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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hii guys!!i was a silent reader till now but thought to write something about our favorite coupleTAAREY.the story is based on the current track only and I'll be staing taani's carrer as the main turn over part in the story. Mai kuch new characters bhi add karoongi .those are:

Raghav and sia ,panchi and ranveer,kiya and KD

TAAREY OS: PYAAR MAINE TUMSE KIYA

Taani had come to know the real reason behind her break-up and was super duper angry on Rey , Swayum and Sharon.The gang and the college students were bashing here more than ever .the team rocked in NDC semi-finals and they've qualified for the finales despite of swayums injury. He was all OK now but taani was going deeper n deeper into frustration.she had now one to support her ,all her friends of royal were dispersed(but she dosent know ki voh sab toh uske liye vaapas aane vale hai). Even her bhai was misunderstanding her.tauji had left and she was all alone in her at present sad world. Swaron are a couple but no one kows abt it except taarey.

The gang was practicing for the NDC finales when swayum entered with a guitar in his hands.the gang notices this.

V:are swayum tujhe guitar bhi bajaana aata hai

Ashi:mujhe pata types nahi tha.

Rey:yeh tera hai

Neha:very talented swayam is.

No one was letting swayum speaks until taani comes.

Sha:taani tumne bataya nahi ki swayum ko guitar bajaana aata hai.

Taa:(confused)aapko aata hai par voh toh maine

Sw:are nahi yahi toh mai kehna chahata hoon ki guys mujhe guitar bajaana nahi aata hai aur yeh guitar mera nahi taani kai hai(yes it was taani's guitar and I'll be launching her soon as a singer.)

Gang:taani ka?

Bh:abet u majaak mat kar .taani yeh nahi bajaa sakti.

T:(angry n with attitude)kyun ek non-dancer ke passions nahi ho sakte .vaise bhi I don wanna waste my time on u guys .(rudely)rh resume kar lo.bhai mai yeh leke jaa rahi hoon.(and she storms out of the room)

The gang again starts backbitching her .but that was now the heights for rey.

Re:(shouts angrily)guys shutup!! Do u guys even have a mind.or a heart .tum logon ko pata bhi hai taani ko kitne time se kitna pressure jhel naa padh raha hai.(sacarstically)are nahi how wud u know who ek NON-DANCER jo hai aur tum toh THE dazzlers aur THE weaklings ho.THE dance team.wait a second mai hi tumhe batata hoon wats the matter aur phir karana uske bare mein back bitching .(anger and sacarsm)wait !! tum sab ussi ke muh se sun lena aur dekh bhi lena mai kya kehna chahata hoon.(in an angry and firm tone)TERRACE RIGHT NOW

PRECAP: gang + shareyum gets a shock. Taani's career chosen and a whole new makeover

So guys this was it I'll be updating it afterwords.

Comment zaroor karana aur mere tarah ke silent readers at like toh karo

Mai ek crazy tarey fan hoon.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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taarey os:pyaar maine tumse kiya
part2:a shock
AT THE TERRACE
as the gang arrived at the terrace they got a big shock.taani was crying her heart out while sitting and playing the guitar and singing the song "talking to the moon" which she had herself composed(i knoe its composed by bruno mars and cannot be sung with a guitar music but guys plz imagine.and huh all the song which will be used in this os would be composed by taani only).
I know you're somewhere out there
Somewhere far away
I want you back
I want you back
My neighbors think
I'm crazy
But they don't understand
You're all I had
You're all I had

[Chorus:]
At night when the stars
Light up my room
I sit by myself
Talking to the Moon.
Trying to get to You
In hopes you're on
The other side
Talking to me too.
Or Am I a fool
Who sits alone
Talking to the moon?

Ohooo...

I'm feeling like
I'm famous
The talk of the town
They say
I've gone mad
Yeah
I've gone mad
But they don't know
What I know
Cause when the
Sun goes down
Someone's talking back
Yeah
They're talking back
Ohhh

[Chorus:]
At night when the stars
Light up my room
I sit by myself
Talking to the moon.
Trying to get to You
In hopes you're on
The other side
Talking to me too.
Or am I a fool
Who sits alone
Talking to the moon?

Ahh... Ahh... Ahh...
Do you ever hear me calling
(Ahh... Ahh... Ahh...)
Ho hou ho ho hou

'Cause every night
I'm talking to the moon

Still trying to get to you
In hopes you're on
The other side
Talking to me too
Or am I a fool
Who sits alone
Talking to the moon?

Ohooo...

