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love u all for beautiful comments...❤️
virika11: versan!!!...lolz...
yeh to kab ka ho chuka tha!!! 😉
avni19: i didn't put in pee loon...as viren sung.
that film released wen i was in clg in 2010 n that was same song was sung by sanjay!!😆
i don't want to change anything in my story...
all thanks to our dairies...!!!
part - 7:
jeevika: i'll myself know wat he's like
arjun: all the best!!
next day in clg:
jeevika: i've got a plan to know abt viren
jayshree: wat's that?
jeevika: wait n watch
jeevika waits for viren outside their class after his hour has completed:
jeevika: sir!!
viren: wat jeevika! r u waiting for me?
jeevika: yes, sir
viren: wat do u want?
jeevika: sir, i've a doubt in accounts!!😉
viren: can u please ask me in tomorrows class?
jeevika: but sir it's important!!
[ jeevika didn't like his answer as she wanted to talk to him n viren was like... why can't this girl ask me in next class? ]
viren: ok. then come to staffroom in lunch break
after having food
jeevika: ok, thank u sir!!
jeevika comes to class
jayshree: kya hua? n wat did u know abt him?
jeevika: [ tells wat happened ] n says i'll get to know in lunch break
lunch break: n jeevika goes to staff room after her lunch
jeevika: excuse me sir!!
viren: yeah! wat's ur doubt?
jeevika: [ shows some random question n asks him ] this is it
viren: [seeing the question... ] jeevika, u didn't get this sum?? 😡 i've almost taught this very same sum almost 3 times as many were asking...n u...didn't listen even once!! i didn't expect this from u...
he explained the sum again n
warned her not to be so inattentive in class, as he hates such students who even don't mind that someone was telling class for them ...
he scolds her n she was very deeply hurt...
she tried to control her tears but she couldn't.😭viren then said that ...pehle galti karna, aur phir dantein, tho upar se rona...
jeevika couldn't take more n she ran towards her class...
in class:
jayshree: kya hua jeevika? why r u crying? please tell me...
arjun, noticing that jeevika was crying, came to her
arjun: jeevika, wat happened? please stop crying n tell us wat happened!!
jeevika: [ she said evrything ] so i was crying
jayshree: [ seeing the sum ] arey! tujhe yahi sum puchna tha?!! don't u remember , this was the same sum we got bored of hearing so many times ...n u asked the same!!!
jeevika: wat do i know that this was the same sum as i got this sum randomly...maine thodi na choose ki hai!!
arjun: our senior's were right... how rude he was to u? n wat's the need to scold ? if he's a professor, he should clarify doubts of his students no matter how many times they ask!!!
jeevika: ur right!! i should've agreed to u then itself!! he's not at all good...i hate him from now on...
night in jeevika's mansion:
she was crying thinking of the incident...
she was detailing every thing in her dairy...
[ jeevika has got this habit from her hostel warden. she used to cry a lot wen her parents first left her in boarding school n then her warden used to comfort her. whenever she was missing her parents she used to go to her warden...
after a few days, her bad luck was that warden was going to change n jeevika was really sad at this n
then her old warden asked jeevika to pen down every small incident in her life, whichever she feels the need to be shared to her mom n just think as if she was telling all these things to her mom
from then onwards jeevika started writing her dairy just as if like... she was telling all this to someone with every minute detail ]
IMPORTANT NOTE:
till now i didn't mention jeevika writing dairy as i had to tell u everything twice like she wrote this n this,etc...
i used to write it point to point...n now i'm giving them in this story like... in brackets or like thinking to herself, etc to give u a better picture of wat happened or else i should write like:
jeevika went home n in her dairy she wrote how she felt wen this happened or that happened...,
n then u can't connect that wel to the story...so i just left this dairy part.
rest is same as it is - nothing is added nor removed from my story !!😛
- veronica
Udne Ki Aasha
Kumkum Bhagya
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