*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11 - Page 34

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Posted: 12 years ago
Really nice update.

How come Khushi mentioned Shyamji at the 1st meet?
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update !!
I love how you showed tiny bit of jealousy , start of something beautiful :)
Khushi is hilarious , did she really ask that :p
Waiting for more.
Thank you ,
Write soon
:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it plzz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Barun_Addict

Finally u updated...!!!


Hah no one can reject ASR especially when he asks with his super sexy husky voice and style...

ASR jelly of NK...

Ye to hona hi tha...

He even wanted to punch him...
Bina mile hi itna gussa
I love this possessive ASR...

Iss snake ka main kya karun
Har jagah tapak padta hai...

N i just love the question to neha...
Iska matlab aag dono taraf barabar ki lagi hai...
Tabhi khushi was white faced after listening to ASR's convo at the cafe...!!!

Thank you for the wonderful update...!!!
Main to bilkul pgal hi ho gyi thi...
Vaise abhi bhi hun...

Thankswa...

P.S. I am really addicted to this SS...!!!





BA!❤️🤗
It was your constant pestering😆 that made me finish writing the update quickly and post it after much difficulty ! My net is still down and I m typing this on my phone.
Just wnted to say I am lucky to have a crazy reader ⭐️like you who says she is addicted to my SS!!!😃😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cheesemad

resd...


edited...
omg what an update...
loved it...
khushi actually threw hot coffee on him...of course no wonder she is KKG after all...
i m loving this possessive and caring arnav...
khushi will soon realize that her shyam ji is no saint...
i loved the way he asked her out for coffee...
sorry for short comments having exams:)


Hey Komal ❤️ 🤗

How sweet of you to be the first one to read and comment inspite of your exams! I am glad you like this possessive and caring ASR coz I like him too!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
such high dose of IpK stuff in a single update..! Hey devi maiyya..! Its as if i relived all those Arnav- khushi fights all over again..

Arnav is possessive about her, concerned, caring, jealous and moreover he's strted to feel for her!

For khushi, she is as she is, instinctive. Though arnav's tone was rude yet his intent was clear and when khushi comes to know of it, she surely wud apologise him for the tea-stunt she performed!

And shyam is again the same rat, trapping away ppl into his sickingly sweet tongue!

While poor NK was being subjected to all sorts of mental torture b the very skilled brain of Arnav singh raizada..

While khushi too lost her self to jealosy thnking about arnav's visit at la's place to change clothes..! Possessive haan?:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
That is one of really OTT behavior of Khushi.
Just to admonish her to be careful with Shyam how cum she threw hot tea to him!
I'm pretty sure Shyam is a bad guy.When he will entrapped her, she will realise that Arnav was right.
Hmm, so La seems Arnav's present girlfriend.
Ca't assume how will they meet next.
update soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update. Interesting twist on Shyam, Anjali and NK. Loved the hot cofee scene!
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Posted: 12 years ago
feeling is mutal. great. thanks for nice update.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy


BA!❤️
It was your constant pestering😆 that made me finish writing the update quickly and post it after much difficulty ! My net is still down and I m typing this on my phone.
Just wnted to say I am lucky to have a crazy reader ⭐️like you who says she is addicted to my SS!!!😃😳

🤗
u did all this for me
thankswa !!!!
love you...

Edited by Barun_Addict - 12 years ago

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