then he pull taani...and lift up holding her waist and twirl her in air...and then he put her down holding her waist...

Dil jeete yaa main jeetu
Dekhungi dekhega tu
Lo dil se sharat lag gayi


Taani turn and put her hand on his chest...and both do some dance steps...

Mujhe to teri lat lag gayi, lag gayi
Zamaana kahe lat yeh ghalat lag gayi
Mujhe to teri lat lag gayi, lag gayi
Zamaana kahe lat yeh galat lag gayi
Mujhe to teri aa aa aa aah yeah
Aaa aa aa aah yeah
Aahh aah aa aa Lat lag gayi
Mujhe toh teri aa aah aa aa yeh
Aa aa aa aah yeah
Aahh aah aa aa Lat lag gayi
Mujhe toh teri...


She do the lat lag gayi steps...

Roku jitna utni bagawat ho
Lagta hai aisa haal-e-dil ki
tum zaroorat ho - [2]


Rey pull her closer and put his hands around her neck...he hold her neck from back and twirl her round...

Mujhko bhi tu zaruri
Dubi nashein main poori
To kaisi yeh talap lag gayi


Taani enjoy dancing and she forgot that they are not together...she took some rounds around him and then hug him from behind...

Mujhe to teri lat lag gayi, lag gayi
Zamaana kahe lat yeh ghalat lag gayi
Mujhe to teri lat lag gayi, lag gayi
Zamaana kahe lat yeh ghalat lag gayi
Mujhe toh teri aa aah aa aa yeh
Aa aa aa aah yeah
Aahh aah aa aa Lat lag gayi
Mujhe toh teri aa aah aa aa yeh
Aa aa aa aah yeah
Aahh aah aa aa Lat lag gayi
Mujhe toh teri...


Taani do some close steps with rey and then both do lat lag gayi step...

Ek tu, ek main, ek baat huyi apni
Hairaan hai kyun saara jahaan
Jo raat hui apni -[2]


He hold her waist and pull her so close that their noses were touching with each other ...both can feel each others breath...he turn her and put his hand on her belly and from other hand he hold her hand and lift her from belly...

Mujhse tu aake mila
Toh yeh hua hai sila
Ki sau tohmat lag gayi


He put her down ...she turn to him and look in to his eyes...

Mujhe to teri lat lag gayi, lag gayi
Zamaana kahe lat yeh ghalat lag gayi
Mujhe to teri lat lag gayi, lag gayi
Zamaana kahe lat yeh ghalat lag gayi
Mujhe toh teri aa aah aa aa yeh
Aa aa aa aah yeah
Aahh aah aa aa Lat lag gayi
Mujhe toh teri aa aah aa aa yeh
Aa aa aa aah yeah
Aahh aah aa aa Lat lag gayi
Mujhe toh teri...


They do the lat lag gayi steps...

When they finish the song rey was standing so close to her holding her waist...

"wooo hooo...''all cheered...

Hearing the cheer she came to her sense and she push him and get down...

Taani is getting down from stage when some guys praise her...she thanked them...

Rey was looking at her constantly...he heard some guys talking..

"yar ye kitni hot dikh rahi hai..."

"ha yar...vese iska name kya hoga??

"taani name hai uska..."

"tujhe kaise pata??"

"are st. Louis ki gs hai...sab jante hai usse...ek baar aayi thi hamari college me...gs work ke liye...''

"achha??iska koi bf hai kya???"

"are tha...but ab nahi hai...''

"what???matlab i can ask her..."

"hey...wait ...r u askung her to be your gf???"

"yes..." as he said yes. ...he felt a tight punch on his face...

He is rey who punch him...

"dont think...she is my gf...she is mine...only mine...get that???"said rey...

The guy nod and rey left from there to tell taani everything...now he cant lie to her...

"i dont bother u any more..."

He remember her line and felt a pang in his heart...

He look here and there...but he cant find taani anywhere...

He ask arjun and he told that she is in the garden behind the club...

Rey went there...and found taani there...she was looking at the moon...suddenly a drop fell on her face..."TIP"

"TIP TIP TIP TIP TIP TIP "...it starts raining...

Taani spread her hands and enjoy the rain...she twirl and enjoy the rain...she is full wet now...

Rey saw her and went near her...

Her eyes were closed and her head was up toward the sky...he came in front of her...she can feel him...she slowly open her eyes and saw him...her hairs were stucked on her face...he come close and remove the stucked curls...

"tum yaha kya kar rahi ho taani???bimar ho jaogi..."said rey...

"aap bhi to bhig rahe ho???aap bhi bimar ho jaoge..."said taani...

"u still care for me..."said rey...

"no...i not..."said taani...and start walking

"tumhe to meri lat lag gai hai na...kaise ji paogi mere bina??"said rey and taani stopped hearing this...

He went near her and drag her in a small cottage...

"rey aap kya kar rahe ho??jane do mujhe ..."said taani...

"batao taani...meri lat lag gai hai tumhe...ji paogi mere bina??"ask rey...

