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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll

This is not done Bhavna aise cliffhang kar diya tumne.Itne cruicial point pe tumne rok diya.this is not done.😭😭Atleast Sameer ka reaction to likh deti tum.Ab kya kar sakte wait hi karna padega.
Anyways Back to update: Gift ready ho gaya Saasu Ma ka.😳Riya to kya aur bhi log hai jinhe zor ka jhatka lagega annu.So dnt u worry Riya will hav company for that.😉😆
Annu-sam ka telephone wala love is going on.❤️Pyaar mein log itni baatein laate kaha se hai yaar.🤪Shree-Navika,lage raho.😉
Main hoon tumhare saath.Ahem Ahem😳😳
Pyaar ka mausam shuru ho gaya ETF mein❤️.
Chotu ko bhi finally uski 11:30wali mil hi gai.😃but ye kya,chotu sher k mu mein haat daal diya tumne.😲pyaar hua bhi to DAMMIT & SYS ki behen se.bada jhatka laga bechare ko but chalo ismein acchi baat ye hai k Mona ko bhi chotu pasand hai.😛Mona,chotu to ab tumhare dono bhai ko dekhkar darr gaya hai ab tumhe hi kuch karna padega.😉
Anwesha ne ab to dono saasuma ko impress kar liya.😎Arjun's revisiting his home was too emotional.If i m not wrong Arjun gave his flat keys to his mom.
Arjun-Anwesha's conversation was too gud.👍🏼Finally she told Arjun dat she loves Sam.🥳🥳
But annu bhi badi naughty hai.😆bechare Sameer ko kitna tension ho gaya tha but Finally bomb fod diya Sameer k samne aur tumne uska reaction bhi nai likha.Ab m waiting so u gotto update this soon.I want to know wat will b sameer's reaction to this&yes seems like Saasuma is planning sumthing.Bechara Sameer pyaar k liye kya kya karna pad raha hai.

Thanks dear 😊
😉😉
I know is baar bahut crucial jagah par rok diya maine ... par kabhi kabhi aisa karna bhi achchha hota hai 😉
Yes... Annu is all set... par abhi usko bhi nahi pata ki kya toofaan aane wala hai 😉
Of course ... ETF chief ke affair ki baat se jhatka to sabko lagega 😉
well... even I wonder ki pyar mein itni baatein log kahan se laatey hain 😆😆😆😆
And ye baat Mona ko zarur pareshan karegi future mein 😉😉😉
Ariya ek dusre ko trust kartey hain 😉
Mona - Chhotu ... I know bahut bada panga ho gaya hai Chhotu ki life mein ... chief aur second in command ki behen ke ishq mein pad gaya hai 😆😆😆... ab dekho kya hota hai 😉
And u guessed it right... Mona ko hi aagey badhna padega 😉😉
Annu se kaun impress nahi hoga... perfect Bahu material 😉
Is ghar se bahut yaadein judi huyi hain Arjun ki ... u r absolutely right... wo Arjun k ghar ki keys thi... jo usne apni Maa ko di 😊
Arjun is happy for Sam... and now he finally revealed the truth to Annu... wo bhi nahi chahta ki aur der ho 😉
Annu apne hone wale pati se hi to mazaak kar rahi hai 😆😆😆
Sameer ka reaction... wo waise to react karne ki haalat mein hi nahi hai 😉😉... par kuch na kuch to manage kar hi lega... uske heart par attack hua hai 😉
Saasu Maa ka plan bhi aa raha hai... stay tuned 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Carrie-



😳 Savita Aai is my Aatya Bai? I have always loved her.Super duperr! A big muah to you!🤗 Baba is also very sweet😳 I was so upset at the show waale Baba😭

😲 Haw! You paired Moniya with Chotu?🤣 OMG! Imagine Rowdy Rathore for a saala! Waise hi haalat kharaab rehti hai Chotu ki Chief ke saamne!😆

Yeh ACP Arjun "Khadoos" Rawte ko kya ho gaya hai?😕 He is moving all over the house matchmaking😆 Chalo!One love story is culminating in a sacred knot while others are getting on their rightful track!

Beautiful!👏

Waiting for the next installment!

