Taarey FF : Two different worlds collide

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yashi

@--taareylove---

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

awesome start loved it so much

thanks for the pm and do it again😃😃

update soon

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ray1998

@ray1998

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: taareylove
awesome start loved it so much

thanks for the pm and do it again😃😃

update soon

yep i sure wil

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shanaya

@shanya8

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

woww awesome update luved it yr taani is tooo gud continue n update soon

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Viji.Chandran

@Viji.Chandran

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

nice beginning...

taani's charactr s so diff...

superb

update soon

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ray1998

@ray1998

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: vijichandran
nice beginning...
taani's charactr s so diff...

superb

update soon

ty i was kind of scared 4 taanis character cause i thought u guyz wont like it happy u guyz liked it 😉

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ray1998

@ray1998

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Chapter 2

< character sketch Sharon : Taani's little sis she is still in middle school n is kind of different 4m d serial >

She reacher her house. as she went 2 open d houre gate d gate fell apart . " both at d same time?" taani said 2 herself in horror. " it is going to take money to fix them again." She said with disappointment. She walked into the house. " I m home!" She removed her shoes n as she was walking ser leg went over a mat as d floor was made of wood d floor was broken n her leg went into d hole which was covered by d mat. " oh, it looks like ur home ,sis" said Sharon. " whts wid dis trap Sharon?" said taani in anger. " I accidently put my foot through it earlier. Seems like d floorboard is rotten." Said Sharon normally. " so u thought it would be wise enough 2 just hide it under a mat?" said taani. Sharon kept her hand on her mouth trying 2 control her laugh n said, " u fell 4 it as planned." " u didn't plan it," said taani. Sharon just went into ther room n closed d door. Taani was worried if Sharon had got hurt or no, " didn't u get hurt? Sharon?!" Sharon just shut d door. " seems like u r OK." Taani said 2 herself.

Taanis mother was painting statues in d living room. " Mom!" taani sid. " oh ! taani " she replied. " hey!" taain sid. " welcome home!" she replied in a low tone. " u had a night shift at d hospital, right? U don't exactly have a strong constitution , so u sholdnt overwork ur self" taani said in a worried tone. " I m f9, dear. I cant just put all d burden on u,I need 2 shape up as well" Her mother replied. " if only dad hadn't disappeared after leaving a deb." Sharon interrupted. " dat wasn't necessary." Taani said. " oh, der was a call 4m d chief where u work. Apparently , 1 of d workers cant cum, so she wants u 2 take her place." Sharon saod trying 2 change d topic . " oh, really?i have 2 leave now, Then!y didn't u tell me dat earlier?" taani said wid surprise. She ran 4m there. " whoa! I almost fell in d hole again!" " sis could u leave this in d postbox while ur out?" Sharon requested. " another prize contest?" taani questioned her. " ty." Sharon replied. " try 2 rest up a bit, mom!i'll b on my way" taani requested her mum as she left d house. " v r poor but sis definitely need a cell." Sharon said 2 herself.( so guyz dis is a bit info where taani works:- http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cosplay_restaurant or http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Maid_caf%C3%A9 and d clothes they wear ,http://www.cosplayforce.com/image/cache/data/Maid_Culture_c_0008-500x500.jpg )

Guyz please comment n like n ya also tell me about her part time if u guyz think i shold cange it do tell me d cafe is kind of based on Japanese cafes do tell me ur views

Edited by ray1998 - 12 years ago

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yashi

@--taareylove---

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

me first yay
awesome update loved it so much ..

taani and sharon are sis

aww taani she is so poor

thank for the pm and do it again..

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Jalebi bai

@Breezy.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

I loved it!! Bichari taani she is so poor.. And plz do PM me next time also😛

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Bubblie1490

@Bubblie1490

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Hey nice story, obviously different & something that would interest me the most because of Taani's character.
I liked your writing style. I was looking for something like this since long & now you r here with it.
Just hope that Rey isn't a JERK & even if he is than I want Taani to hit him hard even stronger & make him pay for his deeds.

Anyways thanks for the pm & updates.