Taani push him and said:"ha lag gai thi aap ki lat but dhire dhire me sab seh lungi..."said taani and turn...

"i love you" said rey...taani was shocked hearing this...she turn and look at him...and said:"aap ke liye ye kya koi game hai??jab chaha pyar kar liya jab chaha chod diya...me ab aap ki baato me nahi aane wali rey..."

"ye mene tumhare liye kiya taani...taaki tum independent ho sako...tumhare liye maine ye fake breakup kiya..."

"achha...to aap ne ye natak kiya...ek baar bhi nahi socha ki mujhe kitni taklif hogi??"

"m sorry taani...i know i was wrong...but.."

"nahi rey...ab nahi...mene bahot mushkil se samhala hai...ab nahi..."said taani and turn to leave but rey pull her and lock her in between his hands to the wall...

He lean down and kiss on her shoulder...she close her eyes...
He went to her neck and suck the water droplets there...then he cup her face to kiss her ...she try to go but he caught her lips in a rough kiss...he was kissing her roughly...bitting her lowwr lip and causing her pain...she cry in pain...she want to pull out of the kiss but he didnt allow...taani force him to broke the kiss...rey broke the kiss to say only one thing"plz taani mujhe chod k mat jao...me mar jaunga..." and again he lean in a kiss...this time taani also respond back...soon the rough kiss become a soft one...he softly nibble her lower lip decreasing her pain...tears of joy are rolling down from her eyes...he broke the kiss and hug her tight and hid her in his arms protectivly...his eyes were also wet ...

"i love you taani...plz dont leave me..."said rey...

"i love you too rey...aap ki lat lagi hai to aasani se chutegi nahi..."

The end

Hope its beyond your expectation shanya...enjoy...



Edited by Dipu_taarey - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
res!!!/unres!!!!
yay!!!am d first one to comment on d first os of d thread!!
yay!! 🥳 🥳 n vo bhi aapki os matlab readers ki line lagi rehti hai!! 😉 😆
niways cumin to ur stry!!!
it was super duper!! 😃 😃 😃
hot,romantic,thrill in shrt it was a cumplete os!!!
i loved d song..re me bhi kya bol ri hu as itz a challenge of song based os na?? 😆
n deir dance!!🥳
it was just amaziinG!!!
n den cottage scene+tip tip barsin baarish..awww!!it was a deadly combo!! 😳 😳 😳
goshh!!didi den deir freakin hott kiss!!t 😳 😳 😳
i so so so loved it!!

n am glad dat u r in kungfu panda team!! 😉
cuzz me bhi usi team me hu!! 😉 😆
n am glad dat d first os of d thread is frm our "TEAM"---*KUNGFU PANDAS*
Yayyy!!! yipeee!!!!🥳
********~~~~~KUNGFU PANDA TEAM KI JAI HO!!!~~~~~~********
Edited by PrOjeCtA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrOjeCtA

res!!!/unres!!!!
yay!!!am d first one to comment on d first os of d thread!!
yay!! 🥳 🥳 n vo bhi aapki os matlab readers ki line lagi rehti hai!! 😉 😆
niways cumin to ur stry!!!
it was super duper!! 😃 😃 😃
hot,romantic,thrill in shrt it was a cumplete os!!!
i loved d song..re me bhi kya bol ri hu as itz a challenge of song based os na?? 😆
n deir dance!!🥳
it was just amaziinG!!!
n den cottage scene+tip tip barsin baarish..awww!!it was a deadly combo!! 😳 😳 😳
goshh!!didi den deir freakin hott kiss!!t 😳 😳 😳
i so so so loved it!!

n am glad dat u r in kungfu panda team!! 😉
cuzz me bhi usi team me hu!! 😉 😆
n am glad dat d first os of d thread is frm our "TEAM"---*KUNGFU PANDAS*
Yayyy!!! yipeee!!!!🥳
********~~~~~KUNGFU PANDA TEAM KI JAI HO!!!~~~~~~********



thank u so much dear...no sweeti...first os was by monkey team...check...i come to know about it now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
Res sorry late/ unres

haye meri dipu di itna accha os likh diya kyaa baat hai kya baat hai lagta hai mujhe thora or tough dena chahiye thaa mujhe apka os bohot accha laga n apne apna challenge cohot hi acche se clear kiyaa n i loved itt thanxx a lott 4 such a lovely os thankk u sooo muchh 4 completing my challenge 1st
Edited by shanya8 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great one dips thoroughly enjoyed it ..luvd taani's dress 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great work. Throughly enjoyed reading it =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
Dipsy, mind blowing OS, I love it... Beautifully written
Taarey dance was so romantic, in the cottage was a little senti but full on Romantic
Taani trying to be brave was superb, Everything was perfectly written
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
amazinggg os 👏 lovd it👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey fellow Panda!
Absolutely loved the OS and the way you described the dance!
Love it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Awesome OS
really enjoyed it (:

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