I know you're somewhere out there
Somewhere far away
she noticed the gang gazing at her and especially rey so she instantly stopped.
t:(rudely and in firm tone and without looking into anyones eyes)aap log yahan?
r:(comes closer to her) haan hum
t:(ignores rey) kuch kaam tha?
r:(takes a step forward)nahi,par shayad ab hoga.
sw:tumhari yaad aa rahi hai so tumse milne aaye
t:(sarcastically)aapko meri yaad aayi!!i am so shocked. finally i am being noticed.ek non-dancer noticed hoo rahi hai.(looks dircteky into rey's eyes)ek irrtating peron notice hoo rahi hai.a person with PATHETIC THOUGHTS is being remembered .meri fikar karane ki koi zarorat nahi hai.
r:zaroorat hai.tum meri..(interrupted)
v:rehne de rey isse baat karane ka koi use nahi hai.she is
t:detestble. am i right or am i right.koi daya nahi chahiyeh mujhe.
swaron:tum ese kyun behav kar rahi hoo??
t:mai ese kyun behav kar rahi hoon?? mai?? bhai aapko yaad bhi hai ek baar aap apni girlfriend sharon ko chodke mere se do minute baat ki hoo.. nahi aap toh apne hi swaron dreamland mein khoye huey the.allow me to show u guys something.
she takes out her laptop and opens the webpage abt her and sharon's comparison.
t:yeh dekho(the gang sees this and is totally shocked)abhi there is more(she takes out the page in which there were the comments of the students bashing her)yeh hai meri life.aur ek baat(she opens another folder in which she had recorded a video in which the team was backbithching her and swayum was nt protecting her at all)
after the gang sees this they all are in a big shock.
t:ab mai aapse ya expect karo.aapko pata hai dance ban jaisi cheez kabhi thi hi nahi .yes it ws all fake.kher why to tell u guys.u guys r jst like tht only.
bh:abe tu gaali
t:haan di maine gali yeh vaali (shows midfig)par tumhe nahi apne aap ko.i so wish ki mai kabhi exist hi naa karati.i so wish ki mai yaheen par mar jaaoon.
the gang was now in an utter shock and escpecially rey.
t :please eave me alone vaise bhi mai alone hi hoon . leave i said
she ran to corner sat down there was continouosly cried.sharon ran and hugged swaym and continusuoly cried .the gang began consoling sharon and no one was looking at taani except rey.he ran to her and hugged her in the position she was sitting.but he got another shock.just when rey hugged her taani shook him off her with a big jerk which made rey fall aside(he was on his knees).the gang noticed this and sharon criend even more.


precap:taani's whole new makeover and a whole new career


guys ab bas thak gayi naxt update baad mein doongi
thanku for ur likes and comments.
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mai ek crazy taarey fan hoon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved The Concept ... Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 were amazing !! Taani's talent of singing and playing the guitar ... And Then her outburst ! Wow ... But Rey is feeling so bad for Taani and He hugged her but she jerked him away ! Will wait for the next chapter ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The concept is amaging love the first and second chapter and waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
TAAREY OS:pyaar maine tumse kiya
precap:taani's outburts at the gang.rey tries to hug taani but she jerks him away.

after taani jerks rey away she lifts her head up sees the gang and rey
r:taani voh..(but gets interrupted by taani)
t:leave right
r:par taani
r:mujhe kuch nahi sunna .please leave.(sarcastically)infact aap log kyun jaayenge mai hi chali jaati hoon aur vaise bhi mai kaun hoti hoon to tell u guys to leave.aapka college .aapki GS.aapke under hi work karoongi.
r:par taani i love..(again interrupted)
t:dont dare!! love! pyaar! ishq! mohaabbat! u dont know the hell about these so please dont dare.
she gets up and goes to the exit and stops there with her back facing to the gang.she wipes her eyes and turn around and with attitude says:kal NDC FINALES hai soo aap logo ko mai aap sab ko kal subah auditorium mein miloongi.
she leaves taking her guitar with her leaving back the sobbing shareyum with the gang consoling them.

THE NEXT DAY
taani meets eyeryone and prevents any talk on the terrace matter.they all leave for the NDC FINALES venue after meeting VP.the gang gives a rocking performance (same performance which they aye on indiafest 2013-14)and they win the finales.rey is the winner of NDC individuals.all reach back the college and get congratulations from everyone.at taayum's home tauji congratz taani and for first ever he gives swayum a heartly hug and kisses him on his forehead and for a shock he says I M PROUD OF YOU SWAYUM AND TAANI.

THE NEXT DAY
taani comes to the college a little late and everyone are shocked to see her in a new avatar .
she is wearing-
all are shocked to see her new avatar.the gang is seated at the canteen and when taani enters the canteen everyone is looking at her even the gang and boys are drooling over her makin rey fume with anger.the gang is also shocked to see her in new avatar and rey is mezmerised by the innocence in tht hot drss also.she sees the gang but instead of going to them she goes to the counter,takes a mug of coffee and goes t o and all emty place and gets seated there and start working on the laptop.

the gang sees another boy standing at the entrance and smiling at taani
sw:yeh nayaa lagta hai .par yeh taani
r:(fuming with anger)ko ghur ke kyun dekh raha hai.

till there that boy gives an evil smile and shouts looking at taani:meri JAANEMAN
taani listen and suddenly gets up ,the gang shocked.taani turns around and a smile forms on her face. that boy is none other than our raghav .
she runs to him and hugs him as tight as she could and he also hggs him back
the gang
r:(puppy face)mujhe toh kabhi itna cute aur tight hug nahi diya.
the gang laughs at his face
back at Taaghav
as there hugging a guy comes near them and comes close to taani's ear and says:CHICKLET!!
taani breaks the hug and see that guys and is even more happy that guy is none other thanour KD .
taani says:KD and hugs him as tightly as she could and he hugs her back.then another guy comes near them and says in taani's ear:mujhe bhul gayi.taani breaks the hug and turns to him and gives him a friendly slap.that guy was...



BAS ab thak gayi yar baad mein update karoonigi
Edited by shinchan12d3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Awesome updates
love it
update soon and pm me please
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
sorry guys voh pics update nahi hu so here are they
taani's dress-https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRM3Qb5bZIvbmdr1G5rxLprxkRQKppy1LgraaOfxw6OOW_czi3s1A
raghav(1 st guy)-https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSCYxfyehblkeWmx2caCxAZYzVg6xUh7m078HvU2yw03Om6VBOk
kd(second guy)-https://encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQF1qJGlIhKBpaHMJMhlVzCKkXjlLAW8eVwIyHWrR0PgLHXrLX7PQ
update baadmein karoongi

Edited by shinchan12d3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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VERY INTERESTING... PLEASE CONTINUE SOON.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
wow sooo interesing ... l8uvd it alot .. plsss update d next part soon and do pm me ... :)

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