Thanks dear 😊
I'm glad u liked ur Atya bai and baba 😉
Yes.. Moniya - Chhotu ... Chhota packet bada dhamaka paired with a Bada packet chhota patakha 😆😆😆😆
Ab to chief hi Chhotu ka Saala hai...ab kya darna 😉
Well... Ab khadoos Rawte seedha jaake Sam ke saath pranks nahi khel sakta na... to ye indirect games khel raha hai 😆😆😆
Things are settling down... and sabki shadiyan hongi ... don't worry 😉😉😉
Next part coming soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nakshatra92

nice part...


arjun stood by his word...

finally annu said "yes" to sam...

arjun's dialogue : main hoon tumhare saath 😉

ARIYA bhi the... mom's planning something ...

update soon

Thanks dear 😊
Yes... Arjun is happy for Sam and wants him to settle down soon in life 😊
And Annu has agreed to marry Sam 😉
Ariya have started trusting each other on personal level.😊
Stay tuned for Mom's planning 😉
Next part coming soon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Bhavna di
hugs
awesumwa
haye pvr parents
maine fb pe bta diya lol
ap chota cment
haye me mona ni hu lol
me payal par hu sis ok ;)
haye lov d convo btw anu n arjun
haila mona n chotu bole to motu robling
grt o o
my sam bro aww
yay lov it..!!

Thanks dear 😊
Hugs to u too my baby 🤗
Thanks for the name - Mona + Chhotu = Motu 😉
Update coming soon 😉😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutisweety

Finially i ahve read all the parts diii 😛
they are fab i loved ur story concept 😃
oh than sameer was missing his best frnd arjun,so sweet of arjun sam ko gajar pasand hai issliye arjun ne unn teeno ko kaha wow great... loved sameer sister mona,she is so sweet..
.so riya's di has cancelled comeing to meet riya...riya is sooo upset...liked riya and rathord conversation...arjun ne sameer ko javab nahi diya awww...
flashback was amazing and superb and loved itt...
and shree,riya and chotu were gud and
rathod and arjun playing indrectily...awww lolzzz..
riya arjun se sikna chahati hai..kya baat hai ...
again they got new case ...and finialy riya's sis is coming
omg ye kya tha riya arjun ko samjne gayi...par ulta ho gaya ...arjun uss SYS kar diya...rathord ne annu ko pick karne gaye hai...kya baat hai their first meeting was gud...so he liked annu made laddo's...anni and rathord conversation was good..
so a new entry in ETF...so shree is latoo on her...
he asked coffee for her,...chotu and shree doesnt want to
disterb them so they did'nt go...
shree and navika were guddd
so shree bahana bana raha tha basket ball kel ke liye...
sameer understands it...chotu also teases him...
and finialy they had their practice...
and next day ariya also practicing and arjun is memorised by her beauty...wow slowly they are coming close...
and sameer is behaving wried...this is noticed by arjun...
so arjun and sameer meet in mandir...
for roshini's shraddh...and flashback was gud and emotional..
sameer and roshini's was gud,loved it...
so riya and annu searching mandir to celabrate their's dad shraddh...
so annu apne aap ko dosh manti hai...
riya samja samja kar taak gayi hai...
hooo sameer wants to take her shopping and
they planing for annu birthday and they going to have
lunch together... that's great...
arjun's and sameeer's conversation was amazing...
so arjun ko pata chal gaya hai...akir vo arjun hai...
so painful past of riya...feeling so sad ...
This part loved it ...so sameer and annu's shopping was gud
sindor scean was lovely...
finialy sameer ko ek saree pasand aagayi and leli ussne
and here arjun,chotu,shree,navika and riya conversation was awesome,...and navika and shree ki baat arjun ko pata chal gaya ...aur to aur riya aur arjun ki chup chup ke dekna inn 3no ko bi pata chal gaya...not bad haa...
loved the part...beach conversation was gud loved sameer and annu...so sameer wants her to move on in her life...and
party time was gud... all had great fun...
arjun and roshini conversation was gud and sameer taughts were bit emotional and annu taught also a bit emotional...and loved riya and annu conversation ...
ho to sameer irrtatedly annu se baat ki aur sab kuch sort out bi hogaya...loved the way thier conversation was...i loved sameer and annu... they were to sweet and riya also told her to move on in her life...sameer wants annu t to wear that saree in his mother's birthday paty...
awww all were teasing riya...even sameer also...
so funny haaa...
superb song diii...and ussmai bi update lik di aapne ...
hub enjoy kiya na sam and annu...
loved thier cute and sweet moments ...
so arjun is trying to connect dots...
with sam and arjun's conversation...
awww so cute riya is teasin annu...
shree,chotu,navika anr riya conversation was guddd.
sam and annu moments were gud
and arjun is consoling riya sooo sweet
loved itsoo lovely update
finialy shree propose navika and rathod proposed annu...
loved all the moments between sam and annu...
riya was teasing annu awww...
and she is restless abt shree told her ...
loved sam and his parents they are so sweet
Archana ki parents bana arjun ki parents
wat mona is chotu's 11.30 vali 😆
riya and arjun's moment were cute 😳
and finily in next update sam and annu will bi caught waiting for it
continue soon 🤗
and me really sorry for the late diii😳


