ArHiSS:AnApateAffair#4,Ch21,Pg124,(19/07)COMPLETED - Page 40

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Posted: 12 years ago
You know I was surprised ke abhi tak K ko dedication kaise nahi mila. You res first on POL, haq banaofy on POL's Arnav yet K ka kahin ataa pata nahi?😲 But after this update, meri jaan mein jaan aa gayi😃 Aur ek cheez kar do abhi...make her change her mind about posting the chapters and continuing POL and RnS😭

Saiyu! Tum meri Anjali ka mazzak udaati ho aur apni Anjali ko bhool jaati ho! Wasn't Anjali playing her matching game and obsessing about gods in this chapter? now I'll mazak udaofy of your Anjali😆

Bechaara Shyam and his failed attempts. Villain ho toh bhi fail hota hai aur na ho toh bhi!

Of Mehendi ka rang and gehra pyaar; there couldn't have been a better analogy! Even my mehendi ka rang is 'dark', I only have to search the source of the genra rang😆

I have to give it to you for the Daayan walaa dialogue👏 But that only led to something that wasn't wanted...should I be worried or should I say humein aap pe bharosa hai?😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting. But will they call off the marriage ? Waiting for next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hehe, the most versatile and scientifically challenged villain in the history of television, our very own Snakewa!

And I love how simply you avoided another terrace MU situation :D Change in venue, eh?

But, in the show his failed plan led to their marriage. Yahaan toh ulta ho raha hai. 😲 Trouble in paradise!!

Ab kya hoga ??
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res for comment on Ch 18 ( Unres will be late, sorry!)

Edit:


This has to be the best dedication yet! 😆
To Shyam and his failed plans, indeed.

Lekin yahaan kya ho gaya, marriage is being called off?

I liked how you twisted that whole thing around and made the scene by the poolside, and A and K being a witness to Payash.

As always, loved the incorporation of the show's dialogues and moments!

This update showcased your strength, which is effortless humor. But there were moments of passion as well, and that made the rasams special.

I loved the whole thing, dammit!


P.S: Hope your writers block never returns!
Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Rasgulla,

Yeh kya ho gaya yaar. On their Mehendi..when they are just a day away from their wedding they decide to break up. I am having a headache here 😆 😆 😆

OMG Anjali and her poojas and vrats. Everything is nice in a limit no? The way she is going anyone would be scared.

Can't blame Khushi for misunderstanding. I hope Arnav and Khushi will take back what they said about their wedding and about not wanting to be with each other 😡

Pls cont soon...


P.S. Nice dedication on Shyaam. He was one nice villian 😉 😆

P.P.S I always like to read what you have to say about your friends. It's so nice to read and it's funny when you say nobody farak's me. We all farak you very much Rasgulla 🤗



Edited by melonie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow very rocking chapter indeed...cant wait to read next part...what gonna happen? interesting twist...so plz plz update soon...n thanku so much 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was so good. Maza aa gaya (not in the end though)
Shyam & his plans and Anjali & her solutions!! Ram Milaaye Jodi!!! 😆
He gave her job in inventory and she reached AR & joined as Arnav's P.A 😉
I loved when his plans failed.
My favorite is the Dhak-Dhak concept he gave to Khushi. It was him who gave her this tip of noticing if K's supposed friend's heartbeat gets increased in the proximity of that person. He told her so many things to get in her good books and it helped our Arnav-Khushi. That dhak-dhak concept later paved way for "Hamari dhadkan ek ho jaati hain"😳 How can I not thank Shyamu for this!!😆

Now coming to the update.
Anjali's poojas & vrats can freak out anyone, can't blame Shyam for lying to her. He wants to take an advantage over her Chotay for future. But it's not that easy.
The mehendi scene, I loved Arnav took her inside his oops their room, that saved her from facing Shyam's interrogation.
I loved the mehndi wale dialogues, dark color of mehndi, LG name, everything.
And I loved it more when you reversed the "Badtameezi to maine abhi shuru bhi nahi ki" dialogues.😃
Finally Aakash & Payal pakde gaye, red handed and here instead of interrogating them our lovebirds are fighting among themselves. huh..😲
Now what do you want SaiyyuJi?? You wanna hear their Sad RabbaVe kya 😭😭😭
Ab next update jaldi...




Edited by aquagal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ahh... so I thought I came back with a bang, unfortunately if you've realized, I left a comment about Chapter 16, and completely forgot to read Chapter 17, and then here I am jumping into Chapter 18. Does that even make sense??? Yupp, I have finally lost my mind!

Shyam is hilarious!! The poor guy's plan never fails to disappoint him! Although he claims to be the "baddest" bitch in the law firm, he is still a wuss when it comes to the Raizada clan.

"What needs to be done, tell me? Pooja path? Havan kund? Daan dakshana? Vrat..." This never gets old, does it??? Lmao. I am still surprise as to why Anjali never followed her calling, you know?? She was supposed to become a priest. It was just meant to be.

Ahh... I was waiting for their fight. I know, I know, it sounds weird. But they started off as a 'fake' marriage, and really fell for each other. And even though they have started flirting with each other and talking about love. That is still not satisfactory for a marriage, is it? I wanted them to realize their feelings for each other before marriage. I wanted them to accept their feelings.

Will Shyam finally know the truth behind this marriage, or is he still going to be left out of the loop?

This was a hilarious update! I thoroughly enjoyed it. I loved Arnav's blatant flirts, and quirky smirks.
Edited by aycma98 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wooww thanks for PMing me... just went through the last 3 chapters...

it is sooo good to relive the exceptionally good moments of IPKKND..

am loving every bit of this story..

thanks for penning it down..

But What The F**k was that in the end... they are fighting AGAIN.. and that too over the marriage thing.. 😲😕 and shyam heard it.. infact payal too...😲

oh god i m soo worried now.. what wud happen next...

pleease continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Dis was sooo cute..:)

Shyam tryin 2 no Arshi's truth..

Truth abt der relation..

1st attempt me Anjali was ready 2 do ol puja paaath..hawan n ol..:D

2nd n 3rd khud fail ho gae..:D

Bt d truth z cumin..

Is it?

,,

Sooo much of IPK!!

N i lov it..:)

Mere pyaar ko kisi proof ki zarurat nai h..

Really Arnav babua?

Kabse?

I mean..!!

Kal tak toh aap accept nai kr rae the k aap Khushiji se pyaar karte h..

N aaj ready 2 fyt 4 it?

..

Laal h..

Kya..

Hamaari mehndi..!!

Aapke pyaar ka proof..!!

Dt was cute/.

Khushi knows hw 2 get him..n d things done.!!

B it nethin..

Confession..dance..kiss..compliment..

Anything..:D

Endin!

OMG!!

Wt now?

Nuthin's gonna b wrong...dts right.

Payash..ne toh sab banta dhaar kr dia.

Romance krne k liye Arshi ki hi jageh mili..

Now jhelo Khuhsi ji ka gussa..

Daayan b 7 ghar chorh k..

Lol

Dialogue bas bulwa lo KKG se..!!

Dey r in lov..

N dey wud admit..

Unlyk Arnav who only loves 2 run away 4m his feelings..

Hope aaalll z welll..<3

:D

Loved d updte.:)

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😊

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