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-Carrie-

@-Carrie-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#851

😳 Savita Aai is my Aatya Bai? I have always loved her.Super duperr! A big muah to you!🤗 Baba is also very sweet😳 I was so upset at the show waale Baba😭

😲 Haw! You paired Moniya with Chotu?🤣 OMG! Imagine Rowdy Rathore for a saala! Waise hi haalat kharaab rehti hai Chotu ki Chief ke saamne!😆

Yeh ACP Arjun "Khadoos" Rawte ko kya ho gaya hai?😕 He is moving all over the house matchmaking😆 Chalo!One love story is culminating in a sacred knot while others are getting on their rightful track!

Beautiful!👏

Waiting for the next installment!

Edited by -Carrie- - 12 years ago

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nakshatra92

@nakshatra92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#852

nice part...

arjun stood by his word...

finally annu said "yes" to sam...

arjun's dialogue : main hoon tumhare saath 😉

ARIYA bhi the... mom's planning something ...

update soon

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#853

Bhavna di
hugs
awesumwa
haye pvr parents
maine fb pe bta diya lol
ap chota cment
haye me mona ni hu lol
me payal par hu sis ok ;)
haye lov d convo btw anu n arjun
haila mona n chotu bole to motu robling
grt o o
my sam bro aww
yay lov it..!!

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#854

sorry for late comment,Bhavna tai..
it was truly awesome update...

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shruti

@shrutisweety

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Posted: 12 years ago

#855

Finially i ahve read all the parts diii 😛
they are fab i loved ur story concept 😃
oh than sameer was missing his best frnd arjun,so sweet of arjun sam ko gajar pasand hai issliye arjun ne unn teeno ko kaha wow great... loved sameer sister mona,she is so sweet..
.so riya's di has cancelled comeing to meet riya...riya is sooo upset...liked riya and rathord conversation...arjun ne sameer ko javab nahi diya awww...
flashback was amazing and superb and loved itt...
and shree,riya and chotu were gud and
rathod and arjun playing indrectily...awww lolzzz..
riya arjun se sikna chahati hai..kya baat hai ...
again they got new case ...and finialy riya's sis is coming
omg ye kya tha riya arjun ko samjne gayi...par ulta ho gaya ...arjun uss SYS kar diya...rathord ne annu ko pick karne gaye hai...kya baat hai their first meeting was gud...so he liked annu made laddo's...anni and rathord conversation was good..
so a new entry in ETF...so shree is latoo on her...
he asked coffee for her,...chotu and shree doesnt want to
disterb them so they did'nt go...
shree and navika were guddd
so shree bahana bana raha tha basket ball kel ke liye...
sameer understands it...chotu also teases him...
and finialy they had their practice...
and next day ariya also practicing and arjun is memorised by her beauty...wow slowly they are coming close...
and sameer is behaving wried...this is noticed by arjun...
so arjun and sameer meet in mandir...
for roshini's shraddh...and flashback was gud and emotional..
sameer and roshini's was gud,loved it...
so riya and annu searching mandir to celabrate their's dad shraddh...
so annu apne aap ko dosh manti hai...
riya samja samja kar taak gayi hai...
hooo sameer wants to take her shopping and
they planing for annu birthday and they going to have
lunch together... that's great...
arjun's and sameeer's conversation was amazing...
so arjun ko pata chal gaya hai...akir vo arjun hai...
so painful past of riya...feeling so sad ...
This part loved it ...so sameer and annu's shopping was gud
sindor scean was lovely...
finialy sameer ko ek saree pasand aagayi and leli ussne
and here arjun,chotu,shree,navika and riya conversation was awesome,...and navika and shree ki baat arjun ko pata chal gaya ...aur to aur riya aur arjun ki chup chup ke dekna inn 3no ko bi pata chal gaya...not bad haa...
loved the part...beach conversation was gud loved sameer and annu...so sameer wants her to move on in her life...and
party time was gud... all had great fun...
arjun and roshini conversation was gud and sameer taughts were bit emotional and annu taught also a bit emotional...and loved riya and annu conversation ...
ho to sameer irrtatedly annu se baat ki aur sab kuch sort out bi hogaya...loved the way thier conversation was...i loved sameer and annu... they were to sweet and riya also told her to move on in her life...sameer wants annu t to wear that saree in his mother's birthday paty...
awww all were teasing riya...even sameer also...
so funny haaa...
superb song diii...and ussmai bi update lik di aapne ...
hub enjoy kiya na sam and annu...
loved thier cute and sweet moments ...
so arjun is trying to connect dots...
with sam and arjun's conversation...
awww so cute riya is teasin annu...
shree,chotu,navika anr riya conversation was guddd.
sam and annu moments were gud
and arjun is consoling riya sooo sweet
loved itsoo lovely update
finialy shree propose navika and rathod proposed annu...
loved all the moments between sam and annu...
riya was teasing annu awww...
and she is restless abt shree told her ...
loved sam and his parents they are so sweet
Archana ki parents bana arjun ki parents
wat mona is chotu's 11.30 vali 😆
riya and arjun's moment were cute 😳
and finily in next update sam and annu will bi caught waiting for it
continue soon 🤗
and me really sorry for the late diii😳