Thank u so much dear for this marathon comment 🤗
Its such a big motivation 🤗
Next part coming soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: devildiva21

super duper update di...!!

awesome...!!!
arjun's aii baba are perfect...!!!😉 love the character you chose...!!!
wow so sameer ne riya se baat kar li...!! taki annu phle aajaye.. but ye sab to phle se pre planned hai...!!!😉😆
aww ariya moments were very sweet...!!! the way he assured her and said mai hoon tumhare sath...!!!
hmm both ariya thinking about their talks😉 badia hai...!!!
wow so sam and arjun ki mom ko doubt ho hi gya dono pe...1!!!
omg... mona chottu ki 11 30 wali😲 bechara chottu...!!!😆 ab kon bachayga usse... and mona also likes him yayy... uff phone ki wrong timing...!!!😡
omg... ye dono kiaai ne kya plan bnaya h?😆
annu arjun convo was amazing...!!!!
hmm so he told her ki wo sam ki baat kar rha tha... and annu she said yes yayy...!!!
sam annu convo was lovely...!!! awww poor sam ko tease kiya...!!!!
can't wait to see sam's reaction😉
precap is very interesting...!!!
continue soon...!!!

Thanks dear 😊
Sameer to bas Riya ko ullu bana raha tha 😆😆
Ariya now trust each other on personal level 😊
Mom ko to doubt hona hi tha ... Annu itna comfortably kaam kar rahi thi... ab usko to aadat thi na... pichhle hafte usine to sab arrange kiya tha 😉
Mona-Chhotu ki love story ka bhi kuch karna padega ... chhotu to waise hi darta hai... 😉
Plan ke liye next update zaroor padhna 😉
Ab Annu ko sach pata chal gaya hai... aur usne decide kar liya hai ... to ab wo apne hone wale pati se mazaak kar rahi hai 😉😉😉
Update coming soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Leki

Di im sorry i know this is second time.. arrgh

I thoughr of giving long comments and reserved but forgot to unres... Sorry

Awesome update...
Mona Chotu story was totally shock to me... ah even she like Chotu😛
So every one impressed with Annu..
Sam Annu moments were nice...
Ariya something s dere for sure but both are not realising that...

No worries dear ... 😊
Thanks 😊
Yes... Chhotu ke liye bhi achchhi si partner mil gayi 😉
Annu to hai hi aisi ki kisi ko bhi pasand aa jaye 😉
Ariya abhi ek dusre ko trust kartey hai... unki story thodi slow hai 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mastmegha22

aww thanx mai sach main bahut greedy hoon

i am really feeling hungry or haan kuch ariya scenes bhi rakhna

😆😆😆😆😆😆
Ariya scenes is update mein nahi hain... par party mein Ariya ka dance hoga 😉
Aur sagayi ke pehle ek achchha sa Ariya scene... pakka promise 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Friends,

