Game of destiny- A KR ff ( CH 13 UPDATED)11.09.14

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-Monika-

@-Monika-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#821

superb update...

Amazingly written...

karan nd rey's convo was awesome..

you described rey's feelings so well...

loved it..

waiting for the next part..

update soon..

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#822

Khatam ho gaya??? hawww...

kam se kam end mei kuch KR ka romantic moment dikhati :/

kya re...i mean..ending was good...but meko toh KR cahiye tha :/

overall i'l say..i loved the chapter...

Rey was driving like mads..not knowing wherr he is...that inner turmoil and finally letting it out in front of Karan was beautifully described...

needless to say i loved that.. and m glad he has stopped thinking about future and has starting concentrating on his present ^_^

loveddd it...

abhi next update KR special haan plzzz..uski memory abhi vapas mat laana bas... *prays puppy face*

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#823

awesome...thanks for the pm...😊

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sanjana

@sanju_arsha

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#824

Originally posted by: bluelashes
Sanju m katti with u
meko kab sey is story ka pm nai mila
vo to ajj main PC sey ol ayi to mane search kiya
warn main kese read krti stry
bohot bad hai tu uwaaa uwaaa
m gussa with u now
main ni karna comment katti
Aroma/-

maine snd kiya pm for every updates..

kabhi kabhi apna pm box check karlo

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Annwesha

@sakura20

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#825

AWESOME... LUVD D PART...
Luvng d charactr karan...

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glmorous_diva

@glmorous_diva

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#826

amazing update

karan is ryt...jo hoga dekha jayega

rey kriya ko dekh rha cook krte ,...so swt

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#827

Awesome update
Love it so much
Update it fast

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#828

finish read your chapter 13 just now... it was fabulous...
and after have some talk with him and were they landed up forget the way to
go back so will have to ask and go home and after reach home karan is relief
to see them have there talks both kriya and reyaansh... amazing...
do continue soon