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#856

super duper update di...!!

awesome...!!!

arjun's aii baba are perfect...!!!😉 love the character you chose...!!!

wow so sameer ne riya se baat kar li...!! taki annu phle aajaye.. but ye sab to phle se pre planned hai...!!!😉😆

aww ariya moments were very sweet...!!! the way he assured her and said mai hoon tumhare sath...!!!

hmm both ariya thinking about their talks😉 badia hai...!!!

wow so sam and arjun ki mom ko doubt ho hi gya dono pe...1!!!

omg... mona chottu ki 11 30 wali😲 bechara chottu...!!!😆 ab kon bachayga usse... and mona also likes him yayy... uff phone ki wrong timing...!!!😡

omg... ye dono kiaai ne kya plan bnaya h?😆

annu arjun convo was amazing...!!!!

hmm so he told her ki wo sam ki baat kar rha tha... and annu she said yes yayy...!!!

sam annu convo was lovely...!!! awww poor sam ko tease kiya...!!!!

can't wait to see sam's reaction😉

precap is very interesting...!!!

continue soon...!!!

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#857

Originally posted by: -sree13-
UNRES**

Loved Arjun's parents. Archana ki parents bana Arjun ki parents..lol 😃

okay back to story.
Oops!!! okies let me digest the thing first 😲 Mona is chotu's 11:30 wali & she has crush on him too!!! 😲 OMG I can only pray for chotu's bone 😆 🤣 let me curse on that wrong number caller, no sense of timing huh!! 🤢

Finaly Saas bahu official meeting. yayy..I told you sumanji is a detective. she exactly hit on the point of Anwesha being familiar with sameer's kitchen 😉 too good 👍🏼

Arjun Riya moment, know matter how small it is, always very special too me 😛 I cant help saying "awww" on Arjun's "main hoon tumhaare saath". 😳 when does Arjun gonna accept the fact that he is doing all these for Riya & her happiness?? I want sameer to knock some sense in his stubborn brain regarding his feeling 😊 & for Riya, trio hai na 😆

Arjun played a very smart game to bring out Anwesha's feeling. 👏 But I wish she should have been continue the tricky play to sameer some more times coz I was ROFLing badly imagining Sameers "Devdaas" Avtar 🤣 🤣 Never mind..love birds are together& thats exactly what i wished for 😳

Now when Arjun & Anwesha became friends so can I except some awesome Sameer-Anwesha-Arjun moments lik e it was before as Arjun-Roshni-Sameer???? 😳

And then I am waiting for plan of Senior lady cops who are busy making fulll proof plan to catch love birds red handed!! 😉 now thats gonna something realy awesome.