I'm back with the next part. Hope you all like this 😊
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Anwesha(mischieviously): wo isliye, kyunki aap bhi unhe jaantey hain...wo Mr Arjun ke college time ke friend hain... Wo bhi ek police officer hain... dono roommates they... aur ab dono saath mein ek hi team mein hain... aur unke wo dost unki ETF team ke chief bhi hain... ACP Sameer Rathod naam hai unka...Ab aap hi bataiye... ETF Chief ka background check karwane ki zarurat hai kya? ...Aur ab wo itne achchhe hain, to ab mai unhe "na" to nahi keh sakti na? Aapko kya lagta hai?
Sameer was depressed when Anwesha said she is going to marry Arjun's friend but by the time she completed her sentence Sameer couldn't believe what he just heard...
He was surprised and happy. A smiles crept on his face. He looked in to Anwesha's eyes. She was still smiling and amused at his state.
Sameer holds her hand, pulls her and pins her to the wall in such a way so that no one in the house can see them.
Anwesha: ouch...
Sameer(with a mischievious smile): Dr Anwesha... maine apna dil aapko isliye nahi diya ki aap uspar itna bada attack karein? jaan nikal di meri...kya tha ye sab?
Anwesha(smiling): kahan kya tha? maine to apne dil ki baat ekdum sahi sahi bol di...
Sameer(looking intensely into her eyes): achchha? lekin mujhe to kuch bhi theek se samajh nahi aaya... dobara bologi?
Anwesha(blushing, looking down): wo...maine faisla kar liya hai... Mai Mr. Arjun ke dost... ACP Sameer Rathod se hi shadi karungi... mujhe wo hi pasand hain... aur mere liye perfect life partner bhi wohi hain... unke siva mai kisi aur ke bare mein soch bhi nahi sakti...
Sameer: aur tumhara dost Sameer... jisne itni himmat karke tumhe propose kiya... uska kya?
Anwesha(looks up into his eyes): wo Sameer to hamesha mere dost rahenge na... mere best friend... jinse mai apne dil ki har baat share kar sakti hoon... jo har sukh-dukh mein mera saath denge... hai na?
Sameer smiles.
Sameer's mom calls him. Sameer has to let her go. She quickly goes inside the house. Sameer follows her. Both are blushing.
And Sameer makes a note in his mind to take this up with Arjun.
Suman notices this. Almost all the preparations are done. So everyone decides to take some rest. All are sitting in the living room.