Now I am damn so excited for the party coz I sense it gonna get some dhamakas around every one's life..lets the party begins 🥳 🥳

And for you do I need to say it was awesome!!! 😉 You nailed it totaly in my Bhavna di style 👏 👏 😉 abhi jaldi se shuru karo next chapter likhna..your sis is being impatient. 😉 come soon with bang 🤗

p.s. not related to this but awesome avi. you made it finaly. congo 👏

Thanks dear 😊

Yes... I know ... boss ki chhoti behen se pyar karna bahut bada risk hai 😉

Ab dekho Mona-Chhotu ki story ka kya hota hai 😆😆

Suman ji ki nazar se kuch nahi bach sakta 😉

Ariya ki story mein time hai abhi

... wo totally mere style mein hogi ... uske liye thoda intezar karo...

Arjun aur Sam abhi bhi ek dusre ke itne close nahi aaye hain... isliye Arjun indirectly Sam par attack kar raha hai 😉

Tumne mere dil ki baat sun li ... yes... Arjun-Sam-Annu ke fun moments bhi honge ... 🤗

Ladies of the house are having a big plan... wait and watch 😉

And party to hogi hi rocking 😉

Thank again... yeah... finally meri avi ban hi gayi 😉

update coming soon 😊

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#858

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth
first of all...as i said u even earlier...u hav fab choices for charcters...

Arjun's mom dad...wow...typical marathi family...

now abt th update...

hayy...finally...sab kuch sort out hota dikh raha hai..

dat slight scene of arjun standing infront of HIS HOME (flat) touched directly my heart... i love these small emotional touches u give to th story...dat 42 sec required to read lines were amazing...

baki sab neeche...in my world famous separate comments...

PS: jaldi update karna...

Thank u dear 😊

haan... sab kuch line par aa raha hai 😊

Arjun's part - I really didn't have time to write his thoughts when he was standing there. But i'm planning to write it as on OS 😊

Update coming soon 😊

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#859

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth
hamare bade se Chotu...nd uski most awaiting 11.30 bje wali k liye ek spcl post to banta hai boss...

i cnt stop laughing like crazy after reading dat part..

ACP Sameer Rathod ki behen se ishq???...daring hai boss...

par bechare ko kuch pata bhi to nahi tha...

ab pata nbahi kya hoga hamare chotu ka...btw they would look a cute couple na...ek bada sa package..par Chotu...aur doosri...chota packet bada dhamaka...lolz...

th more chocking revealation ws dat even Mona has a crush on Chotu...??

WOW...!

😆😆😆😆😆

Ab Chhotu ka koi kya bigad sakta hai... jab ETF chief hi uska saala hai 😉😉

well... ur analysis is correct... bada sa Chhotu aur Chhote packet mein bada dhamaka... 😉😉😉

isiliye maine unki Jodi banayi 😃😃

Ab mai is pataofying mein time nahi waste karna chahti thi ... isliye Mona ka bhi uspar crush fit kar diya... 😉😉😉

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#860

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth
this one is for th most hatke cupid on th earth...ARJUN

th way u simply wrote every convo of Arjun vid diff people ws justifying his character nd image in our minds...nthng ws over th board...nd it ws all depicting his efforts for th strive for his best friends' life nd love...or say...love of life...

th way he 1st took in confidence Sam's mom nd thn his convo with Annu...beautifully written...

nd th best part ws hw he revealed to Annu abt Sam being th frnd of Arjun...he ws mentioning abt...ws awsm...

Well... as we discussed that day... Arjun cant all of a sudden go and start playing pranks with Sam 😉

So he had to do it indirectly 😉...

And I was hoping that this shouldn't be over the top... I have tried to make it simple...😳

Be it Arjun telling Suman or be it Arjun talking to Anwesha 😊

At the same time I couldn't make Arjun be serious all the time. Though he is haunted by his past, but he is now happy for his best friend. 🤗