Mr D.S. Rathod and Mr S. Rawte enjoy their game of chess in a corner with casual chit chatting. They were meeting after a long time.
Suman(teasing Sameer): Sameer... kuch baat karni hai tumse...
Sameer: haan Maa... mujhe bhi aapse baat karni hai...
Suman: nahi ...mai janti hoon tu meri baat taalne ki koshish kar raha hai... tu pehle meri baat sun... is baar mai tera koi naatak nahi sunungi... shaam ko tere papa ek friend ko invite kiya hai unhone... unki ek beti hai... wo bhi aa rahi hai... mai chahti hoon tu usse mil... baat kar...
DSR is surprised. He didnt invite anyone like that. He rolls his eyes. Suman singals him keep quiet.
Sameer(shocked): KYA?
Suman: Arrey!!! kab tak tu apni kisi dost ki help lega... ghar ko arrange karne mein? ye sab dost ki nahi... patni ki zimmedari hoti hai...
Sameer and Anwesha look at each other and are hurt. Just a few moments back they confessed their feelings to each other and now this bomb.
Mona: haan bhai... Maa bilkul theek keh rahi hai... waise bhi to tum us din keh rahey they ki tumhari jis friend ne tumhari help ki... wo sirf tumhari "Friend" hai "Girlfriend" nahi hai... to fir tumhe Maa ki baat maan leni chahiye
Suman: Ab wo teri girlfriend hoti ...to bhi hum chala lete... par tuney to saaf saaf mana kar diya... Ab tu meri baat maanega...
Sameer: Maa wo...
Savita(cuts him short): Haan Sameer beta... ab bahut ho gaya... humein pata hai... ki tumhe aaj tak koi ladki "us tarah" se pasand nahi aayi... kaash abhi Roshni hoti... (a little sad) humari baat to tum mantey nahi... shayad usi ki baat maan lete...
With all sort of emotional blackmailing going on, Sameer is nervous. Anwesha feels bad. Though she loves him, but she doesn't want him to hurt his family for her. She looks down avoiding eye contact with everyone.
Suman(blackmailing Sameer): Dekh...is baar mai teri koi baat nahi sunungi... aur mujhe is baar shadi ke liye "haan" hi chahiye... maine bol diya...tujhe abhi se bata diya hai... shaam ko party mein naatak nahi chahiye mujhe... aur iske aagey mujhe koi behes nahi karni hai...tere bhale ke liye ho bol rahi hoon (to Anwesha)... kyun Anwesha beti... mai theek keh rahi hoon na?
Anwesha(startled): Ji? (looks at Sameer and then back at Suman)...(confused and sad) ji mai kya keh sakti hoon?
Sameer looks at her helplessly.
Suman: arrey... ismein kehne ki kya baat hai... mai to bas ye poochh rahi hoon ki agar mai Sameer ki shadi karwana chahti hoon... to ismein kuch galat hai kya?
Anwesha(sheepishly): Ji nahi...
Suman smiles on her 1st victory.
Anwesha and Sameer are upset. Anwesha feels bad that all happened because of her. She delayed responding to Sameer. Sameer noticed her expressions and guessed that she is again going back to her shell and thinks herself to be responsible for it. Suman too notices that Annu is sad so she decides to cheer her up.
Suman brings the saree.
Suman: Savita... ye saree to dekho... achchhi hai na?
Savita: arre waah didi... sach mein bahut sundar hai... kiski choice hai?
Suman(sarcastically looking at Sameer): Sameer ki "DOST" ki pasand ki hai ...
Savita: achchha... Sameer ki "DOST"... wohi dost jiske bare mein abhi aap bol rahi thi? Jisne ghar aur kitchen sajaa kar diya?
Suman: Haan... wohi...
Savita: To fir Didi ... ek chance lekar dekho na... Shayad wo Sameer ke liye achchhi ho?
Sameer and Annu are a little hopeful and happy now.
Suman : arrey nahi... Sameer ne to pehle hi bol diya ki wo usey pasand nahi...
Sameer and Annu again disappointed.
Sameer(quickly): Maa... mujhe wo pasand hain...
Everyone stares at Sameer now.
Sameer(embarrassed): mera matlab hai mujhe wo achchhi lagti hai...
Sameer a little hopeful now.
Mona: mujhe pehle hi shaq tha... bhai ko wo ladki pasand hai... par mujhe yakeen hai... ki wo ladki bhai ko bilkul pasand nahi karti... ab bhai itne sadu and khadoos hain...koi ladki unhe kyun pasand karegi?
Sameer shoots an angry glare to Mona and Mona flashes her naughty smile to him annoying him further. He opens his mouth to say something but Suman speaks before him.
Suman: haan... ye bhi ho sakta hai... kya karu is ladke ka... kuch samajh nahi aata... humari pasand ki ladki nahi chahiye... khud ki pasand ki ladki nahi milti... ab kahi na kahin to compromise karna hi hoga na...
Sameer and Annu look at each other helplessly.
Savita: fir bhi ek chance lene mein kya harz hai... Sameer, tu milwayega na humein ussey?
Sameer(sheepishly): haan... milwata hoon na...
Sameer and Annu happy again.
Mona(cuts him short): koi faayda nahi...
Sameer is pissed off at Mona and Annu is disappointed again.
Savita: Didi... ab Sameer keh raha hai... to...ek baar mil lete hain...
Suman(looks sarcastically at Sameer): theek hai... mil lete hain.
Samer and Annu are a little hopeful and happy now and smile at each other.
Suman hopes that at least now Sameer will tell about Annu but Sameer decides to tell this in the party.
Suman waits for another 10 mins.
Suman: Sameer... kuch kehna hai tujhe?
Sameer: nahi... kuch nahi...
Suman is again annoyed. She wants the truth now and Sameer is still not ready to speak up. Its time for plan B and she signals Mona and Savita.
Now it was Savita and Mona's turn to take the game forward. Mr D S Rathod and Mr S Rawte are clueless what their wives are upto. They were just mute spectators of what was happening. So they just continue their game of chess.
Savita: Mona beta... kitchen mein jakar zara chane ki daal lekar aao... Rathod bhai sahab, Suman didi aur Sameer ko wo Kairi chi daal **(see the ** comment below) bahut pasand hai...abhi daal saaf karke bhigo deti hoon... to kal subah bana paungi...
Mona goes in and screams from inside
Mona: mujhe nahi mil rahi... kahan rakhi hai?
Suman: arre wahin kahi rakhi hogi... zara theek se dekh..
Mona: nahi mil rahi... exact jagah batao...
Suman: first shelf mein dekho...
Anwesha(chips in): Mona... Second shelf mein dekho...
Mona: nahi hai yahan...
Anwesha: wahan 4 dabbe hain... chane ki daal left se third dabbe mein hai...
Mona: mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha hai
Anwesha: Aisa kaise ho sakta hai ... left 1st dabbe mein arhar ki daal hai, 2nd dabbe mein moong ki daal hai, 3rd dabbe mein chane ki daal hai... maine apne haathon se rakhi hai wahan...
Everyone looks at Anwesha
Mona: kab rakhi thi?
Anwesha: ohho.. abhi Saturday ko hi to saara saaman arrange kiya tha maine... wahin...(stops when she realizes she just admitted that she is the one who helped Sameer)
Mona comes out smiling with the container of daal.
Sameer hits his forehead with his palm and Anwesha is embarrased and doesn't know what to do. They realize it was a trap by Suman, Savita and Mona get this confessed from them.
Suman, Savita and Mona are smiling. Mr DS Rathod and Mr S Rawte now know what the game was and are proud of their wives for getting this done and join them in smiling.

Suman: to ye baat hai...

Sameer and Annu look at each other helplessly and look back at Suman.
Suman: tum dono ko maine mauka diya tha... sach batane ka... par jab tum log kuch nahi bole to mujhe apne tareeke se sach ugalwana pada... ab kya karoon... ETF Chief ki Maa jo hoon (smirks)

Sameer(embarrassed): Maa... wo maine socha ki... party mein batata hoon...
Suman raises her eyebrows.
Sameer(sheepishly): Aapka jo bhi faisla hoga mujhe manzoor hoga...
Suman: mera faisla mai party mein sunaungi...tumhare Papa ke saath discuss karne ke baad.. filhaal tum Anwesha ko uske ghar drop kar do... usey party ke liye taiyar hona hoga... hai na Anwesha beti?
Anwesha just managed to nod in "Yes" and looks down.
Its almost 3 PM now. Sameer goes to drop Anwesha. Both of them were in a shock. Sameer strikes the conversation.
Sameer: tumhari Arjun se kya baat huyi?
Anwesha: wo unhe pehle se andaza tha... ki shayad aap mujhe pasand... (he words trail off and she blushes)
Sameer is surprised.
Awesha: Aur unhone us din humein parking lot mein dekh liya tha... jab hum shopping karke laute they...
Sameer is shocked and he hits the brakes.
Sameer: KYA?
He starts his vehicle again.
Anwesha: aur wo humesha se jis dost ki baat kartey they... wo aap hi hain...
Sameer smiles.
Anwesha(confused): Sameer... aapko kya lagta hai? kya Maa ur Papa ko humara rishta manzoor hoga?
Sameer(takes a deep breath): Pata nahi Annu... Maa ko shayad tum pasand ho... par maine unse ye baat chhupayi is baat se wo naraaz hain... ab to shaam ko hi pata chalega ki Maa ke dil mein kya hai...
They reach her home. She goes in and he leavs back.
On his way back he thinks about all the past incidents.
Sameer: to us kamine ko pehle se shaq tha... aur wo mujhe bina bataye... meri hi setting Annu se karwa raha tha...(smiles) ... ye Rawte bhi na... jaan nikal di thi meri saley ne... par galti meri hi thi... mujhe pehle hi samajh jana chahiye tha... usko koi aur dost to hai hi nahi... mere siva... (get emotional)... ab pata nahi Maa ka kya reaction hoga... pata nahi Maa ko kaise shaq ho gaya (suddenly remembers that Arjun talked to Suman and Savita in the room)... ek minute... kahi Arjun ne hi to Maa ko sab nahi bataya? Aur ye sab usi ki wajah se to nahi hua... ARJUN!!!!!... kamine ne ek baar to mujhe se baat kar li hoti...ek mauka
nahi chhodta ye mujhe pareshan karne ka... isko to mai dekh loonga... (annoyed at this thought)
He reaches home by 4:30 since there was not much traffic.
As soon as he reaches home, his mom orders him to get ready for the party and he quietly goes to his room and calls Arjun.
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So how was it? Sorry friends. Couldn't put the party part but it will be coming soon 😳
Kis kis ke saath aisa hua hai ki koi gadbad ki ho aur mummy ko batane hi wale ho aur tabhi kisi chugalkhor friend ne aake aapki pol khol di ho? 😉😉😉
Please excuse the spelling mistakes 😳
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Bhavna
Edited by bgargate - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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me first.
it was awesome and wonderful update.
loved sam and annu convo.
there moments was awesome.
loved sam and arjun mother acting even mona also.
loved there talking.
finally anu and sam fall there trap.
interesting.
loved sam and anu convo in car.
continue soon.
and thanx for pm.
Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago

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